Forum: Query Letters

Dear Agent Hazel Wolfe has believed that the dark voice she’s been hearing since she was six years old has been a symptom to her Schizophrenia....

Dear Agent Island. The word brings certain images to mind. Remote. Misty breezes. Waterfalls. Relaxing naps in the sun. And that all holds true...

Dear Agent Now that she's of age, it is time for Faith Kensington to hunt and claim her first slave. But when the indomitable Roman Forrester...

Dear Agent Since she was six, Hazel Wolfe has heard a dark voice she attributed to schizophrenia, but now that voice is becoming all too real....

When Faith Kensington comes to the age of her inheritance, she expects her hunt to be no different than those of her elders, but what, or rather who,...

Dear Agent After suffering through years of psychological breaks, lengthy hospital stays, and ultimately, the death of her beloved parents, Hazel...

I have been through multiple revisions with this query, but there's always room for another round (and another, and another) I'm posting two...

Fellow Writers, Below is the latest draft of my query letter. I appreciate any honest feedback or means of improvement, before I send out my next...

I have rewritten the first query letter taking your advice. Let me know if this is better and if I'm on the right track. Jane counts the rhythmic...

I am seeking representation for my new thriller novel, “Insane Jane”. The finished manuscript has 51,428 words. I am currently working on the...

Dear ______, Thank you so much for taking the time to read this. I am seeking representation for REVOLT, a 71,000-word young adult dystopian style...

Seattle native Marcy Donaldson didn’t expect to find the man of her dreams at church. And she certainly didn’t expect to find him behind the pulpit. ...

Novel Set over four weeks in the brutal winter of 1954, Father Briar and the Angel Marceline is an historical romance unlike any other. When a...

Feliz Piez wants to die. *He doesn't want to be dead dead, just metaphorically dead so he sets out on a quest to kill himself, write his book, and go...

WORD WAR I: The Truth Behind The Words We Use In Our Daily Lives Revealed WORD WAR I begins with a poignant reflection on the hardest and...

Hi all, I'm Carrie--a newbie. I don't know why I didn't see this forum before. I think my brain is fried from staring at this query letter for...

As many of you know, I have struggled with my QL for my MS1 I have worked the H#ll out of the MS and have it pretty damn shiny - even if I do say...

Good afternoon fellow writers! I recently parted ways with an agent, so my hunt begins again. I’d appreciate any and all feedback on my query letter....

I would really appreciate some feedback on this query letter please. Feel free to re-word things for a nicer flow. Dear Ms. Collins: Emilia...

My transformation from an award-winning CNN producer to a clumsily contained pain pill addict was a solitary experience, but finding my sobriety...