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  1. Query Letter: Keep Faith

    Hello Everyone! Hope everyone is doing well :). Below is one of the query letters I've written for my realistic young adult story, Keep Faith. ...

    Started by kpgazelle‎, 08-08-2014 05:20 PM
    • Replies: 2
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    08-09-2014, 07:29 PM Go to last post
  2. Query Letter: Leap Forward

    Hey! This is the second query letter that I mentioned earlier. In this query I try out the name Leap Forward instead of Keep Faith. It's the...

    Started by kpgazelle‎, 08-10-2014 10:08 AM
    • Replies: 7
    • Views: 6,694
    12-20-2014, 03:30 PM Go to last post
  3. This query has worked a couple times, but...

    I'd like to know where I could "beef it up." It seems I have the hardest time writing cover letters and the synopsis of my novel. I think I get too...

    Started by Kyle Anderson‎, 09-27-2011 05:17 PM
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    • Replies: 11
    • Views: 3,068
    10-04-2011, 03:35 PM Go to last post
  4. Query Hook for Beneficio Second Try!!

    Hello All! Here is my second attempt at a hook: When visions of himself from the past lead enigmatic entrepreneur, Skip Schmidt, to venture...

    Started by Kyle Cowman‎, 04-22-2011 02:51 PM
    • Replies: 6
    • Views: 1,031
    04-23-2011, 11:14 PM Go to last post
  5. Query Hook Critique Please!!

    Hello All! I'm new here and just completed my first novel, The Beneficio. I am trying to begin formulating my query letter (the genre is general...

    Started by Kyle Cowman‎, 04-19-2011 04:44 PM
    • Replies: 6
    • Views: 2,127
    04-20-2011, 02:42 PM Go to last post
  6. Question Could someone help me? (Calling all South Dakota Novelists!!)

    So here's the deal, I'm a student writer who is working on her Senior Project but I have a small dilemma. I cannot find anyone in South Dakota to be...

    Started by Kyleesha Boeding‎, 05-25-2011 04:47 PM
    help please
    • Replies: 4
    • Views: 3,086
    05-25-2011, 09:02 PM Go to last post
  7. Query Critique - Literary Fiction

    Hello All, I would love some feedback on my query letter. I've been testing the waters with some agents but have a nagging feeling that I need...

    Started by L A‎, 09-21-2011 09:58 AM
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    • Replies: 15
    • Views: 2,787
    09-28-2011, 07:22 PM Go to last post
  8. Query letter for unconventional project--critiques please!

    Some of you might have seen my post asking about the feasibility of submitting a book of three related novellas to agents. From responses here, other...

    Started by larkenfoam‎, 02-18-2013 07:22 PM
    • Replies: 1
    • Views: 2,342
    02-26-2013, 08:29 AM Go to last post
  9. Query Help. Please

    Hey, I'm new to this forum but I would really appreciate any advice on this query, or ways to improve it. Please let me know what you think... Thank...

    Started by Laura-Ashley Fitzgerald‎, 08-30-2011 08:43 AM
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 1,821
    09-16-2011, 08:30 AM Go to last post
  10. YA Query Draft

    No need to spend a lot of time on this -- just interested in first impressions: When everybody 15-year-old Tessie McVie hangs with looks at a...

    Started by Lawrence Tabak‎, 03-16-2013 05:42 PM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 2,548
    03-18-2013, 07:44 AM Go to last post
  11. I like this 3rd rewrite

    I've taken some more time to really think about this, and I realized I do better with less words. Let me know what you think. Heading in the right...

    Started by Lea Zalas‎, 03-31-2011 06:28 PM
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    • Replies: 29
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    04-22-2011, 07:01 PM Go to last post
  12. Revised QL

    Let's see if this comes across any better: Vykiah's abusive mother took her from her father and fled across the country. When she finally got...

    Started by Lea Zalas‎, 03-28-2011 03:09 PM
    • Replies: 7
    • Views: 1,628
    03-30-2011, 04:18 PM Go to last post
  13. Here's your chance for retribution

    Just a forewarning, this story does have a little bit of a kink factor to it. Lord knows, I've done my share of dismembering and flaying alive of...

    Started by Lea Zalas‎, 03-24-2011 06:21 PM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 19
    • Views: 3,901
    03-25-2011, 08:18 PM Go to last post
  14. Marriage Trap

    'my recently completed novel' Jeez! Everytime I see this phrase in a posted query, I immediately know that person has NOT read any of the advice...

    Started by Lea Zalas‎, 01-31-2012 02:14 PM
    • Replies: 8
    • Views: 1,599
    01-31-2012, 10:17 PM Go to last post
  15. Critics welcome

    Sorry about the asterisks. The IPad seems to force them in. Republican Aftermath Daniel Prescott hates the Republican Party. As a retired...

    Started by Liberal‎, 07-14-2012 12:35 PM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 29
    • Views: 6,749
    07-24-2012, 07:03 PM Go to last post
  16. Non-Fiction Query Help!

    Hi all, I am a new writer and so I'm sure that this query letter leaves much to be desired. Please do your worst! :) Thanks in advance. Dear...

    Started by Lloyd Walker‎, 04-01-2011 10:25 AM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 13
    • Views: 2,261
    04-02-2011, 01:01 PM Go to last post
  17. Query Critique - Middle Grade/Fantasy

    Hello All. After almost a year-long hiatus, I've decided to have my Query Letter reviewed again. As always, any comment is much appreciated. ...

    Started by Lyle Ven‎, 02-15-2012 12:18 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 10
    • Views: 2,844
    02-24-2012, 12:12 PM Go to last post
  18. critique my query letter?

    Hi all -- help is much appreciated. ~ = redacted Dear *agent*: My name is ~. I'm writing to query my completed 70,000 word novel...

    Started by M.S.B. Jeep‎, 08-09-2011 01:16 PM
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    • Replies: 47
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    08-10-2011, 06:03 PM Go to last post
  19. help me with query letter?

    help is appreciated! (redid it from before) Dear Agent: When the mind is too open, it gets an infection. The Mad Monks is a character study of...

    Started by M.S.B. Jeep‎, 08-10-2011 11:45 AM
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    • Replies: 22
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    08-12-2011, 01:49 PM Go to last post
  20. Wink Query: DEVIANT (YA urban fantasy)

    This is a heavily revised query. I've gotten advice from professionals at Writer's Digest and other forums around the web. I'm querying soon and I...

    Started by Marc Ezra‎, 12-01-2013 07:28 PM
    fantasy, fiction, urban fantasy, young adult
    • Replies: 4
    • Views: 3,314
    12-02-2013, 12:49 PM Go to last post

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