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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 02:34 PM
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    08-24-2011, 02:34 PM Go to last post
  1. White Chocolate Mocha - Opening Scene

    I know that the opening line, paragraph, scene must capture an agent's attention and I would love to know if this is interesting, boring, terrible. ...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 01-21-2011 11:22 AM
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    08-27-2011, 05:10 AM Go to last post
  2. Newest hook--Part One

    How to Be Me. Start off poor. Dirt poor. Be embarrassed that your family is on welfare and food stamps. Be pissed at your parents for fighting all...

    Started by greg winick‎, 08-22-2011 11:03 AM
    • Replies: 7
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    08-24-2011, 04:27 AM Go to last post
  3. Exclamation What to expect when you ask for a critique at Writers.net *READ Before You Post*

    Writers.net members offer honest and unbiased critique here in the forums. When you post a writing sample for critique, you may receive responses...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-07-2011 08:18 AM
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    08-22-2011, 10:59 PM Go to last post
  4. Does this work?

    I check what people are writing on Facebook often. I have a lot of friends on there. I actually figured out why Facebook has such amazing...

    Started by greg winick‎, 08-17-2011 06:38 PM
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    08-22-2011, 07:00 PM Go to last post
  5. Newest Hook Part Two

    Go to bars with your friends every night. Make a career out of drinking and chasing girls. Get phone numbers. Go on first dates. Go out to dinner and...

    Started by greg winick‎, 08-22-2011 11:04 AM
    • Replies: 0
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  6. Cool Sample

    This is a sample of my poetry. I have been told that my poetry is better quite good. i am also writing a novel which I have gotten raving reviews...

    Started by JIM MORRISON‎, 08-20-2011 11:32 PM
    • Replies: 3
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    08-21-2011, 05:29 PM Go to last post
  7. ROXANE ch. 1

    It was suggested elsewhere that I post this. Any crit is welcome. It's historical fiction, set in Persia, 332 B.C. ... “Scavenger birds shall...

    Started by SapphireBlue‎, 08-15-2011 11:28 AM
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    • Replies: 17
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    08-21-2011, 02:53 PM Go to last post
  8. White Chocolate Mocha - REVISED

    Hey, I'm back. I've worked on this all weekend and I want to know if this is better or have I made it worse. I've added some to it and hopefully...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 08-07-2011 06:26 PM
    6 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 6
    • Replies: 50
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    08-21-2011, 05:18 AM Go to last post
  9. Toil and Trouble by my late husband, what is your opinions?

    Chapter One Toil and Trouble By Kim D. Eckert Saturday nights were...

    Started by Tyler Eckert‎, 08-12-2011 10:55 AM
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    08-20-2011, 10:34 AM Go to last post
  10. O.K. here goes;; first few pages of my novel.

    CULLODEN BATTLEFIELD THE SCOTTISH HIGHLANDS April 16th 1746 The sudden noise did not rouse him from slumber, for he was not asleep. The...

    Started by Keith Miller‎, 08-07-2011 01:05 PM
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    08-19-2011, 07:27 PM Go to last post
  11. Smile A long-abandoned novel attempt revisited. Any thoughts greatly appreciated. (Chap 1)

    “How much are we at?” Todd asked, dropping the last candle into his basket. He’d been to several stores today and cleaned them all out. “$11.40...

    Started by Don Mcfarland‎, 07-29-2011 04:15 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    08-19-2011, 07:20 PM Go to last post
  12. critique first 5 pages of novel?

    Part I “You love me,” Maddy said. "No I don't." "You love me." "Love when expressed gets halved." "So you love me." "No I don’t." ...

    Started by M.S.B. Jeep‎, 08-10-2011 02:27 PM
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    08-19-2011, 07:10 PM Go to last post
  13. Go ahead, I can take it..

    I've been reading, and see lots and lots of people who come in here to post writing samples for critique, and then get all upset when they get a...

    Started by NS fw‎, 08-17-2011 01:38 PM
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    08-19-2011, 06:48 PM Go to last post
  14. Sinners & Saints, page 1

    Posting page 1 for a critique. whatever hits you, i appreciate any any all feedback. I dream of horrifying and beautiful things. My name is...

    Started by David Balzarini‎, 08-18-2011 11:12 PM
    • Replies: 0
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    08-18-2011, 11:12 PM Go to last post
  15. Personal Memoir

    This is only a portion of what I have written please feel free to let it rip. Thank you in advance. One day as I was walking around,...

    Started by Esther Ouellette‎, 08-18-2011 09:10 AM
    • Replies: 1
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    08-18-2011, 08:26 PM Go to last post
  16. Easy, Breezy, Beautiful - (Copper Glaze Sienna Revised)

    I've worked this over, corrected the mistakes and even had the opportunity to have a published poet give me a fantastic critique! So very excited and...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 08-15-2011 07:00 AM
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    08-16-2011, 06:56 AM Go to last post
  17. Critique of the opening scene in a horror novel

    I look forward to both positive and negative input. Thanks!! Bethlehem Boarding School, burrowed in the valley...

    Started by Henry Castle‎, 08-10-2011 12:24 PM
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    08-14-2011, 07:35 PM Go to last post
  18. Satan's Keep again revised

    Your thoughts please. Alex recently suffered a ladder fall that caused a concussion, affecting his long term memory. It is imperative he regain...

    Started by L K‎, 08-03-2011 04:49 PM
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    08-14-2011, 05:27 PM Go to last post
  19. First 416 words of The African Adventures of Alyssa Norris

    Sorrow rose inside of a beautiful skinny girl as she gazed at the framed picture from top to bottom, noting every detail of the woman standing in...

    Started by Sunayna Prasad‎, 08-12-2011 10:32 AM
    • Replies: 7
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    08-13-2011, 11:28 AM Go to last post
  20. Post Chosen by the Stars....Please read and comment....

    This is just one of many pieces my late husband has done, it is my hopes to see him published. I have always felt that he had a God given gift for...

    Started by Tyler Eckert‎, 08-10-2011 10:00 AM
    • Replies: 7
    • Views: 386
    08-11-2011, 10:22 AM Go to last post

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