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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 01:34 PM
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  1. Excerpt from Tales of Erets Book Two

    So, below is an excerpt from a book I'm still in the process of editing, the sequel to the book I published to amazon.com. This is book two in the...

    Started by Nico‎, 08-13-2014 10:34 AM
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  2. The Real Chapter 1

    You asked for it, so here it is: the real Chapter 1, which is very dialog-heavy. Some of the missing punctuation might be from converting it to a...

    Started by Rich Plowden‎, 06-04-2016 06:34 AM
    • Replies: 2
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    06-04-2016, 06:43 AM Go to last post
  3. Hidden Elements Chapter 1 REVISED

    Hi everyone, I've finished reading through the first 3 books in Hidden Elements, and did a lot of editing/omitting, in favor of increasing the pacing...

    Started by KarmaExists‎, 05-25-2016 09:52 PM
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    05-26-2016, 11:52 AM Go to last post
  4. My writing samples

    This from a sci-fi I'm working on now. Thanks. I rolled on my back to face the sky, the stiff pain in my neck reemerged for a moment then...

    Started by 06Casuality‎, 12-09-2013 06:05 AM
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    1 2 3 ... 5
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    05-22-2016, 12:48 PM Go to last post
  5. Haven't used Writers Net in a while.

    I haven't used Writers Net in a long time, but I remember the critiques being tough, and that's what I'm looking for. This is a piece of a novel that...

    Started by cubist0‎, 02-22-2016 08:12 AM
    science fiction
    • Replies: 6
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    04-27-2016, 01:39 PM Go to last post
  6. comedy script, "The Off Chance"

    Hey everyone, this is a storyline based on a comic that's been in the works for a few years. I thought it'd be interesting to develop the characters...

    Started by KarmaExists‎, 03-24-2016 05:52 AM
    • Replies: 6
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    03-30-2016, 07:16 AM Go to last post
  7. Post My first writing, non-fiction (memoirs)

    I am trying to get a link posted, so here it is: Link for the chapter:...

    Started by ciordan‎, 02-21-2016 04:43 AM
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    02-22-2016, 10:44 PM Go to last post
  8. Second try, new story

    I gave up on the other one. I just couldn't avoid both cheesiness ans cliches, so I made another attempt. Here goes? The world was coming to an...

    Started by serenalover‎, 02-17-2016 03:58 AM
    • Replies: 5
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    02-22-2016, 05:55 AM Go to last post
  9. Post First attempt to write other than love letters to my ex-es :)

    Hi everyone, So, filler posts in order to reach the "5" count so I can post the link

    Started by ciordan‎, 02-21-2016 04:37 AM
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    02-22-2016, 05:35 AM Go to last post
  10. 4th post continued

    ... because what I intend to give you guys to read is more than 1000 words which is beyond to what's allowed here as normal text in a post.

    Started by ciordan‎, 02-21-2016 04:41 AM
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    02-21-2016, 03:51 PM Go to last post
  11. I am new here..

    ... and is beyond me why do I need to have 5 posts in order to post the link to my writing.... (continuation in my 5th and final filler post)

    Started by ciordan‎, 02-21-2016 04:40 AM
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    02-21-2016, 03:44 PM Go to last post
  12. Post Now I have 3 posts

    With any luck I will be able to post the link

    Started by ciordan‎, 02-21-2016 04:38 AM
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  13. My Blurb

    Here's my Blurb. I have a hell of a time doing summaries let alone blurbs. Please critique please and thanks.... When a string of endless problems...

    Started by DaBlaRR‎, 02-12-2016 08:12 AM
    • Replies: 7
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    02-12-2016, 01:09 PM Go to last post
  14. Chapter 1 of my first novel

    Hey everyone, I am a new author looking to gain an audience/readership for my novel series, "Hidden Elements". I've made the first chapter available...

    Started by KarmaExists‎, 01-26-2016 12:46 AM
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    1 2
    • Replies: 19
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    02-11-2016, 10:33 AM Go to last post
  15. First Novel - Book Blurb - Feedback

    Hello all I would appreciate feedback on my blurb for my novel (which I found harder to write than the first chapter of my book - for some strange...

    Started by MJTennant‎, 02-10-2016 10:55 PM
    • Replies: 3
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    02-11-2016, 10:17 AM Go to last post
  16. First eva chapter.

    So, I would like a few thoughts, as long as they are keeping in mind this is my first attempt. Of my first book. Ever. So, please try to be nice. I...

    Started by serenalover‎, 01-25-2016 05:05 AM
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    01-25-2016, 08:09 PM Go to last post
  17. First page

    I've had the idea for a novel for a while. I just started writing it recent and am finished with the first two chapters. I was hoping to get some...

    Started by mpalenik‎, 01-20-2016 10:08 AM
    5 Pages
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    01-25-2016, 12:02 PM Go to last post
  18. Chapter 2 of my Novel

    This is the second chapter in my novel. The previous chapter this character (my MC's mother)... gone into a big argument with Christian her son, who...

    Started by DaBlaRR‎, 01-20-2016 11:45 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 17
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    01-22-2016, 02:07 PM Go to last post
  19. Please give me your thoughts Chapter 1 cont. Revised

    I have tried to take to heart much of what has been offered. Please let me know what you think of the revision. Chapter 1 - Confusion Rev.1 ...

    Started by GPickstock‎, 01-17-2016 04:49 AM
    • Replies: 3
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    01-20-2016, 08:20 PM Go to last post
  20. Please give me your thoughts - Nonexistent chapter 1 concluded

    Pulling into the parking lot, Peter was taken back to the early days of the business. Hammond Lock & Key began as a small locksmith business. It was...

    Started by GPickstock‎, 01-20-2016 01:12 PM
    • Replies: 0
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    01-20-2016, 01:12 PM Go to last post

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