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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 02:34 PM
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    08-24-2011, 02:34 PM Go to last post
  1. Flash fiction (150 words) - interested in any comments/criticisms

    Hello all, I'm very new to the forums and usually only write for myself. I have a simple stream of consciousness piece of flash fiction and I'm...

    Started by bee‎, 05-30-2015 09:10 AM
    5 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 5
    • Replies: 48
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    06-05-2015, 06:11 AM Go to last post
  2. Please Critique My Picture Book--Maggy the Magnificent

    I would really appreciate it if I can get some critiques over my picture book, Maggy the Magnificent. This is my first book so I am sure there is...

    Started by oliviaik‎, 04-07-2015 11:48 AM
    4 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 4
    • Replies: 30
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    05-29-2015, 08:48 PM Go to last post
  3. Lightbulb The Outcast Prologue

    I promise this is not really an already published sample. I always think that's a lame trick. Anyway, I don't usually do prologues but this seemed...

    Started by Rogue Mutt‎, 05-22-2015 05:05 PM
    5 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 5
    • Replies: 44
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    05-29-2015, 08:43 PM Go to last post
  4. Lightbulb Another Chance: New Beginning

    I rewrote the beginning to make it maybe less info-dumpy. What do you think?:confused: # I know there’s something big going on when Wally asks...

    Started by Rogue Mutt‎, 05-06-2015 05:12 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 13
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    05-09-2015, 07:26 AM Go to last post
  5. Story "Elma's Garbage Can" by A. Martin.

    This short story, Elma's Garbage Can is soon set to be submitted to a fiction publication. Feel free to critique and comment! ...

    Started by Horrorone82‎, 04-13-2015 09:30 AM
    3 Pages
    1 2 3
    gore, horror, science fiction, suspense
    • Replies: 20
    • Views: 8,744
    05-06-2015, 03:27 PM Go to last post
  6. "Elma's Garbage Can" hits four-star status on ShortnScaryStories.com!

    "Elma's Garbage Can" hits four-star status on ShortnScaryStories.com. Read and review at will. Also, my new novel, Black October, will be for...

    Started by Horrorone82‎, 05-06-2015 01:03 PM
    horror, novels, stories
    • Replies: 1
    • Views: 1,967
    05-06-2015, 02:52 PM Go to last post
  7. "Elma's Garbage Can" rated three stars.

    Can't beat readers. "Elma's Garbage Can" rated three stars by readers with over a thousand views in three days. Read it now at...

    Started by Horrorone82‎, 04-29-2015 01:28 PM
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 2,039
    05-06-2015, 12:12 PM Go to last post
  8. Frankenstein: The True Story

    Here is a little snippet from my new book. Any feedback would be much appreciated. ‘…the priest had railed against Victor in his sermons and...

    Started by paullord7@hotmail.com‎, 04-13-2015 08:48 PM
    fiction
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 3,344
    05-02-2015, 10:08 PM Go to last post
  9. Cool Another Chance: Long Exceprt

    This is a long excerpt, about 2000 words. But what else do you have to do here on Sunday? I think the start is a little too much of an info dump. ...

    Started by Rogue Mutt‎, 04-25-2015 10:05 PM
    3 Pages
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    awesomesauce
    • Replies: 28
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    05-02-2015, 09:56 PM Go to last post
  10. The Secret Life of Quasimodo, or The Adventures of a Lecher and a Mystic

    Current Synopsis: Attached is the first part of a work of comic erotic fiction telling the untold story of the Hunchback of Notre Dame. A much...

    Started by paullord7@hotmail.com‎, 04-14-2015 03:11 AM
    comic erotic fiction
    • Replies: 6
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    04-22-2015, 04:54 AM Go to last post
  11. Beta Reader Wanted: Napoleonic / Supernatural Novel

    I just finished the third draft of my first novel. I've done a little bit of revising, and I think the story is the best I can make it. I am hoping...

    Started by SoloSam‎, 04-14-2015 06:25 AM
    • Replies: 5
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    04-19-2015, 07:58 PM Go to last post
  12. The Secret Life of Quasimodo, or The Adventures of a Lecher and a Mystic

    Current Synopsis: Attached is the first part of a work of comic erotic fiction telling the untold story of the Hunchback of Notre Dame. A much...

    Started by paullord7@hotmail.com‎, 04-14-2015 03:16 AM
    • Replies: 0
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    04-14-2015, 03:16 AM Go to last post
  13. opening paragraphs

    I would appreciate any criticism. Isaac, although in shirtsleeves, was unmindful of the transition from crisp autumn chill to fusty warmth as he...

    Started by n.p.doeleman‎, 03-31-2015 10:23 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 12
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    04-10-2015, 09:02 AM Go to last post
  14. posted in wrong thread

    I posted something for critique in the wrong thread I think that I started a couple days ago. I should have posted here, but here is the link to it....

    Started by DaBlaRR‎, 04-02-2015 07:50 PM
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  15. Scene 1

    I can't remember the last time I posted something in here, so here's the opening scene of my latest story. There's probably some bad language in...

    Started by Rogue Mutt‎, 02-19-2015 11:24 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 17
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    03-17-2015, 03:34 PM Go to last post
  16. My first story. "The Society of Temporal Scholars"

    I've never written before so this was a lot of fun. I'm open to any suggestions. Chapter One It was a quiet day at Hampton University as the...

    Started by Snell‎, 03-16-2015 06:13 AM
    • Replies: 4
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    03-17-2015, 08:26 AM Go to last post
  17. Dead bird

    I hit the snooze button for the second time. It was a normal morning. But why was it still so dark, I wondered, as I peered squinting through my one...

    Started by JAY S‎, 02-23-2015 08:15 AM
    • Replies: 0
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  18. Beginning of The Dark Syndicate

    As we all know agents ask for sample pages. I normally add more, but considering there's a 1000 or less limit, I am limiting to the first bit... I...

    Started by Kessar‎, 01-26-2015 01:06 AM
    • Replies: 3
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    01-27-2015, 07:55 AM Go to last post
  19. On The Road, The Original Scroll by J Kerouac - A Review

    OK. I just finished "ON THE ROAD, The Original Scroll" for the first time a week ago. I managed to do so within four days. Four separate sittings....

    Started by JAY S‎, 01-14-2015 09:23 PM
    disney, kerouac, mexico, road, shower
    • Replies: 2
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    01-15-2015, 09:33 AM Go to last post
  20. short story - Catching Butterflies - would appreciate feedback. Thanks.

    CATCHING BUTTERFLIES Shirley and her son Geoffrey were first to arrive. Her husband, Barry stayed home, as he often did; indifferent to the...

    Started by Anne Brown‎, 01-01-2015 10:09 AM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 1,749
    01-14-2015, 07:50 AM Go to last post

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