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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 02:34 PM
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  1. Thump!

    Thump... Over indistinct chatter. Thump... Over shackles pummeling his knees. Thump...

    Started by Author Pendragin‎, 01-29-2012 12:35 AM
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    02-01-2012, 11:12 AM Go to last post
  2. UK based Short Story

    This is a short story I drafted myself whilst bored on a bb...please criticise/praise/donate (that was a joke) Also I would be grateful if...

    Started by Ian Francis‎, 02-04-2011 08:31 AM
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    02-11-2011, 05:40 AM Go to last post
  3. Not sure what to make of it...

    Her intuition sounded – something wasn't right. Six minutes till six -- It sounded again. Tristan Isolde Nasari relaxed her tortured gaze into...

    Started by Author Pendragin‎, 01-15-2011 02:59 PM
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    01-17-2011, 09:38 AM Go to last post
  4. Can I have your critique on this opening scene, please?:)

    I've posted this excerpt about two months ago, but since then the whole MS went trough so much technical rewriting (following the critique I've...

    Started by Zoe Saadia‎, 04-17-2011 02:07 AM
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    04-23-2011, 11:37 PM Go to last post
  5. thoughts on paragraph please

    Azrael stood over the corpse of Grant Thompson. The car that had served as his weapon had stopped initially, but panic-stricken by the severity of...

    Started by jay walker‎, 01-21-2011 04:40 AM
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    02-07-2011, 06:19 AM Go to last post
  6. Candy Cupcake & Co

    Childrens book aimed at 7 - 12 year olds. Not finished book yet this is just a snip-it .Many Thanks :) Chapter 2 Five o’clock arrived,...

    Started by Ruth Bibby‎, 07-23-2011 07:33 AM
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    07-28-2011, 06:14 AM Go to last post
  7. Prologue (first part)

    Hi everyone. This is a prologue to a horror novel (some profanity). Tear it apart. I had to split it into two parts (2000 words total), but it's...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 08-31-2016 03:39 PM
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    09-06-2016, 11:50 AM Go to last post
  8. Chapter 1 of the Pulse

    Chapter 1 (Twelve days after the Pulse) My little town was empty. After the Pulse, most of the seven hundred people of Morrisville had left....

    Started by Raia‎, 05-18-2013 07:38 AM
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    06-01-2013, 09:16 AM Go to last post
  9. Something New - Critique please

    Hi everyone! Happy Mother's day to all the moms out there. I thought I would post something for critique that I've been working on. It's my opening...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 05-08-2011 04:12 PM
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    05-20-2011, 03:03 AM Go to last post
  10. Please critique. Short story beginning (adult horror).

    Hi Guys. It's been kind of slow in here lately, so I decided to share this. I've begun work on my second novel, which is a prequel of the one I...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 10-30-2011 12:30 AM
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    11-02-2011, 06:24 PM Go to last post
  11. The Declaration of Unity--Chapter One: 1,200-words, spec-fic/contemporary fantasy

    "R" rated tone and a few expletives. Seeking any and all feedback anyone's willing to offer. Thanks in advance. THE DECLARATION OF UNITY ...

    Started by Adam Bentley‎, 04-10-2012 12:58 AM
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    04-18-2012, 04:34 PM Go to last post
  12. Is mine too tiny?

    After viewing many of the prologues posted here, I'm beginning to question my own. It seems to differ greatly from what I've seen on this site. ...

    Started by Shaun .‎, 04-16-2011 08:41 AM
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    04-24-2011, 06:50 PM Go to last post
  13. critique first 5 pages of novel?

    Part I “You love me,” Maddy said. "No I don't." "You love me." "Love when expressed gets halved." "So you love me." "No I don’t." ...

    Started by M.S.B. Jeep‎, 08-10-2011 02:27 PM
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    08-19-2011, 07:10 PM Go to last post
  14. Taff

    I've been trying to work this chapter out from my novel GLIMPSE... not sure how it plays out with a reader. Any and all opinions are welcome. I'd...

    Started by J D‎, 10-09-2011 05:48 PM
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    10-18-2011, 06:05 PM Go to last post
  15. First scene - comments?

    2 Posts because length -_- Leon groaned as his eyes drifted open, the scorching pain in the back of them telling him that they didn’t take kindly to...

    Started by CryingCicada‎, 03-08-2012 11:19 PM
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    03-13-2012, 01:15 PM Go to last post
  16. Simulated Murder: Chapter Four

    I've moderated Jen's over-active imagination from the tail end of the last chapter. In chapter 4, History and Background Information, we'll get a...

    Started by Gilfindel‎, 12-05-2012 05:07 PM
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  17. Here is part of my first chapter - I am kind of scared.... :(

    Chapter One So here I am lying in my bed, with my laptop (which seems to have been my closest friend for years now), and I want to write...

    Started by Bina Bear‎, 01-18-2011 06:21 PM
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    09-13-2011, 01:44 PM Go to last post
  18. Beginning of Ch 1

    She rises as she often does, before the sun. Turning restlessly in her bed, snatches of strange dreams drifting away as consciousness drifts in. Her...

    Started by Megan McCook‎, 08-31-2011 06:20 AM
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    09-01-2011, 05:52 PM Go to last post
  19. Back Cover Blurb!

    They asked for 300 word synopsis for the back cover plus an author bio. 1] I am boring, 2] I use a pseudonym, even worse 3] I want them in the...

    Started by Herman Munster‎, 04-14-2012 02:53 AM
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    josh, operations, ops, spec, special
    • Replies: 31
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    05-10-2012, 08:53 AM Go to last post
  20. Forbidden Taboos of Men and Women (Adult Content)

    I'm submitting my work for critique. Thanks to those that do. Here are the first 3 parts: Leather and Lace (by Maxine Dominique) (Part...

    Started by maxine dominique‎, 07-31-2012 08:42 PM
    4 Pages
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    • Replies: 31
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    08-16-2013, 07:45 AM Go to last post

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