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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 01:34 PM
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    08-24-2011, 01:34 PM Go to last post
  1. Does this work?

    I check what people are writing on Facebook often. I have a lot of friends on there. I actually figured out why Facebook has such amazing...

    Started by greg winick‎, 08-17-2011 05:38 PM
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    08-22-2011, 06:00 PM Go to last post
  2. Pride Search Chapter 1 702 words

    This is the first chapter of my lion story which for now I have titled Pride Search. I start with a past to present shift and a present to past...

    Started by caters‎, 10-21-2015 02:30 AM
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    10-22-2015, 12:56 PM Go to last post
  3. When Death Knocks (working title) A Short Story

    First off, WARNING: violence, sex and foul language ahead. Also thanks for looking!! I would love to receive some opinions/critiques on this piece....

    Started by Miranda Clementine‎, 07-12-2011 09:28 PM
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    07-27-2011, 04:41 PM Go to last post
  4. Critique of the opening scene in a horror novel

    I look forward to both positive and negative input. Thanks!! Bethlehem Boarding School, burrowed in the valley...

    Started by Henry Castle‎, 08-10-2011 11:24 AM
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    • Replies: 14
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    08-14-2011, 06:35 PM Go to last post
  5. In Vaine

    I noticed not a lot has been posted for a few days. This is supposed to be a dream scene. Have at it. Savannah walked into the misty room....

    Started by Margaret Compeau‎, 02-28-2011 10:42 PM
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    • Replies: 29
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    03-11-2011, 07:16 AM Go to last post
  6. Escaping the Water's Edge - critique invited

    I've been getting a lot of helpful suggestions on my query letter, so I'm going to post some portions of my book on this forum for critique. I'm open...

    Started by Cheryl Morton‎, 06-05-2011 10:08 PM
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    06-07-2011, 05:07 PM Go to last post
  7. The Curse (adult content)

    Here is the beginning of a short story I wrote. First, and most important, is it any good? Second, is there any place out there that would be...

    Started by Mark Phillips‎, 08-14-2013 09:21 AM
    • Replies: 6
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    08-23-2013, 08:08 AM Go to last post
  8. Rise of the South Prologue

    Syrian-Turkish Border; April 17 With the Americans on the brink of a civil war, Yarden Hassan and Jibril Mohammad arrive in Damascus to meet...

    Started by Mark Raines‎, 02-25-2013 08:03 PM
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    • Replies: 13
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    02-27-2013, 11:49 PM Go to last post
  9. First few pages for critique :)

    Thanks in advance for your time and effort :) I took the critique, I received on the query forum, seriously enough to look up a professional editor...

    Started by Zoe Saadia‎, 02-03-2011 01:38 PM
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    02-07-2011, 11:21 PM Go to last post
  10. Attrition Warfare

    Ok, i actually have edited this chapter down several times before joining this site. it was written to serve as the opening chapter to my book and...

    Started by rodentsoldier‎, 04-11-2014 01:32 AM
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    04-15-2014, 02:10 AM Go to last post
  11. Exert from Amethyst

    This is an exert from my fantasy/science fiction novel in progress, currently going by the name Amethyst. A set of new characters are introduced...

    Started by Allison McClish‎, 03-03-2012 07:19 PM
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    03-11-2012, 11:29 AM Go to last post
  12. a 1000(ish) word excerpt from a new writers 1st effort...

    Hi! This is my first foray into the writing arena, and i sure would appreciate any comments or suggestions. Thanx for reading my work (if u do read...

    Started by voodoogator‎, 05-13-2012 12:03 AM
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    05-22-2012, 04:58 PM Go to last post
  13. The Hands of Horror (Segement)

    Ok guys i know i am not that good a writer, but i am trying to improve a lot from time to time.... i have written a horror short fiction and here is...

    Started by Shrinidhi Kcoundinya‎, 03-23-2011 02:49 AM
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    03-23-2011, 12:49 PM Go to last post
  14. The Laughing Lunatic

    This is a small part of chapter one. Please critique whatever you need to!:D The Laughing Maniac Yes, it was his laugh, his sick, twisted laugh...

    Started by Chimere Mba‎, 09-03-2011 05:26 AM
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    10-06-2011, 08:20 PM Go to last post
  15. I would LOVE to know what you think

    This is a sample taken from my blog. "Life is many things, it's hard, complicated, challenging. spontaneous, full of surprises good and bad, it...

    Started by Patrick Sweeney‎, 01-28-2011 09:20 AM
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    01-28-2011, 11:29 AM Go to last post
  16. Aliens, Inc. feedback request

    Aliens, Incorporated is a YASF novel about first contact. Iím thinking about using this as a prologue, or perhaps a first chapter. Any help would be...

    Started by n.p.doeleman‎, 04-04-2014 01:06 PM
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    04-07-2014, 10:43 AM Go to last post
  17. I spy with my little eye

    I am new to the site and have actually finished my ms.This is my first page. I would really be interested in feedback on the style of writing I am...

    Started by imported_Diane Theron‎, 04-10-2011 08:08 PM
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    04-12-2011, 10:30 PM Go to last post
  18. The White Wizard - two chapters

    OK - the opening states to limit postings to 1,000 words, but these two paragraphs, which are already public anyway, are closer to 4,000. So I'm...

    Started by msknight‎, 08-19-2015 11:20 AM
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    08-20-2015, 09:26 AM Go to last post
  19. I am who I say I am - please comment and destroy if you must B)

    I have decided to push my MS to the side and start a new one. This one is a novel and here is my basic plot. Before I invest the next couple of...

    Started by imported_Diane Theron‎, 04-18-2011 07:05 AM
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    04-23-2011, 03:57 PM Go to last post
  20. A snippet of a short story I am currently messing with. All comments are welcome.

    The beginning of a short story. Would love some feedback for anyone who likes reading a bit of fantasy. Thanks Beldam The withered crone let the...

    Started by Susan‎, 06-12-2015 04:30 AM
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    06-20-2015, 02:08 AM Go to last post

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