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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 02:34 PM
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    08-24-2011, 02:34 PM Go to last post
  1. Band-aids ~ Hollar Dollar Chapter 2

    This is the opening scene to my second chapter. I would like to know if the characters are somewhat interesting and if the voice is consistent. Any...

    Started by Amylou‎, 02-23-2012 10:35 AM
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    02-25-2012, 10:27 PM Go to last post
  2. Chapter 1

    This is only the first of 24 chapters in my story. I am not going to post all of it on this thread because I hope to publish it and I do not want...

    Started by Andrew Eddy‎, 10-02-2011 04:54 PM
    • Replies: 7
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    10-03-2011, 12:11 PM Go to last post
  3. Sam to his Friends

    Hi all, I wonder if you would be kind enough to have a look at a piece of my writing and let me know what you think? It is the opening to a...

    Started by Andy Brown‎, 06-17-2012 01:52 AM
    • Replies: 9
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    06-18-2012, 09:41 AM Go to last post
  4. The Shadow of Moses Chapter 1

    sorry, messed something up. I'll be back with it soon.

    Started by Andy Hitch‎, 04-11-2011 11:08 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    04-19-2011, 10:08 PM Go to last post
  5. sample from short story-would greatly appreciate feedback (note:minor sexual content)

    I think I have reached the point where I do not even see anymore where to make changes to my writing and really need a different perspective, as I...

    Started by Anne Brown‎, 11-22-2014 06:54 AM
    • Replies: 4
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    11-24-2014, 05:37 AM Go to last post
  6. short story - Catching Butterflies - would appreciate feedback. Thanks.

    CATCHING BUTTERFLIES Shirley and her son Geoffrey were first to arrive. Her husband, Barry stayed home, as he often did; indifferent to the...

    Started by Anne Brown‎, 01-01-2015 10:09 AM
    • Replies: 5
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    01-14-2015, 07:50 AM Go to last post
  7. remainder of short story catching butterflies - would greatly appreciate feedback

    Beside the refrigerator were pencil markings up the edge of the wall to measure height, beginning when her son was old enough to walk. A moment...

    Started by Anne Brown‎, 01-01-2015 10:11 AM
    • Replies: 0
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  8. Descriptions?

    The start of a short story. Have at it! :) --- It was either the fixer-upper or couple’s counseling. We moved in on the first of May. Nature...

    Started by Anonymous1‎, 02-15-2013 07:46 PM
    • Replies: 2
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    02-16-2013, 08:09 AM Go to last post
  9. Critique for my YA novel

    Background info: Main character, Kaylie's, parents were both brutally killed and as a result she turned to drugs and alcohol until one night she was...

    Started by ArcadiaE‎, 07-07-2016 11:12 AM
    • Replies: 6
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    07-09-2016, 09:26 AM Go to last post
  10. New Project Critique Request

    Here's the first 500 words or so of something new I started working on. Would like your thoughts. Cal Bachter was the best fighter they’d...

    Started by ArcadiaE‎, 08-16-2016 02:44 AM
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    • Replies: 3
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    08-16-2016, 01:16 PM Go to last post
  11. Testing an Intro. Sable Sea 67 words

    What I'm going for here is a slow quiet start to short story I'm working on. I know this is short and probably not a lot to work with. The dialog...

    Started by Aspring Writer MKII‎, 02-01-2012 09:43 PM
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    • Replies: 22
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    02-20-2012, 10:30 AM Go to last post
  12. Crale's Republic Excerpt

    I'm in the process of writing a rather long fantasy and would just like to get some feedback on an excerpt to help refine my writing style....

    Started by Atherus‎, 03-20-2013 11:32 AM
    • Replies: 4
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    03-20-2013, 05:50 PM Go to last post
  13. Split from Fat Cat Syndrome Thread

    @Victoria, If you examine each of my posts you can easily see some relation to the author's original thread. @Leslee, My point as it...

    Started by Author Pendragin‎, 02-15-2011 08:34 AM
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    02-16-2011, 06:29 PM Go to last post
  14. Simple Enough??

    Ok, Sat suggested keeping it simple -- 250 to 300 words -- so that's what I did. I just wanted a simple story. I started with the first sentence and...

    Started by Author Pendragin‎, 01-17-2011 06:59 PM
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    • Replies: 15
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    01-19-2011, 05:59 PM Go to last post
  15. Not sure what to make of it...

    Her intuition sounded – something wasn't right. Six minutes till six -- It sounded again. Tristan Isolde Nasari relaxed her tortured gaze into...

    Started by Author Pendragin‎, 01-15-2011 02:59 PM
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    1 2 3 ... 4
    • Replies: 37
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    01-17-2011, 09:38 AM Go to last post
  16. Thump!

    Thump... Over indistinct chatter. Thump... Over shackles pummeling his knees. Thump...

    Started by Author Pendragin‎, 01-29-2012 12:35 AM
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    • Replies: 38
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    02-01-2012, 11:12 AM Go to last post
  17. The complex:

    This is a scene I am working on right now. I haven't posted in a while. Hope it's not too bad. ...

    Started by Author Pendragin‎, 01-17-2013 08:53 PM
    • Replies: 3
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    01-21-2013, 09:21 PM Go to last post
  18. How to Trim

    Does this passage seem longwinded to any of you? The next morning, Jocelyn was one of several students, many of which were still hung over, whose...

    Started by Author Pendragin‎, 12-05-2013 09:16 PM
    • Replies: 4
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    01-30-2014, 04:32 AM Go to last post
  19. So far... so good?

    It is a silent cog of the human machine that, the second we trigger an internal alarm, or perceive the slightest prohibition, we often do exactly the...

    Started by Author Pendragin‎, 12-25-2013 07:26 PM
    • Replies: 2
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    12-26-2013, 02:19 PM Go to last post
  20. The Inquisitor

    Wn.net has generally been deader than Dodge City on Saturday night after Wyatt and the boys cleaned up the place, so I thought I would post...

    Started by Author Pendragin‎, 11-08-2014 10:05 PM
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    • Replies: 11
    • Views: 3,074
    12-04-2014, 09:14 AM Go to last post

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