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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 01:34 PM
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  1. UK based Short Story

    This is a short story I drafted myself whilst bored on a bb...please criticise/praise/donate (that was a joke) Also I would be grateful if...

    Started by Ian Francis‎, 02-04-2011 08:31 AM
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    02-11-2011, 05:40 AM Go to last post
  2. A scene (YA fantasy)

    Okay, so this scene involves an instance in which one character enters the other's mind, but I keep messing it up. I must have rewritten this seven...

    Started by Delany Sierra Sierra‎, 02-10-2011 02:20 PM
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    02-10-2011, 06:17 PM Go to last post
  3. MG, 1st 5p-looksee would be GR8

    This is a MG novel i'm working right now. Cross between a Junie B. Jones and Twilight. (Sorry, Vampires ahead). Would appreciate any feedback...

    Started by Avonne Writer‎, 02-08-2011 10:50 PM
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    02-09-2011, 08:24 AM Go to last post
  4. White Mocha Opening Scene - Critique

    Some of you have helped me so much with this. I wanted to repost because I have changed the opening of my first chapter to begin with the card and...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-08-2011 06:32 AM
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    02-09-2011, 08:03 AM Go to last post
  5. Bluffers

    Below is the first, short chapter of a novella I've written called 'Bluffers'. Would anyone read further, given this as the book's opening? Cheers. ...

    Started by Matthew Robinson‎, 02-07-2011 03:09 AM
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    02-08-2011, 10:20 AM Go to last post
  6. Old Ladies Revised. Contains foul language

    Here is The Old Lady Diaries revised. I am coming up with a new title. Pendragin, I added your book suggestion to my book list. I hope I did better...

    Started by Margaret Compeau‎, 02-05-2011 07:48 PM
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    02-08-2011, 12:44 AM Go to last post
  7. In need of criticism

    I am new writer, which you may be able to tell by this excerpt from my prologue, that is in need of a critique. No one has read any of it at this...

    Started by James Davis‎, 02-02-2011 12:42 PM
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    02-07-2011, 11:30 PM Go to last post
  8. First few pages for critique :)

    Thanks in advance for your time and effort :) I took the critique, I received on the query forum, seriously enough to look up a professional editor...

    Started by Zoe Saadia‎, 02-03-2011 01:38 PM
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    02-07-2011, 11:21 PM Go to last post
  9. Bar Scene needs merciless critique please

    Below is another short piece that I just can't decide about. Does it work? Bar scenes are hard at the best of times, I suppose:( It's also from...

    Started by Matthew Robinson‎, 02-07-2011 05:55 AM
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    02-07-2011, 11:09 AM Go to last post
  10. Early mornings work, before I go to work. What a bummer: a Sunday morning nightmare

    Those mad times aint gone; the barmy March hare has been dieting all year, getting ready for the title fight. ‘In the red corner! The-...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 02-06-2011 02:32 AM
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    02-07-2011, 09:40 AM Go to last post
  11. A Scene

    Here’s a scene: It is a bright sunny afternoon. The sun is shining so fervently that by looking at the lake, it will hurt your eyes. The water...

    Started by Philip Lee‎, 02-05-2011 07:28 AM
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    02-07-2011, 06:25 AM Go to last post
  12. thoughts on paragraph please

    Azrael stood over the corpse of Grant Thompson. The car that had served as his weapon had stopped initially, but panic-stricken by the severity of...

    Started by jay walker‎, 01-21-2011 04:40 AM
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  13. The Old Lady Diaries

    Ok, so while I am thinking more on Beneath the Diamonds I thought I would put up the first two paragraphs for another book I'm working on for a...

    Started by Margaret Compeau‎, 02-02-2011 06:34 PM
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  14. OK, back from work. Three beers and the mercury is rising. Have it... its going nowhere. I have no inclination, and now I'm gonna take my giant dog out

    Mum said I can ride the horses at daybreak. When daybreak came, mine was the last show on earth. Me and a gelding called Newton Daniel felt the...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 02-03-2011 01:37 PM
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    02-04-2011, 11:25 PM Go to last post
  15. The Daily Holocaust

    In the dead of night, I am dead, My wife is dead My kids are dead, and my dog sure smells dead. In the light of morning, I am half dead. But...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 02-01-2011 01:41 PM
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  16. Husband has walked out, Realistic? - Gone

    Hi Friends, This is a scene I have written right after Chloe's husband has left her the night before, Valentine's night. I was wondering if this is...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 01-30-2011 09:04 PM
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    02-03-2011, 04:14 PM Go to last post
  17. Please Critique

    Hi. If anyone has any comments on the extract below, I'd appreciate it. It's like a shadow play, the doctor said. A Chinese shadow play. I'm...

    Started by Zooey Jones‎, 02-01-2011 02:39 PM
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  18. To prologue or not to prologue?

    I would like a critique on my prologue. Does it give you a hint that the book is supernatural? And when you send your first 10 or so pages to an...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-02-2011 07:12 PM
    • Replies: 2
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    02-03-2011, 06:17 AM Go to last post
  19. Wanring: Sexual/violent material in this post. Dark Erotica. Part 2

    This is part two to the first post. It is the rest of the chapter. Like I said earlier I know it isn't perfect and needs to be edited. Let me know so...

    Started by Margaret Compeau‎, 01-29-2011 10:53 AM
    7 Pages
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    02-02-2011, 09:43 AM Go to last post
  20. A bit of Chapter 1

    Drayden stepped out through the door, the argument still ringing in his ears. He shivered. His eyes began to water. He rubbed and blew his hands...

    Started by Chimere Mba‎, 02-01-2011 11:08 AM
    • Replies: 7
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    02-02-2011, 09:25 AM Go to last post

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