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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 02:34 PM
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    08-24-2011, 02:34 PM Go to last post
  1. Unforeseen Enemy (Rev 1)

    Unforeseen Enemy (Rev 1) ONE Killing from afar had the effect of one removed. The job was impersonal, business without the testing gaze and...

    Started by Carl Magnus‎, 10-06-2015 06:40 PM
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    1 2
    • Replies: 17
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    10-13-2015, 01:55 PM Go to last post
  2. Comments on this story opening?

    The dental assistant smiled very nicely and tousled his hair and said, "William, I suppose by now you're just absolutely sick of having those horrid...

    Started by robin‎, 05-16-2015 05:31 PM
    6 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 6
    • Replies: 53
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    10-08-2015, 03:37 PM Go to last post
  3. Beta Reader?

    I'm new here. Could someone please explain beta reader? Thanks.

    Started by Marci Mathers‎, 10-05-2015 07:20 AM
    • Replies: 1
    • Views: 1,226
    10-05-2015, 08:41 AM Go to last post
  4. Unforeseen Enemy - first chapter

    UNFORESEEN ENEMY CARL MAGNUS ONE The walking target undermined the peace in a sovereign city-state. That was all Jack had been told about...

    Started by Carl Magnus‎, 09-11-2015 08:35 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    action, adventure, sci-fi, suspense, thriller
    • Replies: 19
    • Views: 5,878
    09-26-2015, 12:45 PM Go to last post
  5. Excerpt:

    A Whole New Can Of Worms (An extraordinary journal) Part 1. PART ONE (No music or FX cues appear in this draft.) 1. VIBRATIONAL SHIFT A...

    Started by Storytellafella‎, 09-06-2015 04:46 PM
    • Replies: 9
    • Views: 3,710
    09-09-2015, 07:32 PM Go to last post
  6. A category for Sci-fi Poetry?

    Hi Folks, I hope you can solve a problem for me. This is an excerpt from a sci-fi audio book, which I have written and am busy producing. Title...

    Started by Storytellafella‎, 09-06-2015 04:40 PM
    • Replies: 0
    • Views: 1,368
    09-06-2015, 04:40 PM Go to last post
  7. Chapter 7 Critique please

    Ok so I asked this before kind of. The answers and what I concluded was it wasn't that important. If the chapter needs to be told in 3000 words or in...

    Started by DaBlaRR‎, 08-25-2015 08:40 PM
    5 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 5
    • Replies: 44
    • Views: 11,886
    08-31-2015, 08:23 PM Go to last post
  8. Exclamation Take a Look at the Changes I've Made?

    I changed the title and I made a few changes to the description. Would you mind taking a look? Just go to: https://www.createspace.com/5692714

    Started by Mr. Michael Live‎, 08-22-2015 10:17 PM
    3 Pages
    1 2 3
    • Replies: 28
    • Views: 9,112
    08-26-2015, 10:25 AM Go to last post
  9. Wink ***Many Will Criticize***

    I know from first-hand experience that there are many people in this world who will be very critical of something they know little to nothing about....

    Started by Mr. Michael Live‎, 08-18-2015 11:43 AM
    7 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 7
    • Replies: 68
    • Views: 12,341
    08-23-2015, 12:07 PM Go to last post
  10. Thoughts?

    It's 4 o clock in the morning. I'm at Wal-Mart purchasing an axe. I walk from the aisle to the cash register in something of a daze; that is, I...

    Started by Wickett‎, 08-20-2015 04:00 PM
    • Replies: 6
    • Views: 2,294
    08-20-2015, 07:04 PM Go to last post
  11. The White Wizard - two chapters

    OK - the opening states to limit postings to 1,000 words, but these two paragraphs, which are already public anyway, are closer to 4,000. So I'm...

    Started by msknight‎, 08-19-2015 12:20 PM
    • Replies: 7
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    08-20-2015, 10:26 AM Go to last post
  12. Exclamation I know what's going on here...!

    It's obvious that all or most of you think I'm only a "flash-in-the-pan" or "here today, gone tomorrow" but that thought is not correct. I say...

    Started by Mr. Michael Live‎, 08-16-2015 06:54 PM
    3 Pages
    1 2 3
    biased, community, cover to cover, female friend, own copy
    • Replies: 23
    • Views: 3,617
    08-18-2015, 08:31 AM Go to last post
  13. A Rocky Start

    *** I couldnít believe how scared I was. By that I mean jesus **** Iím sweating too much. I could have worn shorts, but Iím sure thereís some code of...

    Started by platonicpanda‎, 07-29-2015 07:38 PM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 11
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    08-02-2015, 09:38 PM Go to last post
  14. Sky Ghost Chapter 1

    Chapter 1 The first thing he has to do in the morning is go down to check the fences. That daily trip has helped him stay in shape for the last two...

    Started by Rogue Mutt‎, 07-09-2015 05:52 PM
    • Replies: 9
    • Views: 3,255
    07-22-2015, 09:26 AM Go to last post
  15. Justice for All, Chapter 1, Part 1

    This is a rewrite of my prologue for The Outcast that I posted earlier. This is part 1 of 2 since the whole chapter won't quite fit. I've tried to...

    Started by Rogue Mutt‎, 07-01-2015 04:34 PM
    • Replies: 3
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    07-02-2015, 11:13 AM Go to last post
  16. Opening Paragraphs

    I've been writing and rewriting the opening paragraphs to an article, and I'm not sure that it's good enough yet. Your feedback is appreciated. ...

    Started by Writing Skills‎, 07-01-2015 11:53 PM
    • Replies: 1
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    07-02-2015, 03:02 AM Go to last post
  17. A brief excerpt

    Iím taking a break from my sci-fi adventure which isnít going as well as I hoped. Hereís a brief excerpt from a story I Ďm working on now and I would...

    Started by MUSKETTER 3‎, 06-19-2015 07:41 AM
    • Replies: 6
    • Views: 3,881
    06-22-2015, 04:12 AM Go to last post
  18. A snippet of a short story I am currently messing with. All comments are welcome.

    The beginning of a short story. Would love some feedback for anyone who likes reading a bit of fantasy. Thanks Beldam The withered crone let the...

    Started by Susan‎, 06-12-2015 05:30 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    suswelling8@yahoo.com.au
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    06-20-2015, 03:08 AM Go to last post
  19. Another Another Chance Beginning

    I thought it'd be nice to write an opening that lets my con man character actually con someone out of their hard-earned money. Maybe you'll like it....

    Started by Rogue Mutt‎, 06-13-2015 07:10 PM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 1,664
    06-14-2015, 07:31 PM Go to last post
  20. Post Editor vs Beta Reader - New Author

    Anyone have any suggestions of using a editor vs a beta reader? I just finished my first book and would need an eye to look it over. Someone gave me...

    Started by BPG7‎, 06-03-2015 03:15 PM
    4 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 4
    beta reader, editor, new book, novice
    • Replies: 38
    • Views: 7,409
    06-08-2015, 07:54 PM Go to last post

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