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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 02:34 PM
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  1. 376 Friends to Impress

    Another exercise to improve my writing, descriptions, things like that. I would love a critique if you don't mind. I'm interested in attempting to...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 08-02-2011 08:48 AM
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  2. 3rd person or 1st person

    I've been writing in 3rd party past tense so far, but having read books recently in the 1st person present tense, I'm wondering if I'd be more suited...

    Started by Will Prendergast‎, 01-05-2014 04:43 AM
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  3. 422

    Any comments or suggestions would be really helpful. Thanks! Detective Gerald William Orlovsky eased his black 2000 Chrysler Cirrus LX into one...

    Started by imported_Kelsea Burnside‎, 03-07-2011 11:56 AM
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  4. 4th post continued

    ... because what I intend to give you guys to read is more than 1000 words which is beyond to what's allowed here as normal text in a post.

    Started by ciordan‎, 02-21-2016 05:41 AM
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  5. ;)First novel. Fantasy. Please critique.

    OK, so I have been writing this for a while, and before I continue, I want to make sure I don't sound like I wrote the whole thing drunk, or...

    Started by imported_Eric Trautmiller‎, 04-09-2011 04:33 PM
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    04-10-2011, 06:21 AM Go to last post
  6. a 1000(ish) word excerpt from a new writers 1st effort...

    Hi! This is my first foray into the writing arena, and i sure would appreciate any comments or suggestions. Thanx for reading my work (if u do read...

    Started by voodoogator‎, 05-13-2012 01:03 AM
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  7. A bit of Chapter 1

    Drayden stepped out through the door, the argument still ringing in his ears. He shivered. His eyes began to water. He rubbed and blew his hands...

    Started by Chimere Mba‎, 02-01-2011 11:08 AM
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  8. A bit of me book... It needs work. I like this, but didn't send it

    “Troop-t-r-o-o-p, shun!” he bawled. We instantly sprang to attention, as Major Part turned to face us. Immediately he glanced over in my...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 01-16-2011 10:45 AM
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  9. A brief excerpt

    I’m taking a break from my sci-fi adventure which isn’t going as well as I hoped. Here’s a brief excerpt from a story I ‘m working on now and I would...

    Started by MUSKETTER 3‎, 06-19-2015 07:41 AM
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    06-22-2015, 04:12 AM Go to last post
  10. A category for Sci-fi Poetry?

    Hi Folks, I hope you can solve a problem for me. This is an excerpt from a sci-fi audio book, which I have written and am busy producing. Title...

    Started by Storytellafella‎, 09-06-2015 04:40 PM
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  11. A few words of my opening. Please critique.

    This is my opening. Please tell me how to improve it. Thank you. Blaine Aleksandrovich Stillemann hardly ever thought about his country of...

    Started by Chimere Mba‎, 04-03-2011 11:31 PM
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    04-12-2011, 10:01 PM Go to last post
  12. A flash fiction - Circle

    I don't usually do flash. I am more of a novel and short story gal! But this was for a contest and it didn't place. Might be because it is crap......

    Started by Debbi V‎, 12-29-2015 01:07 AM
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  13. A Funny Thing Happened On My Way Here

    I get a lot of U.S. Postal mail, junk-mail addressed to Ms. Jodie Christian. It's a common error I've gotten used to over the years and prudently...

    Started by Jodie Christian‎, 09-15-2011 12:05 PM
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  14. a good man

    Hi all, this is part of chapter one of my novel, A GOOD MAN. Let me have it.... Wow, church is packed today, Ahlesha thinks to herself as...

    Started by Ty Waller‎, 10-07-2011 02:49 PM
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    10-08-2011, 06:12 PM Go to last post
  15. A kind of a love scene..

    I was looking over a scene from my satire, feeling frustrated and drinking a rum and coke, saw this "writing critique thread" so I figured I'd throw...

    Started by J D‎, 09-30-2011 06:06 PM
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  16. A little help, if you please...

    The day the Earth stood still started like any other. Well, the Earth didn’t literally stand still, but everything on it did, so it amounts to the...

    Started by Raia‎, 05-02-2013 05:22 AM
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  17. Smile A long-abandoned novel attempt revisited. Any thoughts greatly appreciated. (Chap 1)

    “How much are we at?” Todd asked, dropping the last candle into his basket. He’d been to several stores today and cleaned them all out. “$11.40...

    Started by Don Mcfarland‎, 07-29-2011 04:15 PM
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    08-19-2011, 07:20 PM Go to last post
  18. A Note From the Admiral

    A Note From the Admiral I thought about my brother today as I might think of my people from time to time. This memory came for no special reason;...

    Started by alcarty‎, 02-08-2013 03:43 PM
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  19. A question to those who are seeking help and crits!

    After a long absence from this website, I was interested to come across this forum, where people want help with their novels/ideas/whatever. But...

    Started by Marianne Moore‎, 03-20-2011 11:01 AM
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  20. A quick overall impression would be great!

    Your overall impression would be fantastic. With the ending, I originally had House Fly say 'bungalow', but my 6 year old had no clue what that was....

    Started by JodiC‎, 10-26-2013 05:56 AM
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    01-15-2014, 03:35 PM Go to last post

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