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  1. Query Take 2

    I mostly rewrote the second paragraph for this. Probably needs to trim some of the wording a bit. Anyone want to take a stab at it? When...

    Started by Rogue Mutt‎, 10-25-2012 10:38 AM
    simon sucks
    • Replies: 4
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    04-03-2013, 12:19 PM Go to last post
  2. LIVING IN SANITY 1st attempt query

    Any advice will be greatly appreciated. Please be brutally honest :). Specific Agent The Greatest Literary Agency Ever 101 I Want Your Book Ln....

    Started by Carolyn Arnold‎, 02-28-2011 03:56 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 11
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    03-01-2011, 07:23 PM Go to last post
  3. Will a novel work if the main character is unlikeable?

    I was married three times and my last two husbands died. I want to write about these events but not as a grief story. The heroine (me) is a kind of...

    Started by Pines223‎, 04-26-2013 10:35 AM
    • Replies: 6
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    05-24-2013, 01:27 PM Go to last post
  4. One more try: non-fiction

    I took the advice I got and really scaled it down, moved some things around to hopefully make it sound more interesting. In the interest of keeping...

    Started by Bina Bear‎, 02-06-2011 01:22 AM
    • Replies: 5
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    02-06-2011, 04:15 PM Go to last post
  5. Another Lonely Day - 2nd Attempt

    First, thanks to everyone who commented on my first attempt - much appreciated. Here's my 2nd try. Hopefully it's better! Dear ???, Anne...

    Started by Jen Chatfield‎, 02-23-2011 10:21 AM
    • Replies: 8
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    02-24-2011, 12:54 PM Go to last post
  6. Red face query letter problem

    Hi all. I'm just getting ready to send off my query letter. This particular agency requests a QL, first 5 pages of the novel, and a synopsis...in...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 10-10-2011 09:29 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 16
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    10-13-2011, 12:02 AM Go to last post
  7. 2nd attempt for Betrayal Query - Any feedback will be appreciated.

    Here is my second attempt at a query. Any feedback will be greatly appreciated. Thank you. The fire cocktail breaking Ashlyn Shea's window has...

    Started by Michele Bass‎, 07-17-2011 03:24 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    07-23-2011, 08:39 PM Go to last post
  8. Query letter biography

    Hi Guys. I have a quick question. I'm considering writing the biography part of my query in third person, like you'd find on a book jacket... you...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 10-04-2011 06:14 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 10
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    10-05-2011, 05:06 PM Go to last post
  9. Funny Query Letters

    Started by Sophie‎, 05-21-2012 11:04 PM
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    05-21-2012, 11:04 PM Go to last post
  10. QUERY CRITIQUE - again

    Here is the latest query I've done after the wonderful feedback from you guys on here. Thank you for getting me this far. If there are glaring...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 03-06-2011 05:29 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 12
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    03-07-2011, 12:38 PM Go to last post
  11. Query Help.

    Please let me know what you think.. I am requesting permission to submit my fiction manuscript for your evaluation. The working title is, More...

    Started by Maribel Suggs‎, 08-29-2011 04:17 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 10
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    08-30-2011, 03:36 PM Go to last post
  12. Query Help Please

    In 1665 London, Brimley openly criticizes King Charles II's heavy tax rule with his public writings. Though his treasonous words make him popular...

    Started by Tobias Garrett‎, 03-31-2011 08:42 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 11
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    04-07-2011, 12:46 AM Go to last post
  13. Query Critique: Awakening

    Deleted at OP's request.

    Started by Tanya Thibodeau‎, 06-23-2011 08:56 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 16
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    08-02-2011, 06:34 AM Go to last post
  14. Not A QL - Just opening line /hook see what everyone thinks :)

    I Know I have haunted you'all to death with this one but I have been working on a few lines and this has been playing in my head and on paper for...

    Started by Satyrical Raven‎, 02-11-2011 12:53 PM
    3 Pages
    1 2 3
    • Replies: 27
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    02-14-2011, 07:51 PM Go to last post
  15. Mental Health Query Letter Question

    Hello: I write articles on how to deal with fear, anxiety and depression. I submit query letters to various mental health websites and...

    Started by StanPopovich(Author)‎, 02-19-2016 03:57 AM
    anxiety, depression, fear, mental health
    • Replies: 1
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    02-19-2016, 04:25 AM Go to last post
  16. How to Get An Agent

    Hello All! It's been about a hundred years since I've written on this site. But here we are again. The reason why I stopped writing here was because...

    Started by Richard Smiraldi‎, 04-04-2011 02:03 PM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 16
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    04-12-2011, 09:10 PM Go to last post
  17. Suite101

    I see that there are about four pages of forum members that write for Suite101. I just recently starting writing articles for them, but I want to...

    Started by Thomas Matthews‎, 05-07-2011 06:51 PM
    • Replies: 7
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    05-17-2011, 04:12 AM Go to last post
  18. Desperately in need of query critique

    This is the meat of my query letter because I don't want to bore you with my limited credentials. Any help is greatly appreciated. A Nation...

    Started by Phocion‎, 01-21-2013 08:50 PM
    historical, query letter
    • Replies: 2
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    01-22-2013, 08:35 AM Go to last post
  19. Newbie

    Hey everyone out there just found this site been what I've been looking for? i want to write some of my experiences down see if there any good & find...

    Started by Barbie trahan‎, 06-28-2011 03:56 AM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 10
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    07-01-2011, 04:01 PM Go to last post
  20. Talking Revised QL, second attempt. Please help.

    Hi guys. Obviously, I skipped the intro again. Thanks to all that comment. It's greatly appreciated. The first two sentences are supposed to be...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 05-08-2011 04:21 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 14
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    05-09-2011, 09:57 PM Go to last post

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