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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 01:34 PM
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  1. 376 Friends to Impress

    Another exercise to improve my writing, descriptions, things like that. I would love a critique if you don't mind. I'm interested in attempting to...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 08-02-2011 07:48 AM
    • Replies: 9
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    08-02-2011, 02:48 PM Go to last post
  2. Satan's Keep bookliner notes: Revised

    Thank you all for the input. I've revised things a bit. Please let me know your thoughts. Recently, Alex suffered a ladder fall that affected his...

    Started by L K‎, 08-01-2011 01:20 PM
    • Replies: 4
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    08-02-2011, 08:03 AM Go to last post
  3. Revised (partial scene) When Death Knocks

    Thank you, first, everyone who has offered me feedback, it has been a great help. I have revised my story and am reposting Donna's reaction...

    Started by Miranda Clementine‎, 07-30-2011 10:32 PM
    • Replies: 4
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    08-01-2011, 03:40 PM Go to last post
  4. Smile A relatively short novel excerpt. Modern Fantasy/Sci-fi.

    Any and all thoughts are more than welcome. I hope you enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it. It should be noted, however, that...

    Started by Don Mcfarland‎, 07-31-2011 05:38 AM
    • Replies: 5
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    08-01-2011, 11:00 AM Go to last post
  5. Elemental Touch: The Guardians of Magic (revised prologue)

    Alright, I re-read this and took some of the advise I got to heart and cut it down by about 200 words, bringing it to a single page, and also...

    Started by Jonathan Nichols‎, 07-28-2011 11:00 AM
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    • Replies: 41
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    07-31-2011, 07:30 PM Go to last post
  6. This is my land!!!

    I really would like to help some of you unpublished authors to get published. If you post some smaller stuff, i.e. poems- prose- flash fiction in...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 07-30-2011 11:02 PM
    • Replies: 3
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    07-31-2011, 03:06 PM Go to last post
  7. "Bards’ Bondage" By Chidi Anthony Opara

    Our bards Have been bound And bundled Into bunkhouses of book barons, Their mouths bandaged. Their miens befuddled, Their bearings lost, Tis...

    Started by Zeblon Zeus‎, 07-25-2011 01:10 AM
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    • Replies: 15
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    07-29-2011, 06:09 PM Go to last post
  8. Character language

    So I'm experimenting with one of my minor character's speech. What I'm going for is a little mid-West whore and a little Calamity-Jane-Old-West...

    Started by C K‎, 05-26-2011 02:18 PM
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    07-28-2011, 01:32 PM Go to last post
  9. Candy Cupcake & Co

    Childrens book aimed at 7 - 12 year olds. Not finished book yet this is just a snip-it .Many Thanks :) Chapter 2 Five o’clock arrived,...

    Started by Ruth Bibby‎, 07-23-2011 06:33 AM
    4 Pages
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    • Replies: 35
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    07-28-2011, 05:14 AM Go to last post
  10. When Death Knocks (working title) A Short Story

    First off, WARNING: violence, sex and foul language ahead. Also thanks for looking!! I would love to receive some opinions/critiques on this piece....

    Started by Miranda Clementine‎, 07-12-2011 09:28 PM
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    • Replies: 26
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    07-27-2011, 04:41 PM Go to last post
  11. Elemental touch: The guardians of magic (prologue)

    This is a short prologue to my book. The rest of my book does not speak in generalities like this does, just fyi. I designed this to kind of sum up...

    Started by Jonathan Nichols‎, 07-26-2011 05:58 AM
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    • Replies: 10
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    07-27-2011, 12:22 PM Go to last post
  12. REVISED: THE AFTER BURN - Content: Language, Violence (1,300 words)

    Hi All, A month back, I posted a prologue and first chapter of my WIP. I took the critique I gathered and applied it to a total rewrite of the...

    Started by Diem Seven‎, 07-24-2011 11:51 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    07-27-2011, 08:41 AM Go to last post
  13. Banana Hammock (250 words)

    This for a laugh. Critique if you so desire. Let me know if you got a picture of what was going on. I’m trying to write a short with dialogue alone...

    Started by Miranda Clementine‎, 07-24-2011 11:18 PM
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    07-26-2011, 11:09 AM Go to last post
  14. 1st couple of paragraphs of 'Milecastle' - my ancient Roman Britain horror novel

    Hi folks, I'm brand new to the forum and brand new to actually writing...though I've been making up stories since childhood. I've started my 1st...

    Started by Jason Hunt‎, 07-22-2011 12:24 PM
    • Replies: 7
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    07-26-2011, 12:18 AM Go to last post
  15. The Strangler

    An idle cane clacking rails, makes a distant tock tick, while pressed apple throats in sombre streets wait for sweet poesy sisters. ...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 07-20-2011 01:30 PM
    • Replies: 9
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    07-25-2011, 12:14 PM Go to last post
  16. Escaping the Water's Edge - Take Two! 591 words

    I've been trying to apply many of the helpful critiques I've received in the rewrite of my story, particularly with regard to showing and not telling...

    Started by Cheryl Morton‎, 07-19-2011 08:55 PM
    • Replies: 9
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    07-25-2011, 03:51 AM Go to last post
  17. "Bards’ Bondage" By Chidi Anthony Opara

    Our bards Have been bound And bundled Into bunkhouses of book barons,

    Started by Zeblon Zeus‎, 07-25-2011 12:50 AM
    • Replies: 0
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    07-25-2011, 12:50 AM Go to last post
  18. Wondering (Poem) - Critique

    I'm not sure what I'm looking for exactly here, but I'd like this poem to be as refined as possible before I send it out. It's for a friend of mine...

    Started by T M‎, 07-20-2011 12:14 PM
    • Replies: 4
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    07-22-2011, 10:26 AM Go to last post
  19. Death On Strike! (is not related to the other work on Death by Miranda)

    Death On Strike! You wouldn’t think that Death knew how to use the internet, but he did. He knew how to Google a new idea just like the next...

    Started by Aver0n 2o11‎, 07-19-2011 04:16 PM
    death on strike
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    07-19-2011, 09:12 PM Go to last post
  20. First two paragraphs

    Hi everyone. I am brand new to the forum here. I have been working on a novel about a teenager who is a fan of vampire stories/history/television,...

    Started by Henry Castle‎, 07-18-2011 07:42 AM
    • Replies: 8
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    07-19-2011, 10:25 AM Go to last post

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