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  1. Query -- SUBSERVIA

    Hello All, Thanks in advance. Any and all feedback is welcomed and appreciated. Must. Get. This. Right. :)-D SUBSERVIA is a 90,000-word...

    Started by Adam Bentley‎, 04-05-2011 09:51 PM
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    • Replies: 20
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    04-19-2011, 03:26 PM Go to last post
  2. First Query for my cross -genre memoir...Please read and critique! Thanks

    Dear Agent, Former Rock musician Jenn Wertz has set about writing a memoir of her life and times with Rusted Root, the popular 90s rock band she...

    Started by adobe88‎, 05-29-2012 08:10 AM
    • Replies: 6
    • Views: 5,718
    05-31-2012, 07:34 AM Go to last post
  3. Query Letter-I'm stuck. Help?

    I've rewritten my query letter countless times. I don't want to waste anyone's time with garbage but at this point I'm stuck. Am I on the right...

    Started by Adrienne Wenner‎, 02-03-2011 08:44 PM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 4,532
    02-06-2011, 05:54 AM Go to last post
  4. Query review request. Unrelated.

    When Faith Kensington comes to the age of her inheritance, she expects her hunt to be no different than those of her elders, but what, or rather who,...

    Started by AinsleyRoss‎, 10-05-2016 02:19 AM
    • Replies: 1
    • Views: 5,622
    10-05-2016, 04:01 AM Go to last post
  5. Review query request

    Dear Agent After suffering through years of psychological breaks, lengthy hospital stays, and ultimately, the death of her beloved parents, Hazel...

    Started by AinsleyRoss‎, 10-03-2016 09:11 PM
    query, review
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 7,778
    10-05-2016, 02:13 AM Go to last post
  6. Query Review: The Redder, revised.

    Dear Agent Hazel Wolfe has believed that the dark voice she’s been hearing since she was six years old has been a symptom to her Schizophrenia....

    Started by AinsleyRoss‎, 10-06-2016 09:59 PM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 15,352
    10-12-2016, 09:30 PM Go to last post
  7. Query Review: Inheritance. Second attempt

    Dear Agent Island. The word brings certain images to mind. Remote. Misty breezes. Waterfalls. Relaxing naps in the sun. And that all holds true...

    Started by AinsleyRoss‎, 10-06-2016 10:22 PM
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 7,638
    10-12-2016, 09:28 PM Go to last post
  8. THE REDDER. Third Revision. Crossing fingers.

    Dear Agent Since she was six, Hazel Wolfe has heard a dark voice she attributed to schizophrenia, but now that voice is becoming all too real....

    Started by AinsleyRoss‎, 10-10-2016 10:00 PM
    • Replies: 0
    • Views: 4,382
    10-10-2016, 10:00 PM Go to last post
  9. INHERITANCE. Thriller/Suspense. Third revision.

    Dear Agent Now that she's of age, it is time for Faith Kensington to hunt and claim her first slave. But when the indomitable Roman Forrester...

    Started by AinsleyRoss‎, 10-10-2016 11:32 PM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 5,908
    10-12-2016, 09:27 PM Go to last post
  10. Query letter, help please!

    Hi guys :) I am writing the query letter and I am posting it here so that I am sure, it has the best of what I could come up with. So it is a...

    Started by Aizza‎, 10-30-2015 09:03 PM
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    • Replies: 11
    • Views: 7,872
    11-03-2015, 01:18 PM Go to last post
  11. Post Query help needed! All feedback welcome! Unicorn Wars

    Hi, I am so new to this. I tried to follow some guidelines I read. Any feedback is readily welcome! The title of my story is the...

    Started by Amee Hagler‎, 09-15-2011 05:57 PM
    • Replies: 7
    • Views: 6,373
    09-17-2011, 11:30 PM Go to last post
  12. QUERY CRITIQUE - one last time?

    Okay everyone, I've made the few changes suggested and did my best to polish this up. I feel like I am almost there, but I would really like some...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 03-02-2011 12:21 PM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 15
    • Views: 7,263
    03-04-2011, 11:20 PM Go to last post
  13. Can I just send this one?

    Having fun tonight, maybe I'm feeling a little delirious or just going crazy. But this one was fun to write. Can I just call it a day/night and send...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-28-2011 07:27 PM
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    • Replies: 25
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    03-02-2011, 03:21 AM Go to last post
  14. Another Other Angle - QUERY:)

    Hi Friends, it's me again with hopefully a different query from the yawn fest ones I've previously posted. I tried to jump in with Phoenix and what...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-24-2011 05:59 PM
    • Replies: 7
    • Views: 4,814
    02-25-2011, 10:35 AM Go to last post
  15. Query Attempt #1000

    I've taken everyone's advice and tried to show who Chloe is, her conflict and what she must do. Is this on the right track or am I still going the...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-15-2011 07:21 AM
    4 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 4
    • Replies: 36
    • Views: 9,186
    02-18-2011, 11:42 AM Go to last post
  16. Query Help - Another attempt

    I have tried to take all the comments from before and incorporate them into this query by showing you Chloe and what she must do. That she is the...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-07-2011 11:53 AM
    4 Pages
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    • Replies: 37
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    02-12-2011, 02:47 PM Go to last post
  17. Query Help

    I seem to be stuck in query purgatory and I was wondering if this was getting close. I am still working on the final paragraph. I've tried to show...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-03-2011 09:32 AM
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    • Replies: 22
    • Views: 10,494
    02-06-2011, 06:12 AM Go to last post
  18. QUERY CRITIQUE - Is this anything?

    This is simply a start and I was wondering if I am on to anything? It's not complete, but I wanted to post the first two paragraphs to see if I'm...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 01-27-2011 08:32 PM
    • Replies: 8
    • Views: 5,733
    01-28-2011, 11:50 AM Go to last post
  19. Query - Another try -Paranormal Romance

    As you can see, I'm at it again, and I would love to hear some thoughts on this query. Am I totally lost here? I had some great advice on my last...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 01-24-2011 08:12 PM
    • Replies: 6
    • Views: 5,391
    01-25-2011, 10:41 AM Go to last post
  20. Query Critique - Paranormal Romance

    I would love some feedback on my query letter. Thank you so much for your help. Now I'm off to critique someone else. Amy Dear Agent, ...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 01-19-2011 08:49 PM
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    • Replies: 12
    • Views: 8,292
    01-21-2011, 08:48 AM Go to last post

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