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  1. Talking Question (profanity)

    Hi everyone. I want to use profanity in a query letter. I'd normally shy away from doing it, but the novel has graphic sex and language, and the...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 05-02-2011 07:53 PM
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    05-04-2011, 06:28 PM Go to last post
  2. I am seeking comments on my query letter and synopsis

    As I continue to refine my novel I have also begun work on my query letter and synopsis. I realize these are both not yet polished enough to send out...

    Started by Kenneth Teicher‎, 05-01-2011 06:48 AM
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    05-04-2011, 06:31 AM Go to last post
  3. A somewhat different approach (attempt #4:))

    Sorry I'm such a pest, and an obsessed pest at that. It seems I just can't put it aside for a while; this QL is haunting me 8-):D I was advised to...

    Started by Zoe Saadia‎, 04-08-2011 12:55 AM
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    05-03-2011, 11:40 PM Go to last post
  4. Switching publishers

    Hello fellow members Is it wise to publish all your works with the same publisher? Kindest Regards Thandi

    Started by Thandi Makhubela‎, 04-29-2011 09:55 PM
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    05-02-2011, 10:04 PM Go to last post
  5. test

    hello testing this out

    Started by cg admin‎, 04-25-2011 06:16 PM
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    04-29-2011, 08:03 PM Go to last post
  6. Third time lucky? YA query for Terra - YA scifi

    Hi everyone! Back for more! First, a huge thankyou to to advice so far. I've taken some gems from several people and tried to make it Ellie's (as...

    Started by Emily MacGowan‎, 04-19-2011 10:52 PM
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    04-28-2011, 01:34 PM Go to last post
  7. QUERY ADVICE: ERHISTAUT (YA fantasy)

    Any comments/suggestions would be greatly appreciated! Thank you so much, in advance :) Attn. Mr./ Mrs.: Heiren Delaire has no family. ...

    Started by imported_Stephanie Diaz‎, 04-24-2011 11:09 PM
    • Replies: 2
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    04-25-2011, 08:00 AM Go to last post
  8. A tale of two queries

    Hey guys. It's me again. For those who remember. I still haven't sent out any queries. Still revising and revising, but anyway I was...

    Started by The Tainted‎, 04-20-2011 05:40 AM
    • Replies: 8
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    04-24-2011, 11:37 AM Go to last post
  9. Query Hook for Beneficio Second Try!!

    Hello All! Here is my second attempt at a hook: When visions of himself from the past lead enigmatic entrepreneur, Skip Schmidt, to venture...

    Started by Kyle Cowman‎, 04-22-2011 02:51 PM
    • Replies: 6
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    04-23-2011, 11:14 PM Go to last post
  10. Okay, I did my best to wipe out the others. Is this any better??? Thanks to all of you helping me over and over again. The Final Clue

    I'm sorry my query's have been so bad. You are probably sick of me continuing to post them. But I feel my novel is worthy to fight for. Thank you for...

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 04-22-2011 09:12 AM
    • Replies: 7
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    04-23-2011, 07:12 AM Go to last post
  11. Crituque My Possible Query Letter for my YA novel Teeth:)-D

    *note this query does not contain ANY bio, agents name, nor info on the agent it is merely the body and the hook Query Letter for My YA Novel Teeth...

    Started by imported_Devon Thomas‎, 04-10-2011 06:30 AM
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    04-22-2011, 11:37 PM Go to last post
  12. I like this 3rd rewrite

    I've taken some more time to really think about this, and I realized I do better with less words. Let me know what you think. Heading in the right...

    Started by Lea Zalas‎, 03-31-2011 06:28 PM
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    04-22-2011, 07:01 PM Go to last post
  13. THE FINAL CLUE 4x Query Attempt. I appreciate any critique I can get. Thanks

    Hi again. Taking all the previous critique into consideration, I am working very hard at getting this right and greatly appreciate your help....

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 04-20-2011 10:18 AM
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    04-21-2011, 06:55 AM Go to last post
  14. Query Hook Critique Please!!

    Hello All! I'm new here and just completed my first novel, The Beneficio. I am trying to begin formulating my query letter (the genre is general...

    Started by Kyle Cowman‎, 04-19-2011 04:44 PM
    • Replies: 6
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    04-20-2011, 02:42 PM Go to last post
  15. Moses query attempt #? please critique

    Minus intriductions. I have included some notes in red (things I'm not sure I like all that much) Also please tell me what you think of the query...

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 04-18-2011 11:52 AM
    • Replies: 4
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    04-20-2011, 08:23 AM Go to last post
  16. QUERY and SYNOPSIS STRUCTURE

    It might be useful to have this in a separate thread for easy reference. Important Disclaimer: These are my ideas on the differences between...

    Started by Stan Miller‎, 01-04-2011 07:24 PM
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  17. Desert Rain 2nd attempt

    So, I have been at this for quite a few days now. I received wonderful advice from everyone here. With every reply I was able to change something for...

    Started by Miranda Clementine‎, 04-13-2011 11:41 AM
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    04-19-2011, 05:21 PM Go to last post
  18. Second Attempt - YA Query for TERRA.

    Hi everyone, A second post about my young-adult sci-fi novel, TERRA. I've come from a different angle here. From my previous query I was shown...

    Started by Emily MacGowan‎, 04-17-2011 08:35 PM
    • Replies: 9
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    04-19-2011, 05:01 PM Go to last post
  19. Query -- SUBSERVIA

    Hello All, Thanks in advance. Any and all feedback is welcomed and appreciated. Must. Get. This. Right. :)-D SUBSERVIA is a 90,000-word...

    Started by Adam Bentley‎, 04-05-2011 10:51 PM
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    04-19-2011, 04:26 PM Go to last post
  20. Moses query, PLEASE critique

    I have left out introductions. Please let me know what you think about the first part. After that I have some text in red and some in blue. I'm not...

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 04-09-2011 10:21 PM
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    04-19-2011, 10:23 AM Go to last post

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