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  1. Post Query help needed! All feedback welcome! Unicorn Wars

    Hi, I am so new to this. I tried to follow some guidelines I read. Any feedback is readily welcome! The title of my story is the...

    Started by Amee Hagler‎, 09-15-2011 06:57 PM
    • Replies: 7
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    09-18-2011, 12:30 AM Go to last post
  2. Advise for 1st query letter

    This is my very 1st query letter written for my first novel, THE SECERT TO A GOOD MAN. I'm really unsure of what lit. agents are looking for in...

    Started by Ty Waller‎, 09-16-2011 11:25 AM
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    09-18-2011, 04:41 PM Go to last post
  3. Querry, 6th attempt

    Dear Agent, I would sit Indian style by the curb outside as my parents screamed at each other in the house, but after the divorce, I became the...

    Started by Joshua Frank‎, 09-17-2011 07:00 AM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 1,147
    09-20-2011, 09:27 AM Go to last post
  4. Query- Attempt # 7

    My wife tells me that the number of grey hairs on my head has tripled since I started the query letter writing process. Oh well, here goes nothing......

    Started by Joshua Frank‎, 09-20-2011 09:42 AM
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    • Replies: 53
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    09-21-2011, 01:57 PM Go to last post
  5. Query Critique - Literary Fiction

    Hello All, I would love some feedback on my query letter. I've been testing the waters with some agents but have a nagging feeling that I need...

    Started by L A‎, 09-21-2011 09:58 AM
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    • Replies: 15
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    09-28-2011, 07:22 PM Go to last post
  6. This query has worked a couple times, but...

    I'd like to know where I could "beef it up." It seems I have the hardest time writing cover letters and the synopsis of my novel. I think I get too...

    Started by Kyle Anderson‎, 09-27-2011 05:17 PM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 11
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    10-04-2011, 03:35 PM Go to last post
  7. Query letter biography

    Hi Guys. I have a quick question. I'm considering writing the biography part of my query in third person, like you'd find on a book jacket... you...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 10-04-2011 07:14 PM
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    • Replies: 10
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    10-05-2011, 06:06 PM Go to last post
  8. Red face query letter problem

    Hi all. I'm just getting ready to send off my query letter. This particular agency requests a QL, first 5 pages of the novel, and a synopsis...in...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 10-10-2011 10:29 PM
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    • Replies: 16
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    10-13-2011, 01:02 AM Go to last post
  9. Query: POPULATION DECLINED

    This has been revised already. I posted to another forum and it was critiqued and i reposted and seemed to get good feedback. I would like to hear...

    Started by Elisa Pullins‎, 09-03-2011 06:51 PM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 1,544
    10-14-2011, 10:39 PM Go to last post
  10. Wink i need an opinion on my Query Letter. Plz Help:)

    Query Letter for My YA Novel Beautiful Disaster Dear Mr. Agent Someone's fallen for her. Someone else wants her dead. For Chloe Van Cleef, falling...

    Started by Devon Thomas‎, 10-15-2011 08:24 AM
    agent, paranormal, query, young adult
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 1,156
    10-15-2011, 02:12 PM Go to last post
  11. Unhappy Please give opinion on query letter

    Yeah, it's probably worse than last time. Vague. Uninteresting. Blah. I've reached a lethargic state where I all I want is to ditch this and work on...

    Started by Delany Sierra Sierra‎, 10-14-2011 09:53 PM
    • Replies: 4
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    10-15-2011, 02:40 PM Go to last post
  12. Revision--for YA query

    Thanks for all the help so far! You've been great. Here's my revision--hopefully I'm whittling this down into something that doesn't, you know,...

    Started by Carrie Graves‎, 10-15-2011 09:35 AM
    • Replies: 5
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    10-28-2011, 08:48 PM Go to last post
  13. Query for Hellish

    How does my query sound? Please give me the good and the bad. Dear , Ask anyone about 16 year-old Krista Beakly and they will tell you that...

    Started by Dustin Wright‎, 10-28-2011 08:54 PM
    • Replies: 2
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    10-28-2011, 09:55 PM Go to last post
  14. Smile Is this query good?

    Dear Mr./ Mrs. Agent/Editor's Last Name Someone's fallen in love with her. Someone else wantsd her dead because of it. Chloe Van Cleef sees...

    Started by Devon Thomas‎, 11-12-2011 06:51 AM
    3 Pages
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    query letter, young adult
    • Replies: 24
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    11-14-2011, 10:13 AM Go to last post
  15. Query critique for THE FINAL CLUE

    Hello everyone, it's been awhile since I've posted a revision for my query. As alway's, I welcome all and any critique. Thank you in advance for your...

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 11-16-2011 08:57 AM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 1,326
    11-18-2011, 10:09 AM Go to last post
  16. Please let me know if this is more the direction I need to focus on in the query.

    Leslee and Cindy, Thank you both for your input. I am going to make one more attempt toward getting on the right track to improve my query before I...

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 11-18-2011 11:12 AM
    • Replies: 7
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    11-24-2011, 05:05 AM Go to last post
  17. Thanks for your feedback. I reconstructed the query and I hope this is improved.

    Based on the feedback I've received and I thank you all for that. I considered it all and here is the updated version. I appreciate your input as...

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 11-24-2011 11:48 AM
    • Replies: 5
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    11-26-2011, 10:15 AM Go to last post
  18. Revision for Hellish query

    Please give me the good and the bad on this query. Dear , Sixteen year-old Krista Beakly is having sex with an abnormally muscular bad boy,...

    Started by Dustin Wright‎, 12-04-2011 10:10 PM
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    • Replies: 16
    • Views: 3,700
    12-05-2011, 09:49 PM Go to last post
  19. Revision for THE FINAL CLUE

    It's been a rough couple of weeks, my dad was diagnosed with brain tumor, a spot on his lung and liver. He started radiation treatment today. I...

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 12-07-2011 06:18 PM
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 673
    12-08-2011, 05:06 AM Go to last post
  20. Happy New Year everyone. My resolution is to get my darn query right. I revised again

    I'm determined to get it right. I respect and value your input and would appreciate any help I can get. Thanks again. Cheryl FBI agent Gina...

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 01-01-2012 05:09 PM
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    • Replies: 29
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    01-08-2012, 04:15 PM Go to last post

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