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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 02:34 PM
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    08-24-2011, 02:34 PM Go to last post
  1. Plan B Chapter Two

    CHAPTER TWO Most of the locals were honest, hard- working individuals who came to Bryson for reasons of their own to seek and build a new life on...

    Started by MUSKETTER 3‎, 04-03-2013 07:09 PM
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    05-22-2013, 03:42 PM Go to last post
  2. Virtually Improbable

    They rode along at an easy pace. The bicycles made their susurrus sound in the quiet morning air. Though it was mid April and usually warm already...

    Started by Quest2Express‎, 05-19-2013 04:12 PM
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    05-22-2013, 09:15 AM Go to last post
  3. A little help, if you please...

    The day the Earth stood still started like any other. Well, the Earth didnít literally stand still, but everything on it did, so it amounts to the...

    Started by Raia‎, 05-02-2013 05:22 AM
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    05-18-2013, 07:16 AM Go to last post
  4. It's been a while

    Hey guys, its been a while since I done any writing, but thought I'd try and get back to it with a new story. Here's what I've got so far, let me...

    Started by Will Prendergast‎, 05-02-2013 05:10 AM
    • Replies: 4
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    05-09-2013, 05:55 PM Go to last post
  5. Cool Plan c

    Let's try a different approach without the info dump of Plan B. PLAN C CHAPTER ONE Na’Vo leaned against the nose of his air taxi and...

    Started by MUSKETTER 3‎, 04-29-2013 01:25 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    04-30-2013, 06:02 AM Go to last post
  6. Plan B

    CHAPTER ONE. The new Starry Night, built in 2360 and located on Bryson III, resembled a hundred other bars, on ten different worlds, whose...

    Started by MUSKETTER 3‎, 03-19-2013 11:13 AM
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    04-25-2013, 11:06 AM Go to last post
  7. Excerpt from an untitled work

    I turned left on Shale and found the bakery. It was in a converted fire station, the old kind, from back when fire wagons were pulled by horses. The...

    Started by Spirit‎, 04-18-2013 11:14 AM
    • Replies: 4
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    04-19-2013, 08:03 AM Go to last post
  8. Please critique my children's picture book manuscript!

    I have my manuscript and history posted on Indiegogo right now. Believe me that this isn't a solicitation for donations! I need an unbiased...

    Started by pickwriter‎, 04-10-2013 02:54 PM
    • Replies: 4
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    04-11-2013, 06:18 AM Go to last post
  9. Devil's Day - First post

    This is the beginning of a short story I'm working on. Thank you for your critiques in advance. One day during the mid 15th Century the...

    Started by Terry Catlett‎, 03-21-2013 04:23 PM
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    04-02-2013, 02:11 PM Go to last post
  10. Post Chapter One: Change is on the Rise

    It was the start of a new day as she woke to the sun shining through her window, hitting her pale face, she squints as she sits up in her bed and...

    Started by Jesse‎, 03-19-2013 08:38 AM
    2 Pages
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    chapter one, romance fiction
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    03-27-2013, 04:15 AM Go to last post
  11. Beginning of new novel

    Part I-In which our hero dies There are a lot of things we donít remember. I donít remember my grandmotherís middle name; I donít remember the...

    Started by Mark Phillips‎, 03-10-2013 02:23 PM
    • Replies: 4
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    03-27-2013, 03:51 AM Go to last post
  12. SM Chapter One Intro Change

    In the course of wrestling with the query and synopsis for Simulated Murder, I realized that the original opening paragraphs weren't setting the...

    Started by Gilfindel‎, 03-17-2013 08:24 AM
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    03-22-2013, 03:48 PM Go to last post
  13. Crale's Republic Excerpt

    I'm in the process of writing a rather long fantasy and would just like to get some feedback on an excerpt to help refine my writing style....

    Started by Atherus‎, 03-20-2013 11:32 AM
    • Replies: 4
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    03-20-2013, 05:50 PM Go to last post
  14. Sexual content - is this realistic?

    In my novel a young woman and a young man who knew each other as kids and then have gotten together again one summer are flirting -- seemingly. ...

    Started by DebbieBumstead‎, 03-16-2013 04:15 PM
    • Replies: 6
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    03-18-2013, 08:23 PM Go to last post
  15. I studied now did I do it right?

    Brian layed back on a uncomfortable cheap bench. Stareing out the window of a public lounge, He saw a array of magnificent stars and interstellar...

    Started by jesus234‎, 02-28-2013 10:05 AM
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    03-16-2013, 05:32 PM Go to last post
  16. Simulated Murder: Chapter Ten

    In this chapter (titled "Travel on Official Business"), Jen and Elise begin their cross-country road trip, and encounter some unexpected...

    Started by Gilfindel‎, 02-22-2013 04:49 PM
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    03-07-2013, 07:39 AM Go to last post
  17. Memoir ( Fixed, I hope ) If you do read could you please let me know about my style?

    Even as a young boy I always knew things where not right at home. It wasnít till years later I would learn just how wrong. My parents never seemed to...

    Started by kimbarkave‎, 03-02-2013 09:59 PM
    • Replies: 4
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    03-06-2013, 04:12 AM Go to last post
  18. ST. JOHNS pages 1-5

    I would appreciate any comments. Locals have critiqued it but you know how that can be. 1 ďDamn, I must be getting cynical.Ē Justin Thomas...

    Started by Craig‎, 03-01-2013 03:09 PM
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    03-04-2013, 04:30 AM Go to last post
  19. Chapter 1: Dread

    (Since I'm not able to post more than 1000 words at a time, please be advised that this is just the beginning of the first chapter. Thank you.) ...

    Started by krynnalexia‎, 03-01-2013 09:19 PM
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    03-04-2013, 04:25 AM Go to last post
  20. Chapter 1: Dread (continued.....)

    "WeĎre in trouble, Meya. The earth is crying. I can feel its pain. Ikusa and Satual must be trying to rip through the enchantment that keeps them...

    Started by krynnalexia‎, 03-01-2013 10:16 PM
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