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  1. Query letter revisions

    just revised this query. not sent it out yet. thanks for any feedback you can provide! Dear name of agent, Colin Wyle has lived a privileged...

    Started by David Balzarini‎, 08-03-2011 11:40 PM
    • Replies: 1
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    08-04-2011, 07:02 AM Go to last post
  2. Journey Query Letter 1st attempt

    Hello everyone This is my first attempt at writing a query letter for my latest manuscript. Any help or suggestions would be greatly appreciated. ...

    Started by H. M. Winterhalter‎, 07-22-2011 06:43 PM
    • Replies: 1
    • Views: 609
    08-02-2011, 06:12 PM Go to last post
  3. In the Shadows Query--2nd attempt

    Hello everyone. I have revised and here it is. Let me know what you think. IN THE SHADOWS: When Patience Kell enters the Underrealm in search...

    Started by Stacy Scholz‎, 02-23-2011 01:39 PM
    • Replies: 1
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    02-23-2011, 03:19 PM Go to last post
  4. Revision for THE FINAL CLUE

    It's been a rough couple of weeks, my dad was diagnosed with brain tumor, a spot on his lung and liver. He started radiation treatment today. I...

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 12-07-2011 06:18 PM
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 794
    12-08-2011, 05:06 AM Go to last post
  5. Moses synopsis advice attempt #2

    Here is my long synopsis, I am looking for ideas on what to trim down. Thanks so much for the help and advice. When Santa Fe New Mexico is...

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 02-27-2011 03:38 PM
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 827
    02-27-2011, 07:15 PM Go to last post
  6. Righteo, trying an entirely different angle - QL

    So, as suggested, I'm trying this QL from a different angle. To be honest, I am living on very little sleep and even less food so I no longer have...

    Started by Satyrical Raven‎, 02-03-2011 01:27 AM
    • Replies: 4
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    02-03-2011, 11:59 AM Go to last post
  7. Synopsis PLEASE critique

    Looking for opinions on my following query letter, can anyone shoot me some advice? Attention: Joe Blow Thanks in advance for the consideration...

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 02-19-2011 01:48 PM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 1,025
    02-20-2011, 11:10 PM Go to last post
  8. Okay, I did my best to wipe out the others. Is this any better??? Thanks to all of you helping me over and over again. The Final Clue

    I'm sorry my query's have been so bad. You are probably sick of me continuing to post them. But I feel my novel is worthy to fight for. Thank you for...

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 04-22-2011 08:12 AM
    • Replies: 7
    • Views: 1,081
    04-23-2011, 06:12 AM Go to last post
  9. Please Critique query. Second Attempt after 1st critiques.

    This is my second attempt. I hope Im getting closer to getting it right as I applied the 1st critiques. William Nicolas Mancuso, presumed dead,...

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 04-14-2011 06:33 AM
    • Replies: 6
    • Views: 1,084
    04-15-2011, 10:26 AM Go to last post
  10. Question concerning pages.

    I'm nowhere near being ready to query (ha), but (for future reference) when an agent asks for pages along with a query letter (let's say they want...

    Started by Delany Sierra Sierra‎, 02-15-2011 03:15 PM
    • Replies: 9
    • Views: 1,085
    02-16-2011, 04:53 AM Go to last post
  11. THE FINAL CLUE 4x Query Attempt. I appreciate any critique I can get. Thanks

    Hi again. Taking all the previous critique into consideration, I am working very hard at getting this right and greatly appreciate your help....

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 04-20-2011 09:18 AM
    • Replies: 6
    • Views: 1,090
    04-21-2011, 05:55 AM Go to last post
  12. Paranormal fiction query letter

    my first crack at a query. thoughts welcome. thanks! Dear name of agent Colin Wyle has nightmares of violence and horrifying visions of Duemos,...

    Started by David Balzarini‎, 08-03-2011 09:12 PM
    • Replies: 0
    • Views: 1,091
    08-03-2011, 09:12 PM Go to last post
  13. STRINGS OF HEART-revision! thanks for everyone who helped!

    I really appreciate all the help and critique I got. thanks to y'all! :) here's the 2nd go of the Q. still, all comments are welcomed. Dear...

    Started by Vanessa Gao‎, 08-29-2011 05:10 AM
    • Replies: 1
    • Views: 1,091
    09-05-2011, 06:29 AM Go to last post
  14. Moses query, last attempt

    Opinions, advice? would appreciate sincerity. I've excluded the dear agent and thank you obviously. After an unprecedented political and...

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 03-04-2011 11:23 PM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 1,109
    03-05-2011, 09:46 AM Go to last post
  15. Crituque My Possible Query Letter for my YA novel Teeth:)-D

    *note this query does not contain ANY bio, agents name, nor info on the agent it is merely the body and the hook Query Letter for My YA Novel Teeth...

    Started by imported_Devon Thomas‎, 04-10-2011 05:30 AM
    • Replies: 9
    • Views: 1,111
    04-22-2011, 10:37 PM Go to last post
  16. Moses Query attempt #4

    So, Ive been toying with the idea of using a scene from my book as the actually query letter. Heres what I have, please let me know what you think....

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 03-01-2011 09:46 PM
    • Replies: 6
    • Views: 1,125
    03-03-2011, 12:09 PM Go to last post
  17. Query: Bleamy's Corner

    Eleven-year-old Jeremy is heartbroken at leaving his dog and friends behind when the 1802 drought forces his family to move to London. Too soon he...

    Started by Tobias Garrett‎, 03-21-2012 10:38 AM
    • Replies: 1
    • Views: 1,139
    03-21-2012, 01:26 PM Go to last post
  18. Query for my new YA novel "Silver: the Story of An Orca"

    Here is the query for my new novel "Silver: The Story of An Orca." Please read and critique: Imagine that all youve ever known is life in a world...

    Started by Jody Mosier‎, 07-18-2011 11:57 PM
    • Replies: 8
    • Views: 1,147
    07-24-2011, 08:40 AM Go to last post
  19. Punctuation

    The University of East London is very close. However, the university does not have a gym. Is the first letter of the word 'university' in the...

    Started by imported_Gulam Akbar‎, 03-23-2011 12:07 PM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 1,148
    03-23-2011, 04:56 PM Go to last post
  20. Revision for YA Query

    Please give me the good and the bad on this query: Imagine being the it girl at school and then moving and still becoming the it girl at a new...

    Started by Dustin Wright‎, 05-15-2012 10:34 PM
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 1,149
    05-16-2012, 03:34 AM Go to last post

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