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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 01:34 PM
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  1. My writing samples

    This from a sci-fi I'm working on now. Thanks. I rolled on my back to face the sky, the stiff pain in my neck reemerged for a moment then...

    Started by 06Casuality‎, 12-09-2013 07:05 AM
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  2. Flash fiction (150 words) - interested in any comments/criticisms

    Hello all, I'm very new to the forums and usually only write for myself. I have a simple stream of consciousness piece of flash fiction and I'm...

    Started by bee‎, 05-30-2015 08:10 AM
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    06-05-2015, 05:11 AM Go to last post
  3. Just Write

    May I suggest that even the published writers on here post new ditties and suchlike... bad or good, it can only make you stronger and is more...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 02-19-2011 02:15 AM
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  4. Revised partial. Chapter 1 of the Final Clue.

    I welcome all critque and thank you in advance and I thank you for the previous critiques. You have been patient with me and so helpful. Thanks...

    Started by Cheryl Iadonisi‎, 07-04-2011 10:42 AM
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    07-11-2011, 07:15 AM Go to last post
  5. A little help, if you please...

    The day the Earth stood still started like any other. Well, the Earth didnít literally stand still, but everything on it did, so it amounts to the...

    Started by Raia‎, 05-02-2013 04:22 AM
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    05-18-2013, 06:16 AM Go to last post
  6. Lightbulb The Outcast Prologue

    I promise this is not really an already published sample. I always think that's a lame trick. Anyway, I don't usually do prologues but this seemed...

    Started by Rogue Mutt‎, 05-22-2015 04:05 PM
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    05-29-2015, 07:43 PM Go to last post
  7. Chapter 7 Critique please

    Ok so I asked this before kind of. The answers and what I concluded was it wasn't that important. If the chapter needs to be told in 3000 words or in...

    Started by DaBlaRR‎, 08-25-2015 07:40 PM
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    08-31-2015, 07:23 PM Go to last post
  8. Opening Scene - Revised

    Sorry if this is double posted. I've been working on my opening scene again and have tried to consider all the wonderful critiques I've received....

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 05-17-2011 10:02 AM
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  9. Hollar Dollar

    Hi everyone. Here's a short piece I've been working on, once again working on the craft of writing. I'm really trying to be specific, intentional...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 06-19-2011 04:52 PM
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    06-22-2011, 07:54 AM Go to last post
  10. Elemental Touch: The Guardians of Magic (revised prologue)

    Alright, I re-read this and took some of the advise I got to heart and cut it down by about 200 words, bringing it to a single page, and also...

    Started by Jonathan Nichols‎, 07-28-2011 11:00 AM
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    07-31-2011, 07:30 PM Go to last post
  11. My very first book The Love Of God !!!!!!! I would Love feedback;)

    This love experience with God is nothing like the love that a person will ever experience in this world. Each page of the book teaches the reader in...

    Started by imported_Melody Scales‎, 04-03-2011 12:05 PM
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    04-06-2011, 10:04 PM Go to last post
  12. New hear, looking for opinions, first couple of pages, fantasy novel.

    At the edge of the woods, less than half a league from the castleís walls, apart from the rest of the forest, stood a single, leafless and ancient...

    Started by Kieron Dodds‎, 08-08-2011 06:02 PM
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    10-01-2011, 08:14 AM Go to last post
  13. Little Hollow Plastic Boundaries

    My favorite part of every trip to a store is the checkout line. The checkout line offers you a variety of people watching opportunities as well as a...

    Started by Jenn Murphy‎, 08-22-2011 08:10 AM
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    08-28-2011, 10:31 AM Go to last post
  14. First page

    I've had the idea for a novel for a while. I just started writing it recent and am finished with the first two chapters. I was hoping to get some...

    Started by mpalenik‎, 01-20-2016 11:08 AM
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  15. Prologue (horror novel). Please critique.

    Hello Everyone. I'm new here and this is my first post. I'm doing revisions on a novel I've completed, and since the first few pages are so...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 03-13-2011 09:20 PM
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  16. Dreams of Refuge - Chapter 10 - Rewrite

    Okay! Here's the edit/rewrite. Chapter 10 Locked away in the bathroom, Gemma tried to silence her weeps. Her skin was pale; her lips were blue....

    Started by Shaun .‎, 06-22-2011 01:01 PM
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    06-26-2011, 10:19 AM Go to last post
  17. Go ahead, I can take it..

    I've been reading, and see lots and lots of people who come in here to post writing samples for critique, and then get all upset when they get a...

    Started by NS fw‎, 08-17-2011 12:38 PM
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    08-19-2011, 05:48 PM Go to last post
  18. Dreams of Refuge - Chapter 10 (1st 1/2) - 899 words

    Content Warning - Rape Trapped in an abusive home, 16 yr old Gemma and 12 yr old George have managed to utilize their imaginations in ways to cope...

    Started by Shaun .‎, 06-20-2011 05:26 PM
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    06-22-2011, 10:17 AM Go to last post
  19. 1st paragraph of my new book.

    135th Berkley Lane, Adel Iowa, had sat virtually untouched for the last decade. Once a proud manor house it now sat lonely and abandoned. The...

    Started by AC_Corran‎, 02-25-2012 10:55 PM
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  20. Post Editor vs Beta Reader - New Author

    Anyone have any suggestions of using a editor vs a beta reader? I just finished my first book and would need an eye to look it over. Someone gave me...

    Started by BPG7‎, 06-03-2015 02:15 PM
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    beta reader, editor, new book, novice
    • Replies: 38
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    06-08-2015, 06:54 PM Go to last post

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