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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 01:34 PM
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    08-24-2011, 01:34 PM Go to last post
  1. Major Mumba, I Presume?

    This is a second novel I'm working on. I have only two chapters completed; a continuation of Richard Blaine. Major Mumba, I Presume? Chapter...

    Started by Jodie Christian‎, 09-13-2011 12:00 PM
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    09-17-2011, 07:33 AM Go to last post
  2. Candy Apples and Protein

    I've been working on some flash fiction once again to help with my writing. I would love to know what you guys think of this little ditty. ...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 09-01-2011 07:02 AM
    8 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 8
    • Replies: 72
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    09-16-2011, 06:56 PM Go to last post
  3. Fix Me (YA Thriller)

    Chapter One “Just take it,” Yolexa says as we stand behind some bleachers. “Come on Pen, I know you want to.” Yo’s thick brown hair waves like a...

    Started by Lisa Cronkhite‎, 09-14-2011 01:29 AM
    • Replies: 8
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    09-16-2011, 03:57 PM Go to last post
  4. A Funny Thing Happened On My Way Here

    I get a lot of U.S. Postal mail, junk-mail addressed to Ms. Jodie Christian. It's a common error I've gotten used to over the years and prudently...

    Started by Jodie Christian‎, 09-15-2011 11:05 AM
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    1 2
    • Replies: 16
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    09-16-2011, 03:04 PM Go to last post
  5. Here is part of my first chapter - I am kind of scared.... :(

    Chapter One So here I am lying in my bed, with my laptop (which seems to have been my closest friend for years now), and I want to write...

    Started by Bina Bear‎, 01-18-2011 05:21 PM
    4 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 4
    • Replies: 31
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    09-13-2011, 12:44 PM Go to last post
  6. Novel beginning, (moved from writing craft threads)

    I apologise if I overstepped any lines restarting this here. Hi everyone. Here is the re-write, (changes in green so you don’t need to re-read it...

    Started by Robert Clohesy‎, 08-24-2011 08:33 PM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 24
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    09-13-2011, 12:27 PM Go to last post
  7. Richard Blaine

    Richard Blaine gives essence to the question that has puzzled many for years – Who was Rick before he opened Rick’s Café? Even for the younger...

    Started by Jodie Christian‎, 09-11-2011 10:21 AM
    7 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 7
    • Replies: 65
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    09-13-2011, 11:37 AM Go to last post
  8. Richard Blaine Chapter 13

    Blaine has inadvertently crossed over into the mob and doesn't like it; but has to deal with it the best way he can 13 Alliance with the...

    Started by Jodie Christian‎, 09-12-2011 11:53 AM
    • Replies: 8
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    09-13-2011, 10:45 AM Go to last post
  9. I listened and (hopefully) learned.

    I want to thank all those who offered constructive critique on my first draft. I have taken on board what was said and have cleaned it up. A...

    Started by Keith Miller‎, 08-27-2011 03:07 AM
    • Replies: 4
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    09-12-2011, 03:45 AM Go to last post
  10. What I've been working on.

    Sticking to the 1000 word rule I only have enough room to post the prelude to the first chapter, in which character wakes up. I had the...

    Started by Megan McCook‎, 08-30-2011 11:20 AM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 13
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    09-11-2011, 01:17 PM Go to last post
  11. Post first draft

    Ok this is just something i have been workin on for a few hours now, and am wandering how is it flowing? i know there are tons of grammer issues and...

    Started by blake coleman‎, 08-24-2011 03:52 PM
    • Replies: 9
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    09-11-2011, 10:52 AM Go to last post
  12. dream sequence revised

    I've decided to move this further into the novel, which will no longer begin with Juniper waking. I'm hoping I've improved the flow. I had the...

    Started by Megan McCook‎, 09-01-2011 11:27 AM
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    • Replies: 10
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    09-06-2011, 03:41 PM Go to last post
  13. new beginning

    Shuffled things around. Hopefully this will prove to be a better beginning. Thank you very much for you opinions. They've proved to be quite a kick...

    Started by Megan McCook‎, 09-02-2011 11:04 AM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 15
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    09-05-2011, 09:33 AM Go to last post
  14. Query woes

    I'd appreciate and need some help here here if anyone has some suggestions. I'm also curious... does anyone consider "Satire" a category, such as...

    Started by J D‎, 09-04-2011 07:30 PM
    • Replies: 0
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    09-04-2011, 07:30 PM Go to last post
  15. Beginning of Ch 1

    She rises as she often does, before the sun. Turning restlessly in her bed, snatches of strange dreams drifting away as consciousness drifts in. Her...

    Started by Megan McCook‎, 08-31-2011 05:20 AM
    4 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 4
    • Replies: 31
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    09-01-2011, 04:52 PM Go to last post
  16. The Socratic Trucker

    Prelude: The engine brakes roared as the eighteen-wheeled machine fought against the relentless pull of gravity, doggedly claiming its 72,000...

    Started by Roger Farinha‎, 08-27-2011 10:00 AM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 25
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    08-31-2011, 03:53 AM Go to last post
  17. First three pages from my fantasy novel "Familiar"! Criticism Wanted!

    Ok, everyone I have asked to read over this so far has been very biased, so what I am really looking for is what works and what doesn't. I'm a little...

    Started by Becca Allan‎, 08-29-2011 07:54 AM
    • Replies: 9
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    08-31-2011, 03:13 AM Go to last post
  18. Little Hollow Plastic Boundaries

    My favorite part of every trip to a store is the checkout line. The checkout line offers you a variety of people watching opportunities as well as a...

    Started by Jenn Murphy‎, 08-22-2011 08:10 AM
    5 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 5
    • Replies: 40
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    08-28-2011, 10:31 AM Go to last post
  19. Part of Chapter 1 of (Title to be decided)- What do you think?

    Well I now know that the critics here can be as brutal as they come so please feel free. I promise not to cry::D Here goes nothing: Chapter 1...

    Started by Bertha Mukodzani‎, 08-15-2011 12:34 PM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 15
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    08-28-2011, 06:26 AM Go to last post
  20. First chapter of awakining

    Hey guys i would really love to know how this flows. With a startling bang Dravid took off down the dim lit alley way as the brick wall above...

    Started by blake coleman‎, 08-24-2011 04:20 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 12
    • Views: 831
    08-27-2011, 06:57 AM Go to last post

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