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  1. Query Review: The Redder, revised.

    Dear Agent Hazel Wolfe has believed that the dark voice she’s been hearing since she was six years old has been a symptom to her Schizophrenia....

    Started by AinsleyRoss‎, 10-06-2016 10:59 PM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 1,922
    10-12-2016, 10:30 PM Go to last post
  2. Query Review: Inheritance. Second attempt

    Dear Agent Island. The word brings certain images to mind. Remote. Misty breezes. Waterfalls. Relaxing naps in the sun. And that all holds true...

    Started by AinsleyRoss‎, 10-06-2016 11:22 PM
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 689
    10-12-2016, 10:28 PM Go to last post
  3. INHERITANCE. Thriller/Suspense. Third revision.

    Dear Agent Now that she's of age, it is time for Faith Kensington to hunt and claim her first slave. But when the indomitable Roman Forrester...

    Started by AinsleyRoss‎, 10-11-2016 12:32 AM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 462
    10-12-2016, 10:27 PM Go to last post
  4. THE REDDER. Third Revision. Crossing fingers.

    Dear Agent Since she was six, Hazel Wolfe has heard a dark voice she attributed to schizophrenia, but now that voice is becoming all too real....

    Started by AinsleyRoss‎, 10-10-2016 11:00 PM
    • Replies: 0
    • Views: 326
    10-10-2016, 11:00 PM Go to last post
  5. Query review request. Unrelated.

    When Faith Kensington comes to the age of her inheritance, she expects her hunt to be no different than those of her elders, but what, or rather who,...

    Started by AinsleyRoss‎, 10-05-2016 03:19 AM
    • Replies: 1
    • Views: 456
    10-05-2016, 05:01 AM Go to last post
  6. Review query request

    Dear Agent After suffering through years of psychological breaks, lengthy hospital stays, and ultimately, the death of her beloved parents, Hazel...

    Started by AinsleyRoss‎, 10-03-2016 10:11 PM
    query, review
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 636
    10-05-2016, 03:13 AM Go to last post
  7. Query letter for PRINCE OF SLAVES

    I have been through multiple revisions with this query, but there's always room for another round (and another, and another) I'm posting two...

    Started by Cez‎, 08-30-2016 02:54 PM
    fantasy, medieval, ya fiction
    • Replies: 4
    • Views: 969
    08-31-2016, 03:02 PM Go to last post
  8. Please Critique My Query

    Fellow Writers, Below is the latest draft of my query letter. I appreciate any honest feedback or means of improvement, before I send out my next...

    Started by P.T. DUNN‎, 08-16-2016 02:19 AM
    3 Pages
    1 2 3
    lolgreenstein
    • Replies: 20
    • Views: 2,305
    08-27-2016, 07:47 AM Go to last post
  9. Second Query Letter Critique

    I have rewritten the first query letter taking your advice. Let me know if this is better and if I'm on the right track. Jane counts the rhythmic...

    Started by Rook‎, 07-28-2016 05:59 AM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 1,145
    08-07-2016, 11:41 AM Go to last post
  10. Query Letter Critique

    I am seeking representation for my new thriller novel, “Insane Jane”. The finished manuscript has 51,428 words. I am currently working on the...

    Started by Rook‎, 07-28-2016 02:40 AM
    • Replies: 4
    • Views: 874
    07-28-2016, 05:36 AM Go to last post
  11. Query Critique Request

    Dear ______, Thank you so much for taking the time to read this. I am seeking representation for REVOLT, a 71,000-word young adult dystopian style...

    Started by ArcadiaE‎, 07-07-2016 11:07 AM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 1,135
    07-08-2016, 03:33 AM Go to last post
  12. query letter critique

    Seattle native Marcy Donaldson didn’t expect to find the man of her dreams at church. And she certainly didn’t expect to find him behind the pulpit. ...

    Started by regina‎, 07-07-2016 01:49 AM
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 866
    07-07-2016, 07:36 PM Go to last post
  13. query letter critique

    Novel Set over four weeks in the brutal winter of 1954, Father Briar and the Angel Marceline is an historical romance unlike any other. When a...

    Started by regina‎, 06-24-2016 12:29 AM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 1,257
    06-24-2016, 11:05 PM Go to last post
  14. Query critique request

    Feliz Piez wants to die. *He doesn't want to be dead dead, just metaphorically dead so he sets out on a quest to kill himself, write his book, and go...

    Started by Feliz Piez‎, 06-22-2016 01:56 AM
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 910
    06-22-2016, 09:37 AM Go to last post
  15. Feedback needed

    WORD WAR I: The Truth Behind The Words We Use In Our Daily Lives Revealed WORD WAR I begins with a poignant reflection on the hardest and...

    Started by Michael Victor Jackson‎, 05-20-2016 06:54 AM
    3 Pages
    1 2 3
    communication, hope, query letter help, words, wwi
    • Replies: 22
    • Views: 3,495
    06-17-2016, 02:12 PM Go to last post
  16. Query help needed!

    Hi all, I'm Carrie--a newbie. I don't know why I didn't see this forum before. I think my brain is fried from staring at this query letter for...

    Started by Carrie Graves‎, 10-14-2011 10:49 AM
    • Replies: 4
    • Views: 1,318
    05-28-2016, 10:09 AM Go to last post
  17. Another attempt - QL take XXXL

    As many of you know, I have struggled with my QL for my MS1 I have worked the H#ll out of the MS and have it pretty damn shiny - even if I do say...

    Started by Satyrical Raven‎, 01-12-2011 01:37 PM
    • Replies: 6
    • Views: 1,918
    05-27-2016, 08:32 AM Go to last post
  18. Addiction memoir query. Help needed!

    Good afternoon fellow writers! I recently parted ways with an agent, so my hunt begins again. I’d appreciate any and all feedback on my query letter....

    Started by r k‎, 05-23-2016 05:34 AM
    • Replies: 0
    • Views: 799
    05-23-2016, 05:34 AM Go to last post
  19. Feedback for query letter please! :)

    I would really appreciate some feedback on this query letter please. Feel free to re-word things for a nicer flow. Dear Ms. Collins: Emilia...

    Started by cecilia-mar‎, 03-08-2016 12:19 PM
    • Replies: 4
    • Views: 3,320
    03-09-2016, 12:07 PM Go to last post
  20. Re: Addiction memoir query

    My transformation from an award-winning CNN producer to a clumsily contained pain pill addict was a solitary experience, but finding my sobriety...

    Started by r k‎, 10-13-2015 02:59 PM
    • Replies: 8
    • Views: 2,219
    02-25-2016, 10:27 AM Go to last post

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