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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 01:34 PM
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    08-24-2011, 01:34 PM Go to last post
  1. The Mechanik?

    I am itty-bitty, i.e. dirt under a finger nail: itty-bitty! In fact, gritty, gritty itty-bitty= dirt under the calcium hoof. Hoof! An itty bitty...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 09-26-2011 12:17 PM
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    09-27-2011, 12:11 PM Go to last post
  2. Excerpt from Chapter 4

    DISCLAIMER: SEXUAL/VIOLENT CONTENT Hello everyone! I know, it's been a while since I've posted here! I'm still on the hunt for an agent after...

    Started by Kyle Anderson‎, 09-20-2011 05:54 PM
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    09-21-2011, 06:42 AM Go to last post
  3. Fix Me (revision)

    Thank you all who've helped me so far. Your encouraging words are motivating! If you guys can read the revision, that would be sweet. Let me know...

    Started by Lisa Cronkhite‎, 09-17-2011 09:11 AM
    • Replies: 1
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    09-20-2011, 06:56 AM Go to last post
  4. Major Mumba, I Presume?

    This is a second novel I'm working on. I have only two chapters completed; a continuation of Richard Blaine. Major Mumba, I Presume? Chapter...

    Started by Jodie Christian‎, 09-13-2011 12:00 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 10
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    09-17-2011, 07:33 AM Go to last post
  5. Candy Apples and Protein

    I've been working on some flash fiction once again to help with my writing. I would love to know what you guys think of this little ditty. ...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 09-01-2011 07:02 AM
    8 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 8
    • Replies: 72
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    09-16-2011, 06:56 PM Go to last post
  6. Fix Me (YA Thriller)

    Chapter One “Just take it,” Yolexa says as we stand behind some bleachers. “Come on Pen, I know you want to.” Yo’s thick brown hair waves like a...

    Started by Lisa Cronkhite‎, 09-14-2011 01:29 AM
    • Replies: 8
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    09-16-2011, 03:57 PM Go to last post
  7. A Funny Thing Happened On My Way Here

    I get a lot of U.S. Postal mail, junk-mail addressed to Ms. Jodie Christian. It's a common error I've gotten used to over the years and prudently...

    Started by Jodie Christian‎, 09-15-2011 11:05 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 16
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    09-16-2011, 03:04 PM Go to last post
  8. Here is part of my first chapter - I am kind of scared.... :(

    Chapter One So here I am lying in my bed, with my laptop (which seems to have been my closest friend for years now), and I want to write...

    Started by Bina Bear‎, 01-18-2011 05:21 PM
    4 Pages
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    • Replies: 31
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    09-13-2011, 12:44 PM Go to last post
  9. Novel beginning, (moved from writing craft threads)

    I apologise if I overstepped any lines restarting this here. Hi everyone. Here is the re-write, (changes in green so you don’t need to re-read it...

    Started by Robert Clohesy‎, 08-24-2011 08:33 PM
    3 Pages
    1 2 3
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    09-13-2011, 12:27 PM Go to last post
  10. Richard Blaine

    Richard Blaine gives essence to the question that has puzzled many for years – Who was Rick before he opened Rick’s Café? Even for the younger...

    Started by Jodie Christian‎, 09-11-2011 10:21 AM
    7 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 7
    • Replies: 65
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    09-13-2011, 11:37 AM Go to last post
  11. Richard Blaine Chapter 13

    Blaine has inadvertently crossed over into the mob and doesn't like it; but has to deal with it the best way he can 13 Alliance with the...

    Started by Jodie Christian‎, 09-12-2011 11:53 AM
    • Replies: 8
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    09-13-2011, 10:45 AM Go to last post
  12. I listened and (hopefully) learned.

    I want to thank all those who offered constructive critique on my first draft. I have taken on board what was said and have cleaned it up. A...

    Started by Keith Miller‎, 08-27-2011 03:07 AM
    • Replies: 4
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    09-12-2011, 03:45 AM Go to last post
  13. What I've been working on.

    Sticking to the 1000 word rule I only have enough room to post the prelude to the first chapter, in which character wakes up. I had the...

    Started by Megan McCook‎, 08-30-2011 11:20 AM
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    • Replies: 13
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    09-11-2011, 01:17 PM Go to last post
  14. Post first draft

    Ok this is just something i have been workin on for a few hours now, and am wandering how is it flowing? i know there are tons of grammer issues and...

    Started by blake coleman‎, 08-24-2011 03:52 PM
    • Replies: 9
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    09-11-2011, 10:52 AM Go to last post
  15. dream sequence revised

    I've decided to move this further into the novel, which will no longer begin with Juniper waking. I'm hoping I've improved the flow. I had the...

    Started by Megan McCook‎, 09-01-2011 11:27 AM
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    • Replies: 10
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    09-06-2011, 03:41 PM Go to last post
  16. new beginning

    Shuffled things around. Hopefully this will prove to be a better beginning. Thank you very much for you opinions. They've proved to be quite a kick...

    Started by Megan McCook‎, 09-02-2011 11:04 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 15
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    09-05-2011, 09:33 AM Go to last post
  17. Query woes

    I'd appreciate and need some help here here if anyone has some suggestions. I'm also curious... does anyone consider "Satire" a category, such as...

    Started by J D‎, 09-04-2011 07:30 PM
    • Replies: 0
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    09-04-2011, 07:30 PM Go to last post
  18. Beginning of Ch 1

    She rises as she often does, before the sun. Turning restlessly in her bed, snatches of strange dreams drifting away as consciousness drifts in. Her...

    Started by Megan McCook‎, 08-31-2011 05:20 AM
    4 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 4
    • Replies: 31
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    09-01-2011, 04:52 PM Go to last post
  19. The Socratic Trucker

    Prelude: The engine brakes roared as the eighteen-wheeled machine fought against the relentless pull of gravity, doggedly claiming its 72,000...

    Started by Roger Farinha‎, 08-27-2011 10:00 AM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 25
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    08-31-2011, 03:53 AM Go to last post
  20. First three pages from my fantasy novel "Familiar"! Criticism Wanted!

    Ok, everyone I have asked to read over this so far has been very biased, so what I am really looking for is what works and what doesn't. I'm a little...

    Started by Becca Allan‎, 08-29-2011 07:54 AM
    • Replies: 9
    • Views: 634
    08-31-2011, 03:13 AM Go to last post

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