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  1. Please critique my query, I'm desperate for help, thanks

    William Nicolas Mancuso, whom is presumed dead, plans to exact revenge on Federal Agent Russo, whom he holds responsible for his younger brotherís...

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 04-09-2011 06:04 AM
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    04-10-2011, 01:26 PM Go to last post
  2. I welcome any critique for my query attempt again THE FINAL CLUE

    Hi everyone, I promise this is my last one for awhile. I just want to put it out there in hopes I've improved some from my previous query's. I'm in...

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 06-17-2011 02:28 PM
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    06-18-2011, 01:02 PM Go to last post
  3. Mental Health Query Letter Question

    Hello: I write articles on how to deal with fear, anxiety and depression. I submit query letters to various mental health websites and...

    Started by StanPopovich(Author)‎, 02-19-2016 03:57 AM
    anxiety, depression, fear, mental health
    • Replies: 1
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    02-19-2016, 04:25 AM Go to last post
  4. non-fiction query

    I enjoyed the bites of the Query Shark. But, alas, she does not do nonfiction queries. I read whole books on the subject - Noah Lukeman’s How to...

    Started by cabbage‎, 01-10-2013 02:15 AM
    • Replies: 8
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    01-20-2013, 04:47 AM Go to last post
  5. First attempt at query.

    Hi, I could use suggestions on how to improve this query. Thanks in advance for any assistance you can give me. Dear Agent, Saying...

    Started by n.p.doeleman‎, 03-13-2012 12:26 PM
    • Replies: 9
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    03-18-2012, 12:24 PM Go to last post
  6. Hi everyone, it's been a while since I attempted my query again for THE FINAL CLUE

    Between taking care of my father and work, I haven't had much time to play with my query. My father is doing a little better right now, thank God, so...

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 03-20-2012 04:00 AM
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    • Replies: 12
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    04-27-2012, 05:56 AM Go to last post
  7. LIVING IN SANITY 1st attempt query

    Any advice will be greatly appreciated. Please be brutally honest :). Specific Agent The Greatest Literary Agency Ever 101 I Want Your Book Ln....

    Started by Carolyn Arnold‎, 02-28-2011 03:56 PM
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    • Replies: 11
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    03-01-2011, 07:23 PM Go to last post
  8. Query Take 2

    I mostly rewrote the second paragraph for this. Probably needs to trim some of the wording a bit. Anyone want to take a stab at it? When...

    Started by Rogue Mutt‎, 10-25-2012 10:38 AM
    simon sucks
    • Replies: 4
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    04-03-2013, 12:19 PM Go to last post
  9. Thanks for your feedback. I reconstructed the query and I hope this is improved.

    Based on the feedback I've received and I thank you all for that. I considered it all and here is the updated version. I appreciate your input as...

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 11-24-2011 11:48 AM
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    11-26-2011, 10:15 AM Go to last post
  10. One more try: non-fiction

    I took the advice I got and really scaled it down, moved some things around to hopefully make it sound more interesting. In the interest of keeping...

    Started by Bina Bear‎, 02-06-2011 01:22 AM
    • Replies: 5
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    02-06-2011, 04:15 PM Go to last post
  11. Red face query letter problem

    Hi all. I'm just getting ready to send off my query letter. This particular agency requests a QL, first 5 pages of the novel, and a synopsis...in...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 10-10-2011 09:29 PM
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    10-13-2011, 12:02 AM Go to last post
  12. Query Critique: Awakening

    Deleted at OP's request.

    Started by Tanya Thibodeau‎, 06-23-2011 08:56 PM
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    • Replies: 16
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    08-02-2011, 06:34 AM Go to last post
  13. Query letter biography

    Hi Guys. I have a quick question. I'm considering writing the biography part of my query in third person, like you'd find on a book jacket... you...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 10-04-2011 06:14 PM
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    • Replies: 10
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    10-05-2011, 05:06 PM Go to last post
  14. Not A QL - Just opening line /hook see what everyone thinks :)

    I Know I have haunted you'all to death with this one but I have been working on a few lines and this has been playing in my head and on paper for...

    Started by Satyrical Raven‎, 02-11-2011 12:53 PM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 27
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    02-14-2011, 07:51 PM Go to last post
  15. Query Help Please

    In 1665 London, Brimley openly criticizes King Charles II's heavy tax rule with his public writings. Though his treasonous words make him popular...

    Started by Tobias Garrett‎, 03-31-2011 08:42 AM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 11
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    04-07-2011, 12:46 AM Go to last post
  16. Funny Query Letters

    Started by Sophie‎, 05-21-2012 11:04 PM
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    05-21-2012, 11:04 PM Go to last post
  17. Query Help.

    Please let me know what you think.. I am requesting permission to submit my fiction manuscript for your evaluation. The working title is, More...

    Started by Maribel Suggs‎, 08-29-2011 04:17 PM
    2 Pages
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    08-30-2011, 03:36 PM Go to last post
  18. QUERY CRITIQUE - again

    Here is the latest query I've done after the wonderful feedback from you guys on here. Thank you for getting me this far. If there are glaring...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 03-06-2011 05:29 AM
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    03-07-2011, 12:38 PM Go to last post
  19. How to Get An Agent

    Hello All! It's been about a hundred years since I've written on this site. But here we are again. The reason why I stopped writing here was because...

    Started by Richard Smiraldi‎, 04-04-2011 02:03 PM
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    04-12-2011, 09:10 PM Go to last post
  20. Query opinions

    I know this one could use some improvement, but I'm looking for some opinions here. Anything anyone has is appreciated... Thanks in advance.. ...

    Started by J D‎, 09-13-2011 08:47 AM
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    • Replies: 14
    • Views: 2,586
    09-14-2011, 08:52 AM Go to last post

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