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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 01:34 PM
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    08-24-2011, 01:34 PM Go to last post
  1. A kind of a love scene..

    I was looking over a scene from my satire, feeling frustrated and drinking a rum and coke, saw this "writing critique thread" so I figured I'd throw...

    Started by J D‎, 09-30-2011 05:06 PM
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    10-02-2011, 06:05 PM Go to last post
  2. The date from hell... chapter excerpt from Snaggler's Paradise

    The post-pubescent duo stepped into the parking lot. Both young men giggled like giddy teenagers. In the distance, the darkened silhouettes of two...

    Started by J D‎, 10-02-2011 08:30 AM
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    10-02-2011, 04:27 PM Go to last post
  3. Part one of The African Adventures of Alyssa Norris first chapter

    A thin girl of around twelve gazed at a framed picture of her aunt, causing tears to fill her blue eyes as sorrow welled up again. Her aunt leaned...

    Started by Sunayna Prasad‎, 09-24-2011 04:43 AM
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    10-02-2011, 09:28 AM Go to last post
  4. New hear, looking for opinions, first couple of pages, fantasy novel.

    At the edge of the woods, less than half a league from the castle’s walls, apart from the rest of the forest, stood a single, leafless and ancient...

    Started by Kieron Dodds‎, 08-08-2011 06:02 PM
    5 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 5
    • Replies: 40
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    10-01-2011, 08:14 AM Go to last post
  5. Please be honest- am I deluded or not?

    Hello Everyone, This is an extract from something I am writing and I would really like to know what people think. Any comments gratefully...

    Started by Susan B‎, 09-21-2011 05:25 AM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 12
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    09-29-2011, 12:26 AM Go to last post
  6. Desert Life

    (I know I've made horrific errors in the following, and I am looking for help, I'd rather not be forged and tempered in the fires of Hell though). ...

    Started by Walter Feller‎, 09-20-2011 05:09 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 10
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    09-29-2011, 12:00 AM Go to last post
  7. WIP (Sunstone Chronicles for now), Prologue

    Hi all, been a while since I posted. I'm trying to work up some creative energy to continue working on increasing my writing volume since my...

    Started by John Chritton‎, 09-16-2011 02:08 PM
    6 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 6
    • Replies: 56
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    09-28-2011, 11:17 AM Go to last post
  8. The Mechanik?

    I am itty-bitty, i.e. dirt under a finger nail: itty-bitty! In fact, gritty, gritty itty-bitty= dirt under the calcium hoof. Hoof! An itty bitty...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 09-26-2011 12:17 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    09-27-2011, 12:11 PM Go to last post
  9. Excerpt from Chapter 4

    DISCLAIMER: SEXUAL/VIOLENT CONTENT Hello everyone! I know, it's been a while since I've posted here! I'm still on the hunt for an agent after...

    Started by Kyle Anderson‎, 09-20-2011 05:54 PM
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    • Replies: 13
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    09-21-2011, 06:42 AM Go to last post
  10. Fix Me (revision)

    Thank you all who've helped me so far. Your encouraging words are motivating! If you guys can read the revision, that would be sweet. Let me know...

    Started by Lisa Cronkhite‎, 09-17-2011 09:11 AM
    • Replies: 1
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    09-20-2011, 06:56 AM Go to last post
  11. Major Mumba, I Presume?

    This is a second novel I'm working on. I have only two chapters completed; a continuation of Richard Blaine. Major Mumba, I Presume? Chapter...

    Started by Jodie Christian‎, 09-13-2011 12:00 PM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 10
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    09-17-2011, 07:33 AM Go to last post
  12. Candy Apples and Protein

    I've been working on some flash fiction once again to help with my writing. I would love to know what you guys think of this little ditty. ...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 09-01-2011 07:02 AM
    8 Pages
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    09-16-2011, 06:56 PM Go to last post
  13. Fix Me (YA Thriller)

    Chapter One “Just take it,” Yolexa says as we stand behind some bleachers. “Come on Pen, I know you want to.” Yo’s thick brown hair waves like a...

    Started by Lisa Cronkhite‎, 09-14-2011 01:29 AM
    • Replies: 8
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    09-16-2011, 03:57 PM Go to last post
  14. A Funny Thing Happened On My Way Here

    I get a lot of U.S. Postal mail, junk-mail addressed to Ms. Jodie Christian. It's a common error I've gotten used to over the years and prudently...

    Started by Jodie Christian‎, 09-15-2011 11:05 AM
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    09-16-2011, 03:04 PM Go to last post
  15. Here is part of my first chapter - I am kind of scared.... :(

    Chapter One So here I am lying in my bed, with my laptop (which seems to have been my closest friend for years now), and I want to write...

    Started by Bina Bear‎, 01-18-2011 05:21 PM
    4 Pages
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    • Replies: 31
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    09-13-2011, 12:44 PM Go to last post
  16. Novel beginning, (moved from writing craft threads)

    I apologise if I overstepped any lines restarting this here. Hi everyone. Here is the re-write, (changes in green so you don’t need to re-read it...

    Started by Robert Clohesy‎, 08-24-2011 08:33 PM
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    09-13-2011, 12:27 PM Go to last post
  17. Richard Blaine

    Richard Blaine gives essence to the question that has puzzled many for years – Who was Rick before he opened Rick’s Café? Even for the younger...

    Started by Jodie Christian‎, 09-11-2011 10:21 AM
    7 Pages
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    09-13-2011, 11:37 AM Go to last post
  18. Richard Blaine Chapter 13

    Blaine has inadvertently crossed over into the mob and doesn't like it; but has to deal with it the best way he can 13 Alliance with the...

    Started by Jodie Christian‎, 09-12-2011 11:53 AM
    • Replies: 8
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    09-13-2011, 10:45 AM Go to last post
  19. I listened and (hopefully) learned.

    I want to thank all those who offered constructive critique on my first draft. I have taken on board what was said and have cleaned it up. A...

    Started by Keith Miller‎, 08-27-2011 03:07 AM
    • Replies: 4
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    09-12-2011, 03:45 AM Go to last post
  20. What I've been working on.

    Sticking to the 1000 word rule I only have enough room to post the prelude to the first chapter, in which character wakes up. I had the...

    Started by Megan McCook‎, 08-30-2011 11:20 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 13
    • Views: 855
    09-11-2011, 01:17 PM Go to last post

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