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  1. Some feedback please B)

    Post removed at Diane's request...

    Started by imported_Diane Theron‎, 04-12-2011 05:26 PM
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  2. My YA sci-fi query - TERRA. Critique appreciated!

    Hello everyone, Here's the query for my young-adult sci-fi novel, TERRA. Please critique it - queries are new to me and I'm doing my best to avoid...

    Started by Emily MacGowan‎, 04-16-2011 05:21 AM
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    04-18-2011, 12:50 AM Go to last post
  3. THE FINAL CLUE Please critique, 3x, I think this is a much better approach for my novel.

    Hello fellow writers. I would appreciate any input I can get. I'm so close to sending query's out as I finalize my final re-write. Gina Russo...

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 04-15-2011 07:25 PM
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    04-17-2011, 04:59 AM Go to last post
  4. 1st time query (please help)

    Okay, obviously Ive left off parts that I need no help with. I'd appreciate anyone's thoughts and confusions, or any other feed back. Thanks:) ...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 04-03-2011 07:09 PM
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    04-16-2011, 08:21 PM Go to last post
  5. To twist or not to twist?

    Hi, My first topic - and it's a little unusual. Instead of posting my query (yet), I've got a general question. If my novel has what I consider...

    Started by Emily MacGowan‎, 04-09-2011 10:43 PM
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    04-16-2011, 07:45 PM Go to last post
  6. Synopsis vs QL, what's the difference?

    I've been browsing through the sites of my top ten list and some of the agents seem to want synopsis at the same breath they are mentioning QL and...

    Started by Zoe Saadia‎, 04-13-2011 11:14 PM
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    04-15-2011, 02:02 PM Go to last post
  7. Please Critique query. Second Attempt after 1st critiques.

    This is my second attempt. I hope Iím getting closer to getting it right as I applied the 1st critiques. William Nicolas Mancuso, presumed dead,...

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 04-14-2011 07:33 AM
    • Replies: 6
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    04-15-2011, 11:26 AM Go to last post
  8. Moses polished query PLEASE critique

    Minus introductions Dear Joe Blow, I hope my query finds you well. In the world of Wall Street vs. Main Street, Noah fit somewhere between ďI...

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 04-13-2011 08:08 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    04-13-2011, 11:48 PM Go to last post
  9. How to Get An Agent

    Hello All! It's been about a hundred years since I've written on this site. But here we are again. The reason why I stopped writing here was because...

    Started by Richard Smiraldi‎, 04-04-2011 03:03 PM
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    04-12-2011, 10:10 PM Go to last post
  10. Please critique my query, I'm desperate for help, thanks

    William Nicolas Mancuso, whom is presumed dead, plans to exact revenge on Federal Agent Russo, whom he holds responsible for his younger brotherís...

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 04-09-2011 07:04 AM
    • Replies: 5
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    04-10-2011, 02:26 PM Go to last post
  11. Would you be so kind and critique my query, please?

    Thank you for looking. Obviously, I need some feedback on my query and will greatly appreciate any help I receive. I'm also unsure of what genre to...

    Started by Miranda Clementine‎, 03-25-2011 12:54 PM
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    04-09-2011, 10:39 PM Go to last post
  12. Query Help Please

    In 1665 London, Brimley openly criticizes King Charles II's heavy tax rule with his public writings. Though his treasonous words make him popular...

    Started by Tobias Garrett‎, 03-31-2011 09:42 AM
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    04-07-2011, 01:46 AM Go to last post
  13. QL Attempt #3 :S

    Please, have mercy is it still overwritten? I went around Leslee's one-liner, trying not to spoil it. Am I getting closer?:S "Toward the...

    Started by Zoe Saadia‎, 04-04-2011 05:18 AM
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    04-06-2011, 10:58 AM Go to last post
  14. MOSES new query attempt

    Excluding introductions and contact info. After an unprecedented political and military blunder, the US enters a new Depression era. The...

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 04-05-2011 10:41 PM
    • Replies: 3
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    04-06-2011, 09:14 AM Go to last post
  15. Synergy - Query Review

    This time I tried a more direct opening. I also tried to stay away from being too descriptive. Hope this makes a difference. Thanks for taking the...

    Started by Jordan Eddy‎, 03-29-2011 12:51 PM
    • Replies: 7
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    04-03-2011, 11:56 PM Go to last post
  16. Non-Fiction Query Help!

    Hi all, I am a new writer and so I'm sure that this query letter leaves much to be desired. Please do your worst! :) Thanks in advance. Dear...

    Started by Lloyd Walker‎, 04-01-2011 10:25 AM
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    04-02-2011, 01:01 PM Go to last post
  17. Ouery Attempt #2

    After the first attempt led to a thorough editing of the whole MS (all the advice and the critique, I've received, has turned out to be just...

    Started by Zoe Saadia‎, 03-29-2011 01:01 PM
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  18. Revised QL

    Let's see if this comes across any better: Vykiah's abusive mother took her from her father and fled across the country. When she finally got...

    Started by Lea Zalas‎, 03-28-2011 03:09 PM
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    03-30-2011, 04:18 PM Go to last post
  19. Query for feedback

    Any and all constructive critique is welcome! Thank you! ~DC Dear Awesome Agent,

    Started by DC Morin‎, 03-21-2011 08:17 PM
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    03-29-2011, 10:41 PM Go to last post
  20. Thoughts on Query

    You all were so very helpful when I posted my last query. I am hoping you'll take a look at another. It's my first attempt, so any comments are...

    Started by Jen Chatfield‎, 03-23-2011 01:05 PM
    • Replies: 7
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    03-29-2011, 09:11 AM Go to last post

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