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  1. Not A QL - Just opening line /hook see what everyone thinks :)

    I Know I have haunted you'all to death with this one but I have been working on a few lines and this has been playing in my head and on paper for...

    Started by Satyrical Raven‎, 02-11-2011 12:53 PM
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    02-14-2011, 07:51 PM Go to last post
  2. THE REDDER. Third Revision. Crossing fingers.

    Dear Agent Since she was six, Hazel Wolfe has heard a dark voice she attributed to schizophrenia, but now that voice is becoming all too real....

    Started by AinsleyRoss‎, 10-10-2016 11:00 PM
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    10-10-2016, 11:00 PM Go to last post
  3. Query Help Please

    In 1665 London, Brimley openly criticizes King Charles II's heavy tax rule with his public writings. Though his treasonous words make him popular...

    Started by Tobias Garrett‎, 03-31-2011 09:42 AM
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    04-07-2011, 01:46 AM Go to last post
  4. Query opinions

    I know this one could use some improvement, but I'm looking for some opinions here. Anything anyone has is appreciated... Thanks in advance.. ...

    Started by J D‎, 09-13-2011 09:47 AM
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    • Replies: 14
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    09-14-2011, 09:52 AM Go to last post
  5. LIVING IN SANITY 1st attempt query

    Any advice will be greatly appreciated. Please be brutally honest :). Specific Agent The Greatest Literary Agency Ever 101 I Want Your Book Ln....

    Started by Carolyn Arnold‎, 02-28-2011 03:56 PM
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    03-01-2011, 07:23 PM Go to last post
  6. In the shadows query--back for another

    Here is my sixth attempt. Would love your criticism! IN THE SHADOWS is a 110k word fantasy novel involving the Upperrealm (Earth as we know it)...

    Started by Stacy Scholz‎, 03-21-2011 11:38 AM
    • Replies: 4
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    03-23-2011, 11:57 AM Go to last post
  7. Mental Health Query Letter Question

    Hello: I write articles on how to deal with fear, anxiety and depression. I submit query letters to various mental health websites and...

    Started by StanPopovich(Author)‎, 02-19-2016 03:57 AM
    anxiety, depression, fear, mental health
    • Replies: 1
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    02-19-2016, 04:25 AM Go to last post
  8. Please critique my query, I'm desperate for help, thanks

    William Nicolas Mancuso, whom is presumed dead, plans to exact revenge on Federal Agent Russo, whom he holds responsible for his younger brotherís...

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 04-09-2011 07:04 AM
    • Replies: 5
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    04-10-2011, 02:26 PM Go to last post
  9. QUERY for YA Novel

    I already queried at least one hundred agents about this novel and most sent back rejection emails. I figured there was a problem with the query so I...

    Started by Dustin Wright‎, 06-22-2011 03:10 PM
    • Replies: 7
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    06-24-2011, 11:59 PM Go to last post
  10. One more try: non-fiction

    I took the advice I got and really scaled it down, moved some things around to hopefully make it sound more interesting. In the interest of keeping...

    Started by Bina Bear‎, 02-06-2011 01:22 AM
    • Replies: 5
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    02-06-2011, 04:15 PM Go to last post
  11. Question.

    Can I post a query letter on here for a children's story? I have never in my life wrote one before and want to submit a children's story I just did...

    Started by Margaret Compeau‎, 03-11-2011 10:44 AM
    • Replies: 4
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    03-11-2011, 08:24 PM Go to last post
  12. Query Critique: Awakening

    Deleted at OP's request.

    Started by Tanya Thibodeau‎, 06-23-2011 09:56 PM
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    08-02-2011, 07:34 AM Go to last post
  13. How to Get An Agent

    Hello All! It's been about a hundred years since I've written on this site. But here we are again. The reason why I stopped writing here was because...

    Started by Richard Smiraldi‎, 04-04-2011 03:03 PM
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    04-12-2011, 10:10 PM Go to last post
  14. Query Help.

    Please let me know what you think.. I am requesting permission to submit my fiction manuscript for your evaluation. The working title is, More...

    Started by Maribel Suggs‎, 08-29-2011 05:17 PM
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    08-30-2011, 04:36 PM Go to last post
  15. Another Lonely Day - 2nd Attempt

    First, thanks to everyone who commented on my first attempt - much appreciated. Here's my 2nd try. Hopefully it's better! Dear ???, Anne...

    Started by Jen Chatfield‎, 02-23-2011 10:21 AM
    • Replies: 8
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    02-24-2011, 12:54 PM Go to last post
  16. Round Three-Query for "Sharon World"

    I feel like its getting closer. This has been so much more frustrating then writing the book! Dear Agent, When home becomes a battlefield, with...

    Started by Joshua Frank‎, 09-14-2011 11:13 AM
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    09-14-2011, 04:17 PM Go to last post
  17. I am seeking comments on my query letter and synopsis

    As I continue to refine my novel I have also begun work on my query letter and synopsis. I realize these are both not yet polished enough to send out...

    Started by Kenneth Teicher‎, 05-01-2011 06:48 AM
    • Replies: 4
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    05-04-2011, 06:31 AM Go to last post
  18. Newbie

    Hey everyone out there just found this site been what I've been looking for? i want to write some of my experiences down see if there any good & find...

    Started by Barbie trahan‎, 06-28-2011 04:56 AM
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    07-01-2011, 05:01 PM Go to last post
  19. Desperately in need of query critique

    This is the meat of my query letter because I don't want to bore you with my limited credentials. Any help is greatly appreciated. A Nation...

    Started by Phocion‎, 01-21-2013 08:50 PM
    historical, query letter
    • Replies: 2
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    01-22-2013, 08:35 AM Go to last post
  20. More like a blurb, trying to shape into a Query Letter eventually

    Hello everyone, I have read through a few of the query letters posted here, and saw the archers lining up thereafter to let the arrows fly. I'd...

    Started by JupiterInRetrograde‎, 06-03-2014 04:39 PM
    • Replies: 0
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    06-03-2014, 04:39 PM Go to last post

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