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  1. Moses synopsis advice attempt #2

    Here is my long synopsis, I am looking for ideas on what to trim down. Thanks so much for the help and advice. When Santa Fe New Mexico is...

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 02-27-2011 03:38 PM
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    02-27-2011, 07:15 PM Go to last post
  2. In the Shadows Query--4th attempt

    Hello. I hope this is better, and if you've read my previous attempts, please let me know if I am on the right track. Thanks for all your help so...

    Started by Stacy Scholz‎, 02-25-2011 09:35 AM
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    02-25-2011, 02:06 PM Go to last post
  3. Another Other Angle - QUERY:)

    Hi Friends, it's me again with hopefully a different query from the yawn fest ones I've previously posted. I tried to jump in with Phoenix and what...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-24-2011 05:59 PM
    • Replies: 7
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    02-25-2011, 10:35 AM Go to last post
  4. In the Shadows Query--3rd attempt

    My thanks to all those who have helped me so far. Here is the third revision. Please let me know your thoughts. IN THE SHADOWS: Patience Kell...

    Started by Stacy Scholz‎, 02-24-2011 07:48 AM
    • Replies: 5
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    02-25-2011, 09:38 AM Go to last post
  5. Another Lonely Day - 2nd Attempt

    First, thanks to everyone who commented on my first attempt - much appreciated. Here's my 2nd try. Hopefully it's better! Dear ???, Anne...

    Started by Jen Chatfield‎, 02-23-2011 10:21 AM
    • Replies: 8
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    02-24-2011, 12:54 PM Go to last post
  6. RIGHT! Totally different approach - 4get the mini synopsis!

    I have been looking at the idea of NOT telling the story as I cannot see how I can sum up my 'story' in 300 words. Instead, I have taken a really...

    Started by Satyrical Raven‎, 02-13-2011 01:24 AM
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    02-24-2011, 12:33 PM Go to last post
  7. In the Shadows Query--2nd attempt

    Hello everyone. I have revised and here it is. Let me know what you think. IN THE SHADOWS: When Patience Kell enters the Underrealm in search...

    Started by Stacy Scholz‎, 02-23-2011 01:39 PM
    • Replies: 1
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    02-23-2011, 03:19 PM Go to last post
  8. QUERY - Another Angle

    I'm trying, I swear to gosh I'm really trying. I've walked away from it, played with the kids, gone to the park, taken walks. I've left it alone. ...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-21-2011 12:49 PM
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    02-23-2011, 08:29 AM Go to last post
  9. Query Letter Help, please? :)

    Hello! I'm new to this site, and I'm trying to write a query letter for my manuscript. I would greatly appreciate it if any of you would like to help...

    Started by Natasha Rodriguez‎, 02-06-2011 08:59 AM
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    02-22-2011, 02:20 PM Go to last post
  10. Newbie - would love help with my query

    Dear AGENT, I hope you will be interested in my novel, ANOTHER LONELY DAY. Itís one thing when the man you think youíre in love with cleanly...

    Started by Jen Chatfield‎, 02-21-2011 01:54 PM
    • Replies: 6
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    02-22-2011, 01:42 PM Go to last post
  11. For your disection, toasting and roasting. Q + S

    Q Words 197 Dear Agent Mr/Mrs/Otherwise, Within hours of returning from a mission, Wulfgang von Wulf and his Special Operations team are...

    Started by Herman Munster‎, 02-13-2011 07:51 PM
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    02-21-2011, 11:53 PM Go to last post
  12. Synopsis PLEASE critique

    Looking for opinions on my following query letter, can anyone shoot me some advice? Attention: Joe Blow Thanks in advance for the consideration...

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 02-19-2011 01:48 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    02-20-2011, 11:10 PM Go to last post
  13. How to wirte a query when there are 2 MC?

    In my thriller I have two main characters. The first chapter has two scenes. My story opens with character A on a plane that is attacked by...

    Started by Kenneth Teicher‎, 02-19-2011 07:16 AM
    • Replies: 1
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    02-19-2011, 03:41 PM Go to last post
  14. Query Attempt #1000

    I've taken everyone's advice and tried to show who Chloe is, her conflict and what she must do. Is this on the right track or am I still going the...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-15-2011 07:21 AM
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    02-18-2011, 11:42 AM Go to last post
  15. Question concerning pages.

    I'm nowhere near being ready to query (ha), but (for future reference) when an agent asks for pages along with a query letter (let's say they want...

    Started by Delany Sierra Sierra‎, 02-15-2011 03:15 PM
    • Replies: 9
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    02-16-2011, 04:53 AM Go to last post
  16. Query = description on back of book?

    I know someone said "absolutely not". But I am reading the synopses, or whatever you may call them, online, for the Borders books, and a lot of them...

    Started by Bina Bear‎, 02-15-2011 12:30 PM
    • Replies: 8
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    02-15-2011, 06:21 PM Go to last post
  17. Not A QL - Just opening line /hook see what everyone thinks :)

    I Know I have haunted you'all to death with this one but I have been working on a few lines and this has been playing in my head and on paper for...

    Started by Satyrical Raven‎, 02-11-2011 12:53 PM
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    02-14-2011, 07:51 PM Go to last post
  18. Let's try again, shall we?

    At the risk of looking stupid: Dear Agent, Avery Rowan covets one thing more than even the lives of those about him: his humanity. And heíll do...

    Started by Delany Sierra Sierra‎, 02-07-2011 04:04 PM
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    02-13-2011, 03:45 PM Go to last post
  19. :(I suddenly just lost it all

    How can this happen? My brain is suddenly totally devoid of any of the ideas I had for either one of the three versions of my story. I may have...

    Started by Bina Bear‎, 02-13-2011 08:49 AM
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    02-13-2011, 08:49 AM Go to last post
  20. Proposal for NF again

    Hi my much imposed upon friends. I realize NF is not what most of you do, so I included a few of the questions they want answered after the initial...

    Started by Bina Bear‎, 02-12-2011 02:31 PM
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 2,425
    02-12-2011, 06:25 PM Go to last post

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