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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 01:34 PM
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  1. dream sequence revised

    I've decided to move this further into the novel, which will no longer begin with Juniper waking. I'm hoping I've improved the flow. I had the...

    Started by Megan McCook‎, 09-01-2011 11:27 AM
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    09-06-2011, 03:41 PM Go to last post
  2. new beginning

    Shuffled things around. Hopefully this will prove to be a better beginning. Thank you very much for you opinions. They've proved to be quite a kick...

    Started by Megan McCook‎, 09-02-2011 11:04 AM
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    09-05-2011, 09:33 AM Go to last post
  3. Query woes

    I'd appreciate and need some help here here if anyone has some suggestions. I'm also curious... does anyone consider "Satire" a category, such as...

    Started by J D‎, 09-04-2011 07:30 PM
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  4. Beginning of Ch 1

    She rises as she often does, before the sun. Turning restlessly in her bed, snatches of strange dreams drifting away as consciousness drifts in. Her...

    Started by Megan McCook‎, 08-31-2011 05:20 AM
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    09-01-2011, 04:52 PM Go to last post
  5. The Socratic Trucker

    Prelude: The engine brakes roared as the eighteen-wheeled machine fought against the relentless pull of gravity, doggedly claiming its 72,000...

    Started by Roger Farinha‎, 08-27-2011 10:00 AM
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    08-31-2011, 03:53 AM Go to last post
  6. First three pages from my fantasy novel "Familiar"! Criticism Wanted!

    Ok, everyone I have asked to read over this so far has been very biased, so what I am really looking for is what works and what doesn't. I'm a little...

    Started by Becca Allan‎, 08-29-2011 07:54 AM
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    08-31-2011, 03:13 AM Go to last post
  7. Little Hollow Plastic Boundaries

    My favorite part of every trip to a store is the checkout line. The checkout line offers you a variety of people watching opportunities as well as a...

    Started by Jenn Murphy‎, 08-22-2011 08:10 AM
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    08-28-2011, 10:31 AM Go to last post
  8. Part of Chapter 1 of (Title to be decided)- What do you think?

    Well I now know that the critics here can be as brutal as they come so please feel free. I promise not to cry::D Here goes nothing: Chapter 1...

    Started by Bertha Mukodzani‎, 08-15-2011 12:34 PM
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    08-28-2011, 06:26 AM Go to last post
  9. First chapter of awakining

    Hey guys i would really love to know how this flows. With a startling bang Dravid took off down the dim lit alley way as the brick wall above...

    Started by blake coleman‎, 08-24-2011 04:20 PM
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    08-27-2011, 06:57 AM Go to last post
  10. White Chocolate Mocha - Opening Scene

    I know that the opening line, paragraph, scene must capture an agent's attention and I would love to know if this is interesting, boring, terrible. ...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 01-21-2011 10:22 AM
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    08-27-2011, 04:10 AM Go to last post
  11. Newest hook--Part One

    How to Be Me. Start off poor. Dirt poor. Be embarrassed that your family is on welfare and food stamps. Be pissed at your parents for fighting all...

    Started by greg winick‎, 08-22-2011 10:03 AM
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    08-24-2011, 03:27 AM Go to last post
  12. Exclamation What to expect when you ask for a critique at Writers.net *READ Before You Post*

    Writers.net members offer honest and unbiased critique here in the forums. When you post a writing sample for critique, you may receive responses...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-07-2011 07:18 AM
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    08-22-2011, 09:59 PM Go to last post
  13. Does this work?

    I check what people are writing on Facebook often. I have a lot of friends on there. I actually figured out why Facebook has such amazing...

    Started by greg winick‎, 08-17-2011 05:38 PM
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    08-22-2011, 06:00 PM Go to last post
  14. Newest Hook Part Two

    Go to bars with your friends every night. Make a career out of drinking and chasing girls. Get phone numbers. Go on first dates. Go out to dinner and...

    Started by greg winick‎, 08-22-2011 10:04 AM
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  15. Cool Sample

    This is a sample of my poetry. I have been told that my poetry is better quite good. i am also writing a novel which I have gotten raving reviews...

    Started by JIM MORRISON‎, 08-20-2011 10:32 PM
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    08-21-2011, 04:29 PM Go to last post
  16. ROXANE ch. 1

    It was suggested elsewhere that I post this. Any crit is welcome. It's historical fiction, set in Persia, 332 B.C. ... “Scavenger birds shall...

    Started by SapphireBlue‎, 08-15-2011 10:28 AM
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    08-21-2011, 01:53 PM Go to last post
  17. White Chocolate Mocha - REVISED

    Hey, I'm back. I've worked on this all weekend and I want to know if this is better or have I made it worse. I've added some to it and hopefully...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 08-07-2011 05:26 PM
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    08-21-2011, 04:18 AM Go to last post
  18. Toil and Trouble by my late husband, what is your opinions?

    Chapter One Toil and Trouble By Kim D. Eckert Saturday nights were...

    Started by Tyler Eckert‎, 08-12-2011 09:55 AM
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    08-20-2011, 09:34 AM Go to last post
  19. O.K. here goes;; first few pages of my novel.

    CULLODEN BATTLEFIELD THE SCOTTISH HIGHLANDS April 16th 1746 The sudden noise did not rouse him from slumber, for he was not asleep. The...

    Started by Keith Miller‎, 08-07-2011 12:05 PM
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    08-19-2011, 06:27 PM Go to last post
  20. Smile A long-abandoned novel attempt revisited. Any thoughts greatly appreciated. (Chap 1)

    “How much are we at?” Todd asked, dropping the last candle into his basket. He’d been to several stores today and cleaned them all out. “$11.40...

    Started by Don Mcfarland‎, 07-29-2011 03:15 PM
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    08-19-2011, 06:20 PM Go to last post

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