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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 02:34 PM
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  1. O.K. here goes;; first few pages of my novel.

    CULLODEN BATTLEFIELD THE SCOTTISH HIGHLANDS April 16th 1746 The sudden noise did not rouse him from slumber, for he was not asleep. The...

    Started by Keith Miller‎, 08-07-2011 01:05 PM
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    08-19-2011, 07:27 PM Go to last post
  2. Smile A long-abandoned novel attempt revisited. Any thoughts greatly appreciated. (Chap 1)

    “How much are we at?” Todd asked, dropping the last candle into his basket. He’d been to several stores today and cleaned them all out. “$11.40...

    Started by Don Mcfarland‎, 07-29-2011 04:15 PM
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    08-19-2011, 07:20 PM Go to last post
  3. critique first 5 pages of novel?

    Part I “You love me,” Maddy said. "No I don't." "You love me." "Love when expressed gets halved." "So you love me." "No I don’t." ...

    Started by M.S.B. Jeep‎, 08-10-2011 02:27 PM
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    08-19-2011, 07:10 PM Go to last post
  4. Go ahead, I can take it..

    I've been reading, and see lots and lots of people who come in here to post writing samples for critique, and then get all upset when they get a...

    Started by NS fw‎, 08-17-2011 01:38 PM
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    08-19-2011, 06:48 PM Go to last post
  5. Sinners & Saints, page 1

    Posting page 1 for a critique. whatever hits you, i appreciate any any all feedback. I dream of horrifying and beautiful things. My name is...

    Started by David Balzarini‎, 08-18-2011 11:12 PM
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  6. Personal Memoir

    This is only a portion of what I have written please feel free to let it rip. Thank you in advance. One day as I was walking around,...

    Started by Esther Ouellette‎, 08-18-2011 09:10 AM
    • Replies: 1
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    08-18-2011, 08:26 PM Go to last post
  7. Easy, Breezy, Beautiful - (Copper Glaze Sienna Revised)

    I've worked this over, corrected the mistakes and even had the opportunity to have a published poet give me a fantastic critique! So very excited and...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 08-15-2011 07:00 AM
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    • Replies: 13
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    08-16-2011, 06:56 AM Go to last post
  8. Critique of the opening scene in a horror novel

    I look forward to both positive and negative input. Thanks!! Bethlehem Boarding School, burrowed in the valley...

    Started by Henry Castle‎, 08-10-2011 12:24 PM
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    08-14-2011, 07:35 PM Go to last post
  9. Satan's Keep again revised

    Your thoughts please. Alex recently suffered a ladder fall that caused a concussion, affecting his long term memory. It is imperative he regain...

    Started by L K‎, 08-03-2011 04:49 PM
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    08-14-2011, 05:27 PM Go to last post
  10. First 416 words of The African Adventures of Alyssa Norris

    Sorrow rose inside of a beautiful skinny girl as she gazed at the framed picture from top to bottom, noting every detail of the woman standing in...

    Started by Sunayna Prasad‎, 08-12-2011 10:32 AM
    • Replies: 7
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    08-13-2011, 11:28 AM Go to last post
  11. Post Chosen by the Stars....Please read and comment....

    This is just one of many pieces my late husband has done, it is my hopes to see him published. I have always felt that he had a God given gift for...

    Started by Tyler Eckert‎, 08-10-2011 10:00 AM
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    08-11-2011, 10:22 AM Go to last post
  12. Over the river and through the woods

    Here's poem I recently wrote to work on my writing. Critique if you like or simply enjoy! Thanks for reading. Amylou Over the river and...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 07-24-2011 06:31 PM
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    08-09-2011, 01:18 PM Go to last post
  13. Opening Scene - White Chocolate Mocha

    This is the new opening chapter to my first novel. I've posted this many times before with different openings. After the advice I received here, I...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 08-04-2011 02:16 PM
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    08-08-2011, 10:49 PM Go to last post
  14. Satan's Keep bookliner notes

    Any comments and/or suggestions greatly appreciated. "In the past few days, the lives of Alex, his wife Ev and their best friend Florencio have...

    Started by L K‎, 07-31-2011 11:00 AM
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    08-03-2011, 07:49 AM Go to last post
  15. 376 Friends to Impress

    Another exercise to improve my writing, descriptions, things like that. I would love a critique if you don't mind. I'm interested in attempting to...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 08-02-2011 08:48 AM
    • Replies: 9
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    08-02-2011, 03:48 PM Go to last post
  16. Satan's Keep bookliner notes: Revised

    Thank you all for the input. I've revised things a bit. Please let me know your thoughts. Recently, Alex suffered a ladder fall that affected his...

    Started by L K‎, 08-01-2011 02:20 PM
    • Replies: 4
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    08-02-2011, 09:03 AM Go to last post
  17. Revised (partial scene) When Death Knocks

    Thank you, first, everyone who has offered me feedback, it has been a great help. I have revised my story and am reposting Donna's reaction...

    Started by Miranda Clementine‎, 07-30-2011 11:32 PM
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    08-01-2011, 04:40 PM Go to last post
  18. Smile A relatively short novel excerpt. Modern Fantasy/Sci-fi.

    Any and all thoughts are more than welcome. I hope you enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it. It should be noted, however, that...

    Started by Don Mcfarland‎, 07-31-2011 06:38 AM
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    08-01-2011, 12:00 PM Go to last post
  19. Elemental Touch: The Guardians of Magic (revised prologue)

    Alright, I re-read this and took some of the advise I got to heart and cut it down by about 200 words, bringing it to a single page, and also...

    Started by Jonathan Nichols‎, 07-28-2011 12:00 PM
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    07-31-2011, 08:30 PM Go to last post
  20. This is my land!!!

    I really would like to help some of you unpublished authors to get published. If you post some smaller stuff, i.e. poems- prose- flash fiction in...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 07-31-2011 12:02 AM
    • Replies: 3
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    07-31-2011, 04:06 PM Go to last post

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