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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 01:34 PM
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    Victoria
    08-24-2011, 01:34 PM Go to last post

  1. In Vaine

    I noticed not a lot has been posted for a few days. This is supposed to be a dream scene. Have at it. Savannah walked into the misty room....

    Started by Margaret Compeau‎, 02-28-2011 09:42 PM
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    Margaret Compeau
    03-11-2011, 06:16 AM Go to last post

  2. Opinions please

    Here is the first chapters of my book please read them and tell me what you think. And i know there are tons of mistakes of all kinds Prologue ...

    Started by blake coleman‎, 03-04-2011 03:34 PM
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    Lea Zalas
    03-08-2011, 04:03 PM Go to last post

  3. 422

    Any comments or suggestions would be really helpful. Thanks! Detective Gerald William Orlovsky eased his black 2000 Chrysler Cirrus LX into one...

    Started by imported_Kelsea Burnside‎, 03-07-2011 10:56 AM
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    Herman Munster
    03-07-2011, 07:34 PM Go to last post

  4. The Sound of Music 2.0

    One day a hog of a murderous pig was crossing the fen at night to kill some hens in the underbrush over by old man rooster's pig house, but then a...

    Started by imported_Zog Kadare‎, 03-06-2011 06:29 PM
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    Aver0n 2o11
    03-06-2011, 09:47 PM Go to last post

  5. My first ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever story, three years ago and I'm still proud, even though it is a bit poo

    Rocket to Russia I know her. Those mannerisms. Her brightly coloured contact lenses give the impression of a glittering mermaid reflecting the...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 03-02-2011 10:29 AM
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    03-06-2011, 10:06 AM Go to last post

  6. Hopng for a constructive criticism.....:)

    Dear Writers, first of all, thank you all for reading. It would be of a great help to know, the good and bad points of my writing. Trust me, for...

    Started by Kim Connor‎, 03-04-2011 03:40 AM
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    Kim Connor
    03-05-2011, 01:31 AM Go to last post

  7. which scene first?

    I'm working on the opening of my thriller and cannot decide which of the following scenes should go first. Chronologically they are now in reverse...

    Started by Kenneth Teicher‎, 02-23-2011 12:14 PM
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    Julie Harris
    02-28-2011, 12:22 PM Go to last post

  8. Her hairs stood on end....

    As there's nothing to look at either in the Q forum or here, yet again. I'll post one of the sentences I underlined in a book I enjoyed years ago. ...

    Started by C K‎, 02-22-2011 07:46 PM
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    martin shaw
    02-27-2011, 02:30 PM Go to last post

  9. Loss of a baby - Flashback scene

    This is a flashback scene in my first chapter. I've read that today's reader does not like flashback scenes? Also this is her reflecting on the...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-24-2011 05:29 PM
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    Amy Lou
    02-27-2011, 02:15 PM Go to last post

  10. For Martin - cuz he asked so nicely.

    It’s quite commonly known that all bridges are magical because they lead from one place to another place. What is less commonly known however, is...

    Started by Frank Baron‎, 02-20-2011 07:59 AM
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    Frank Baron
    02-23-2011, 07:06 AM Go to last post

  11. Our trip to war by luxury coach. What I am working on, as well as my book

    There they were, three brand spanking new Mercedes coaches parked in a row, their hissing hydraulics, like modern day dragons. Star Trek...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 02-20-2011 10:25 AM
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    02-21-2011, 11:38 AM Go to last post

  12. Just Write

    May I suggest that even the published writers on here post new ditties and suchlike... bad or good, it can only make you stronger and is more...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 02-19-2011 01:15 AM
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    Miranda Clementine
    02-20-2011, 06:14 PM Go to last post

  13. Also Split from Fat Cat Thread

    Author, you open with "It seems to me that everyone loves to jump on the "he's going down, let's throw some dirt on him" wagon." It's never you, is...

    Started by Smiling Curmudgeon‎, 02-15-2011 06:47 PM
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    Victoria
    02-20-2011, 03:58 PM Go to last post

  14. Murder Scene

    It's disturbing (at least to me), but is it chilling? “You’re the envoy?” she whispered, disbelieving. He nodded, keeping his face to the...

    Started by Delany Sierra Sierra‎, 02-18-2011 07:55 PM
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    martin shaw
    02-20-2011, 12:12 PM Go to last post

  15. Opening Scene, does it captivate? or irritate? Violence warning...

    Hi everyone, hope you all are well. I have been hacking away at my opening scene, removing unneeded adjectives, sentences and whatnot. Throwing in...

    Started by Miranda Clementine‎, 02-17-2011 08:33 PM
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    Miranda Clementine
    02-19-2011, 09:13 PM Go to last post

  16. Is this better as flash fiction? or prose format? or just as it is? It's inspired by Frank, but by no means attached

    (He’s in the trees. He’s!) Make a meal of them insects, Mr. Pike. You dee shark o’ the still. I want to see you move, that flash of silver, ...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 02-17-2011 01:02 PM
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    martin shaw
    02-19-2011, 09:20 AM Go to last post

  17. Split from Fat Cat Syndrome Thread

    @Victoria, If you examine each of my posts you can easily see some relation to the author's original thread. @Leslee, My point as it...

    Started by Author Pendragin‎, 02-15-2011 07:34 AM
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    mar quesa
    02-16-2011, 05:29 PM Go to last post

  18. The Great Turbulence and Malcontent of Brimley Tinderbuss

    I, Brimly Tinderbuss, am not dismayed by the Kings new order or surprised by the populaces quiet acceptance of it. I am mortified by the meaning of...

    Started by Tobias Garrett‎, 02-07-2011 10:09 AM
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    leslee
    02-16-2011, 06:22 AM Go to last post

  19. Daring the gauntlet

    After what happened on the last post, I needed a few belts of a good Merlot before venturing to run the gauntlet. This is a revision to an earlier...

    Started by Julie Harris‎, 02-14-2011 01:38 PM
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    Julie Harris
    02-16-2011, 05:51 AM Go to last post

  20. Fat Cat Syndrome - Critique

    This is my opening scene for a novel I've written about the Fat Cat preachers in churches. I was hoping for a critique on this, to see if it's...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-11-2011 06:02 PM
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    Victoria
    02-16-2011, 04:48 AM Go to last post

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