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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 02:34 PM
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  1. Exerpt - Help! I've lost perspective!

    Hi Everybody, This is the begining of the second chapter of a novel that takes place in Philadelphia in the spring of 1825. I've read (and...

    Started by Julie Harris‎, 03-31-2012 03:13 PM
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    04-03-2012, 10:40 AM Go to last post
  2. Prologue - Mystery/Thriller Novel

    Would love some direct critique and thoughts. Thanks in advance....

    Started by paul.abbassi‎, 03-29-2012 11:44 AM
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    03-31-2012, 11:24 AM Go to last post
  3. Draft First Chapter of Mystery/Thriller Novel - for critique

    Hi, I would love some unflinching feedback on the draft first chapter of my in-progress Mystery/Thriller novel, below: ...

    Started by paul.abbassi‎, 03-23-2012 02:22 AM
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    03-26-2012, 10:59 PM Go to last post
  4. Back cover reincarnation

    I'm thinking of making this the back cover of my third book in my series. I'm looking for opinions on the 'hook'. Is it enough to not only to read...

    Started by MUSKETTER 3‎, 03-18-2012 08:16 PM
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    03-26-2012, 10:53 AM Go to last post
  5. 1st Page Che Che Poing

    Che Che Poing Chapter 1 Her family tree was a stump Morpra was said to be half wolverine and half billy-goat with a spit of witch. Her...

    Started by Tobias Garrett‎, 03-24-2012 12:41 AM
    • Replies: 5
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    03-25-2012, 11:57 AM Go to last post
  6. Page one revised. PANDORA'S BOX

    Hi again. I took some time to digest the advice I was given on my last writing sample and worked up the courage to give it a second shot. Hereís...

    Started by n.p.doeleman‎, 03-22-2012 01:25 PM
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    03-23-2012, 08:01 AM Go to last post
  7. thoughts on unconventional narrative style?

    Below is the first page of what I've been working on lately. Is the narrative style too unconventional? Close friends have remarked that it is...

    Started by relco‎, 03-19-2012 03:06 PM
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    03-22-2012, 11:35 AM Go to last post
  8. Reincarnation revised

    Thanks to all for your input. Try this instead. Matt McCord is no stranger to Death. It could be said they are on a first name basis. ...

    Started by MUSKETTER 3‎, 03-21-2012 08:09 PM
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    03-21-2012, 10:15 PM Go to last post
  9. Smile * ROOKIE MEMBER* Query Letter - THE PHOENIX CONSPIRACY

    Hello all! I'm a new member here. I've begun the process of finding a home for my novel. I have submitted a few queries with little action. However,...

    Started by joshlisec‎, 03-17-2012 12:29 PM
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    03-21-2012, 04:17 PM Go to last post
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    how do I delete this thread?

    Started by relco‎, 03-19-2012 03:05 PM
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  11. Descriptive Paragraph (Critique)

    Hello All! Just wanted to get some critique on a descriptive paragraph in my MS, wondering if its too adjective-heavy. For contex, the MC finds...

    Started by Lyle Ven‎, 03-16-2012 05:52 AM
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    03-19-2012, 07:46 AM Go to last post
  12. Bleamy's Corner Chapter 1

    Bleamy's Corner Chapter 1 Cold Beginnings Fortune came to few and survival had to be hacked out of the mean city that tempted travelers to its...

    Started by Tobias Garrett‎, 03-17-2012 10:39 AM
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    03-18-2012, 01:48 PM Go to last post
  13. Page one, PANDORA'S BOX

    Thanks in advance to all who care to comment. PANDORAíS BOX, excerpt. Chapter One. In just a few years, the venture will begin. The...

    Started by n.p.doeleman‎, 03-14-2012 10:06 PM
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  14. First Paragraphs - comments?

    Lieco. The trademarked name stood out in red letters on blimps that overshadowed the city of Langford. They towered over the slated roofs and brick...

    Started by AdamJoseph‎, 03-14-2012 06:36 AM
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    03-16-2012, 08:38 AM Go to last post
  15. First scene - comments?

    2 Posts because length -_- Leon groaned as his eyes drifted open, the scorching pain in the back of them telling him that they didnít take kindly to...

    Started by CryingCicada‎, 03-08-2012 11:19 PM
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  16. Exert from Amethyst

    This is an exert from my fantasy/science fiction novel in progress, currently going by the name Amethyst. A set of new characters are introduced...

    Started by Allison McClish‎, 03-03-2012 07:19 PM
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    03-11-2012, 12:29 PM Go to last post
  17. Italics

    I am writing a short story where the main characters speak mentally, have private thoughts and occassionally communicate those private thoughts with...

    Started by K D Curry‎, 03-07-2012 06:11 PM
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    03-09-2012, 08:25 AM Go to last post
  18. Cover mockup.

    Anyone willing to take a look at my cover mockup? It's a bit scandalous, and I'm reluctant to just post it. I will send it in a private message to...

    Started by greg winick‎, 03-07-2012 10:24 AM
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    03-09-2012, 04:41 AM Go to last post
  19. CG Stephen

    If there is a general call for a redo ... now I'll close this thread. Very forward thinking of you. Great way to promote discussions, visit new...

    Started by Herman Munster‎, 03-09-2012 01:02 AM
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    03-09-2012, 01:02 AM Go to last post
  20. First Page

    Hello all. Below is the first 700+ words of my middle grade/fantasy for critique. This is my thrid posting after a year of editing. Thanks in advance...

    Started by Lyle Ven‎, 02-28-2012 02:14 PM
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    03-03-2012, 05:25 PM Go to last post

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