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  1. Query Hook Critique Please!!

    Hello All! I'm new here and just completed my first novel, The Beneficio. I am trying to begin formulating my query letter (the genre is general...

    Started by Kyle Cowman‎, 04-19-2011 03:44 PM
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    04-20-2011, 01:42 PM Go to last post
  2. Query Hook for Beneficio Second Try!!

    Hello All! Here is my second attempt at a hook: When visions of himself from the past lead enigmatic entrepreneur, Skip Schmidt, to venture...

    Started by Kyle Cowman‎, 04-22-2011 01:51 PM
    • Replies: 6
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    04-23-2011, 10:14 PM Go to last post
  3. Query Letter

    This is my first attempt at writing a query. Constructive criticism and suggestions appreciated. Dear , Lil Harper is grief-stricken following...

    Started by tjm‎, 03-09-2015 08:36 AM
    • Replies: 2
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    03-09-2015, 08:50 AM Go to last post
  4. Talking Query letter (third try lol). Please critique.

    Thanks in advance to anyone who responds. Okay, obviously I've left out the Dear Agent etc. The REAL QL is in the next post..still can't figure...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 05-10-2011 10:37 PM
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    05-18-2011, 11:54 PM Go to last post
  5. Query Letter - 3rd Draft

    Dear Agent, The moon looms overhead as Jake Steen shoves another silver bolt into his crossbow and carefully watches the werewolf shrink and...

    Started by Chris W‎, 09-03-2011 08:17 AM
    • Replies: 9
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    09-05-2011, 06:40 AM Go to last post
  6. Query Letter - Contemp Romance

    I've gotten such great feedback from you guys in the past - now I'm back for more. I'd love to hear some opinions/suggestions on my query. After...

    Started by Jen Chatfield‎, 08-04-2011 09:54 AM
    • Replies: 0
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    08-04-2011, 09:54 AM Go to last post
  7. Query letter biography

    Hi Guys. I have a quick question. I'm considering writing the biography part of my query in third person, like you'd find on a book jacket... you...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 10-04-2011 06:14 PM
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    • Replies: 10
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    10-05-2011, 05:06 PM Go to last post
  8. Query Letter Critique

    I am seeking representation for my new thriller novel, “Insane Jane”. The finished manuscript has 51,428 words. I am currently working on the...

    Started by Rook‎, 07-28-2016 01:40 AM
    • Replies: 4
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    07-28-2016, 04:36 AM Go to last post
  9. query letter critique

    Novel Set over four weeks in the brutal winter of 1954, Father Briar and the Angel Marceline is an historical romance unlike any other. When a...

    Started by regina‎, 06-23-2016 11:29 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    06-24-2016, 10:05 PM Go to last post
  10. query letter critique

    Seattle native Marcy Donaldson didn’t expect to find the man of her dreams at church. And she certainly didn’t expect to find him behind the pulpit. ...

    Started by regina‎, 07-07-2016 12:49 AM
    • Replies: 3
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    07-07-2016, 06:36 PM Go to last post
  11. Query Letter Critique, 2nd draft

    Thanks guys for all your help. here' s a 2nd go around, hopefully this one is better than the first!. For the past three years, money, expensive...

    Started by David Balzarini‎, 08-14-2011 01:28 AM
    • Replies: 7
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    08-18-2011, 07:31 AM Go to last post
  12. Query Letter Critique, Please - YA Novel

    Hi, Everyone! I'm new to the forums, but I've really enjoyed them so far. It's obvious there is a lot of valuable feedback available. So, thanks...

    Started by Shannon Hubbard‎, 01-16-2011 10:02 AM
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    01-30-2011, 07:34 AM Go to last post
  13. Query Letter Feedback

    Query Letter Feedback Hello forum members. I just joined and am so excited to discover this site. I just finished my first book and wrote a...

    Started by Joshua Frank‎, 09-10-2011 04:58 AM
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    09-10-2011, 07:30 AM Go to last post
  14. Query Letter for fiction

    It seems a little long. I'm not sure if I should cut the professor. He's one of three main characters whose stories intertwine. The entire query,...

    Started by Reade‎, 03-12-2012 03:13 PM
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    • Replies: 17
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    03-18-2012, 11:38 AM Go to last post
  15. Query letter for PRINCE OF SLAVES

    I have been through multiple revisions with this query, but there's always room for another round (and another, and another) I'm posting two...

    Started by Cez‎, 08-30-2016 01:54 PM
    fantasy, medieval, ya fiction
    • Replies: 4
    • Views: 7,129
    08-31-2016, 02:02 PM Go to last post
  16. Query letter for unconventional project--critiques please!

    Some of you might have seen my post asking about the feasibility of submitting a book of three related novellas to agents. From responses here, other...

    Started by larkenfoam‎, 02-18-2013 07:22 PM
    • Replies: 1
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    02-26-2013, 08:29 AM Go to last post
  17. Query Letter help

    It needs major work done to it. Help? Hello, I am seeking representation for my novel, MONSTER'S WORLD. The genres it includes range from...

    Started by blacknailz‎, 08-28-2012 08:01 PM
    • Replies: 7
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    08-31-2012, 08:51 AM Go to last post
  18. Query Letter Help

    Dear Agent, I would like to offer a semi-autobiographical novel for your consideration. With Ivy League dreams and a unique naivety, Justin and...

    Started by samuel‎, 10-09-2012 11:46 AM
    • Replies: 2
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    10-10-2012, 01:43 PM Go to last post
  19. Query Letter Help (Criticism Appreciated)

    This query did not make it to the second round of the amazon novel writing contest. Have I written something nobody would be interested or is this...

    Started by samuel‎, 02-13-2013 10:04 AM
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 1,866
    02-13-2013, 07:20 PM Go to last post
  20. Query Letter Help, please? :)

    Hello! I'm new to this site, and I'm trying to write a query letter for my manuscript. I would greatly appreciate it if any of you would like to help...

    Started by Natasha Rodriguez‎, 02-06-2011 08:59 AM
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    02-22-2011, 02:20 PM Go to last post

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