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  1. Rise of the South By: Mark Raines

    A Socialist society is being forced by the United States White House Administration. President Salman Usama has promised to “fundamentally transform...

    Started by Mark Raines‎, 02-23-2013 08:30 PM
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    03-01-2013, 01:53 PM Go to last post
  2. Query: Lucky

    Now that I've completed the conversion of the story from third-person to first-person (along with upgrading the operating system on my computer in...

    Started by Gilfindel‎, 06-10-2013 08:09 PM
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    • Replies: 45
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    07-13-2013, 01:44 PM Go to last post
  3. Death has a Daughter Query help

    Dear Agent: Some call them the angels of death. Cendall prefers reaper, but if you want to be technical you can throw the word grim in front of...

    Started by candygirlraupp‎, 10-24-2013 06:46 PM
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    • Replies: 35
    • Views: 30,182
    11-11-2013, 05:56 AM Go to last post
  4. Query: A TAINT IN PUTNAM

    Gentle readers, lurkers and you trolls, I rewrote the time line because I just couldn’t get a query together. I have some questions about this one...

    Started by Craig‎, 03-31-2014 04:45 PM
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    • Replies: 41
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    04-15-2014, 01:17 PM Go to last post
  5. Once more: Query for St. Johns

    Gentle readers it has been a while. I put this query under my pillow, wadded it up and put it in the toe of my boot and other such troubling things....

    Started by Craig‎, 07-18-2013 12:45 PM
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    • Replies: 17
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    10-07-2013, 04:41 PM Go to last post
  6. Query - Siren Pacific

    Well, here it goes. Any suggestions you have to improve my query letter would be most appreciated. Thanks! Dear Agent: (Of course, I would have...

    Started by Beth‎, 04-03-2013 08:38 AM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 15
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    04-21-2014, 08:06 PM Go to last post
  7. Query: Simulated Murder

    We're far enough into the story over in the Writing Critique forum that everyone should have a pretty good idea about the basic plot of the book. I...

    Started by Gilfindel‎, 03-07-2013 08:06 PM
    7 Pages
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    • Replies: 67
    • Views: 17,148
    04-28-2013, 01:06 PM Go to last post
  8. New Query Letter GOODBYE HUMBLE PENNY

    A HUGE thank you to everyone who commented on my last attempt. I agree that it was too vague and in my opinion boring. So I started again. I really...

    Started by marikaguthrie‎, 06-11-2014 01:24 PM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 11
    • Views: 16,945
    06-16-2014, 09:43 AM Go to last post
  9. Non-fiction query?

    Hi, I am sure this needs a lot more polishing, but I have seen how supportive you all are in helping everyone get the best possible query letter...

    Started by Bina Bear‎, 01-16-2011 01:59 PM
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    • Replies: 73
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    01-30-2011, 06:05 AM Go to last post
  10. WHERE ANGELS LOSE THEIR WAY Query help

    Hello all. I have just finished a draft of my query letter and I'd appreciate some feedback. It's hard to step back and see it through the eyes of...

    Started by WALTW‎, 01-15-2014 06:37 PM
    2 Pages
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    query letter help
    • Replies: 13
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    03-07-2014, 08:06 AM Go to last post
  11. Query Help Wanted

    Hey y'all Long time no smell! I'm so glad I saw Keith here, and he gave this advice: I want to query a very specific, relatively large...

    Started by Xavier Onassis‎, 10-15-2012 12:26 PM
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    • Replies: 47
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    10-26-2012, 05:17 PM Go to last post
  12. Examples of good query letters and good synopses, with critiques

    Any links to examples of good query letters and good synopses? I've read through these: http://www.charlottedillon.com/SynopsisSamples.html and...

    Started by Richard Clunan‎, 03-05-2012 12:22 AM
    • Replies: 7
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    03-06-2012, 07:27 PM Go to last post
  13. Query: Chance of a Lifetime

    I haven't done one of these in a while, so I'm a little out of practice. What do you think? When Detective Steve Fischer crosses the mob, he...

    Started by Rogue Mutt‎, 10-18-2012 10:53 AM
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    simon sucks
    • Replies: 82
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    10-29-2012, 12:15 PM Go to last post
  14. Query Letter/ feedback please

    Hello people. I'd love some feedback on my festering turd of a query letter. Thanks! Dear Agent, Stepping into adulthood is an elaborate...

    Started by Naomi B.‎, 03-23-2014 12:17 PM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 12
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    03-29-2014, 06:08 AM Go to last post
  15. Please critic my query letter

    Dear xxx, I am seeking representation of my novel, Warzone: Operation Wolf Hunt. It is a work of military science fiction; book one of two part...

    Started by Morris Graham‎, 03-13-2011 09:05 PM
    10 Pages
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    • Replies: 96
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    03-25-2011, 12:59 AM Go to last post
  16. Query - The Dark Syndicate

    To Agent: Two sisters start recruiting a band of misfit minions to take revenge on Heaven and Hell, little do they know, one minion will change...

    Started by Kessar‎, 01-25-2015 11:33 PM
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    • Replies: 15
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    02-06-2015, 04:08 AM Go to last post
  17. Feedback needed

    WORD WAR I: The Truth Behind The Words We Use In Our Daily Lives Revealed WORD WAR I begins with a poignant reflection on the hardest and...

    Started by Michael Victor Jackson‎, 05-20-2016 06:54 AM
    3 Pages
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    communication, hope, query letter help, words, wwi
    • Replies: 22
    • Views: 11,418
    06-17-2016, 02:12 PM Go to last post
  18. Query Help - Another attempt

    I have tried to take all the comments from before and incorporate them into this query by showing you Chloe and what she must do. That she is the...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-07-2011 11:53 AM
    4 Pages
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    • Replies: 37
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    02-12-2011, 02:47 PM Go to last post
  19. Please Critique My Query

    Fellow Writers, Below is the latest draft of my query letter. I appreciate any honest feedback or means of improvement, before I send out my next...

    Started by P.T. DUNN‎, 08-16-2016 02:19 AM
    3 Pages
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    lolgreenstein
    • Replies: 20
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    08-27-2016, 07:47 AM Go to last post
  20. Query Letter: The Apprentice's Journey

    Hello everyone! I'm trying to publish my first novel, and naturally the first step is to get my query up to scratch :) I've posted this and...

    Started by Raxis‎, 02-11-2015 08:39 PM
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    • Replies: 23
    • Views: 10,128
    03-04-2015, 08:56 AM Go to last post

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