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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 01:34 PM
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    08-24-2011, 01:34 PM Go to last post
  1. New Opening Chapter - Please critique

    I guess I got brave enough to post again. There's been some really good advice on here lately and I thought I would post my new opening scene. ...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 04-22-2011 04:01 PM
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    04-23-2011, 04:13 PM Go to last post
  2. First Chapter - Honesty

    Hi everyone. I really need help. I've posted this opening chapter before and done some of the edits suggested. I need to know why or if this wound...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 03-29-2011 08:48 AM
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    04-01-2011, 10:24 AM Go to last post
  3. Loss of a baby - Flashback scene

    This is a flashback scene in my first chapter. I've read that today's reader does not like flashback scenes? Also this is her reflecting on the...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-24-2011 06:29 PM
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    02-27-2011, 03:15 PM Go to last post
  4. Fat Cat Syndrome - Critique

    This is my opening scene for a novel I've written about the Fat Cat preachers in churches. I was hoping for a critique on this, to see if it's...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-11-2011 07:02 PM
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    02-16-2011, 05:48 AM Go to last post
  5. White Mocha Opening Scene - Critique

    Some of you have helped me so much with this. I wanted to repost because I have changed the opening of my first chapter to begin with the card and...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-08-2011 06:32 AM
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    • Replies: 14
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    02-09-2011, 08:03 AM Go to last post
  6. Writing from a man's POV - Paranormal Romance

    This is a scene between the nephilim and their father, the fallen angel. This is the beginning of the second chapter in my novel, I switch between...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 01-25-2011 10:16 AM
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    01-31-2011, 05:44 PM Go to last post
  7. White Chocolate Mocha - Opening Scene

    I know that the opening line, paragraph, scene must capture an agent's attention and I would love to know if this is interesting, boring, terrible. ...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 01-21-2011 11:22 AM
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    08-27-2011, 04:10 AM Go to last post
  8. Something New - Critique please

    Hi everyone! Happy Mother's day to all the moms out there. I thought I would post something for critique that I've been working on. It's my opening...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 05-08-2011 03:12 PM
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    05-20-2011, 02:03 AM Go to last post
  9. Opening Scene - Revised

    Sorry if this is double posted. I've been working on my opening scene again and have tried to consider all the wonderful critiques I've received....

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 05-17-2011 10:02 AM
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    • Replies: 41
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    05-20-2011, 02:11 AM Go to last post
  10. Candy Apples and Protein

    I've been working on some flash fiction once again to help with my writing. I would love to know what you guys think of this little ditty. ...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 09-01-2011 07:02 AM
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    09-16-2011, 06:56 PM Go to last post
  11. Sugar Me Sweet

    Hi everyone, it's been a while since I've posted anything. I'm taking a break from my book to work on my writing and trying to do small pieces so I...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 06-04-2011 02:16 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    06-05-2011, 04:05 AM Go to last post
  12. Hollar Dollar

    Hi everyone. Here's a short piece I've been working on, once again working on the craft of writing. I'm really trying to be specific, intentional...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 06-19-2011 04:52 PM
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    06-22-2011, 07:54 AM Go to last post
  13. Hollar Dollar - REVISED

    If you aren't sick of me yet, would you mind looking over the revised version? I've been adding in all the amazing suggestions I received and wanted...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 06-22-2011 06:27 PM
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    06-30-2011, 08:15 PM Go to last post
  14. Her Whimsical Stick Figure Family

    Just for fun, I wrote this little ditty about those damn stick figures on the back of everyone's car. I do like them, but some I find annoying! LOL...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 07-16-2011 06:02 PM
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    07-16-2011, 06:02 PM Go to last post
  15. Phone Tree - critique

    Hi Everyone, again I've been working on my craft, this time with a little poetry. I would love some feedback, am grateful for the good and the bad. ...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 07-14-2011 04:34 AM
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    07-17-2011, 06:00 AM Go to last post
  16. Over the river and through the woods

    Here's poem I recently wrote to work on my writing. Critique if you like or simply enjoy! Thanks for reading. Amylou Over the river and...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 07-24-2011 05:31 PM
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    08-09-2011, 12:18 PM Go to last post
  17. 376 Friends to Impress

    Another exercise to improve my writing, descriptions, things like that. I would love a critique if you don't mind. I'm interested in attempting to...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 08-02-2011 07:48 AM
    • Replies: 9
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    08-02-2011, 02:48 PM Go to last post
  18. Opening Scene - White Chocolate Mocha

    This is the new opening chapter to my first novel. I've posted this many times before with different openings. After the advice I received here, I...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 08-04-2011 01:16 PM
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    • Replies: 13
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    08-08-2011, 09:49 PM Go to last post
  19. Easy, Breezy, Beautiful - (Copper Glaze Sienna Revised)

    I've worked this over, corrected the mistakes and even had the opportunity to have a published poet give me a fantastic critique! So very excited and...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 08-15-2011 06:00 AM
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    • Replies: 13
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    08-16-2011, 05:56 AM Go to last post
  20. Flashback Scene~chapter 1

    This is the second scene in my first chapter, right after Gavin leaves. It's a flashback, and I've heard some bad things about doing this. Is this...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 10-08-2011 08:32 PM
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    • Replies: 60
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    10-16-2011, 02:12 PM Go to last post

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