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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 02:34 PM
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    08-24-2011, 02:34 PM Go to last post
  1. Not sure what to make of it...

    Her intuition sounded something wasn't right. Six minutes till six -- It sounded again. Tristan Isolde Nasari relaxed her tortured gaze into...

    Started by Author Pendragin‎, 01-15-2011 02:59 PM
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    01-17-2011, 09:38 AM Go to last post
  2. Scene 1

    I can't remember the last time I posted something in here, so here's the opening scene of my latest story. There's probably some bad language in...

    Started by Rogue Mutt‎, 02-19-2015 11:24 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 17
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    03-17-2015, 03:34 PM Go to last post
  3. Fear of the Known

    Here is a draft of what I am currently thinking of as a "prelude" (is that too weird?) to my novel. It is "out of character" with the rest of the...

    Started by Gaylen Moore‎, 10-19-2011 08:50 AM
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    • Replies: 22
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    10-25-2011, 09:45 AM Go to last post
  4. Dark Tidings

    Here are the first six hundred words from Dark Tidings. I'm hoping to get feedback which will help me improve its appeal. The book has been published...

    Started by Ken Magee‎, 08-27-2016 11:44 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 13
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    08-30-2016, 08:35 PM Go to last post
  5. Flashback Scene~chapter 1

    This is the second scene in my first chapter, right after Gavin leaves. It's a flashback, and I've heard some bad things about doing this. Is this...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 10-08-2011 09:32 PM
    7 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 7
    • Replies: 60
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    10-16-2011, 03:12 PM Go to last post
  6. Wanring: Sexual/violent material in this post. Dark Erotica. Part 2

    This is part two to the first post. It is the rest of the chapter. Like I said earlier I know it isn't perfect and needs to be edited. Let me know so...

    Started by Margaret Compeau‎, 01-29-2011 10:53 AM
    7 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 7
    • Replies: 64
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    02-02-2011, 09:43 AM Go to last post
  7. opening paragraph

    Chapter 1 Azrael levitated above the shrivelled ninety year old body of Mrs Wakelin and watched her exhale her final breath. He waited patiently for...

    Started by jay walker‎, 01-12-2011 03:12 AM
    3 Pages
    1 2 3
    • Replies: 21
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    01-16-2011, 02:27 AM Go to last post
  8. Hollar Dollar - REVISED

    If you aren't sick of me yet, would you mind looking over the revised version? I've been adding in all the amazing suggestions I received and wanted...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 06-22-2011 07:27 PM
    5 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 5
    • Replies: 48
    • Views: 9,491
    06-30-2011, 09:15 PM Go to last post
  9. WIP (Sunstone Chronicles for now), Prologue

    Hi all, been a while since I posted. I'm trying to work up some creative energy to continue working on increasing my writing volume since my...

    Started by John Chritton‎, 09-16-2011 03:08 PM
    6 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 6
    • Replies: 56
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    09-28-2011, 12:17 PM Go to last post
  10. 1st paragraph of my new book.

    135th Berkley Lane, Adel Iowa, had sat virtually untouched for the last decade. Once a proud manor house it now sat lonely and abandoned. The...

    Started by AC_Corran‎, 02-25-2012 10:55 PM
    4 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 4
    • Replies: 38
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    02-29-2012, 10:01 PM Go to last post
  11. Exclamation Take a Look at the Changes I've Made?

    I changed the title and I made a few changes to the description. Would you mind taking a look? Just go to: https://www.createspace.com/5692714

    Started by Mr. Michael Live‎, 08-22-2015 10:17 PM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 28
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    08-26-2015, 10:25 AM Go to last post
  12. Why You Should Proofread

    http://news.yahoo.com/colonel-sanders-secret-manuscript-revealed-201211341.html Here's a good example of why we always encourage writers to read...

    Started by leslee‎, 11-10-2011 07:25 PM
    6 Pages
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    • Replies: 53
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    11-16-2011, 11:37 AM Go to last post
  13. My name is Gonzo. Please critique, but go to hell if you pick me up on anything!

    Stayed in a red light hotel full of Russian beauties, got nightmare flashbacks. They made me into a hotel in my mind. I became, Russian...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 10-10-2011 02:14 PM
    6 Pages
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    • Replies: 56
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    10-14-2011, 03:17 PM Go to last post
  14. Cool Another Chance: Long Exceprt

    This is a long excerpt, about 2000 words. But what else do you have to do here on Sunday? I think the start is a little too much of an info dump. ...

    Started by Rogue Mutt‎, 04-25-2015 10:05 PM
    3 Pages
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    awesomesauce
    • Replies: 28
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    05-02-2015, 09:56 PM Go to last post
  15. Beginning of Ch 1

    She rises as she often does, before the sun. Turning restlessly in her bed, snatches of strange dreams drifting away as consciousness drifts in. Her...

    Started by Megan McCook‎, 08-31-2011 06:20 AM
    4 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 4
    • Replies: 31
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    09-01-2011, 05:52 PM Go to last post
  16. White Chocolate Mocha - REVISED

    Hey, I'm back. I've worked on this all weekend and I want to know if this is better or have I made it worse. I've added some to it and hopefully...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 08-07-2011 06:26 PM
    6 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 6
    • Replies: 50
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    08-21-2011, 05:18 AM Go to last post
  17. Synopsis troubles.

    Im completely new to everything that is writing. I recently completed my first novel titled 'Isn't it Beautiful'. I really need some help out with my...

    Started by XXStillwaitingXX‎, 08-07-2012 09:13 AM
    3 Pages
    1 2 3
    • Replies: 25
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    09-10-2012, 03:31 PM Go to last post
  18. Taff

    I've been trying to work this chapter out from my novel GLIMPSE... not sure how it plays out with a reader. Any and all opinions are welcome. I'd...

    Started by J D‎, 10-09-2011 05:48 PM
    4 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 4
    • Replies: 32
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    10-18-2011, 06:05 PM Go to last post
  19. Story "Elma's Garbage Can" by A. Martin.

    This short story, Elma's Garbage Can is soon set to be submitted to a fiction publication. Feel free to critique and comment! ...

    Started by Horrorone82‎, 04-13-2015 09:30 AM
    3 Pages
    1 2 3
    gore, horror, science fiction, suspense
    • Replies: 20
    • Views: 8,683
    05-06-2015, 03:27 PM Go to last post
  20. Opinions, please, for my novel's beginning

    I haven't looked at this revised beginning in a while. I've been revising the whole novel and am now into 160, 170 pages. I changed the name from...

    Started by Claire Young‎, 10-09-2011 04:23 PM
    3 Pages
    1 2 3
    • Replies: 20
    • Views: 8,602
    10-15-2011, 05:43 PM Go to last post

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