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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 02:34 PM
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    08-24-2011, 02:34 PM Go to last post
  1. Excerpt from Chapter 4

    DISCLAIMER: SEXUAL/VIOLENT CONTENT Hello everyone! I know, it's been a while since I've posted here! I'm still on the hunt for an agent after...

    Started by Kyle Anderson‎, 09-20-2011 06:54 PM
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    09-21-2011, 07:42 AM Go to last post
  2. The Laughing Lunatic

    This is a small part of chapter one. Please critique whatever you need to!:D The Laughing Maniac Yes, it was his laugh, his sick, twisted laugh...

    Started by Chimere Mba‎, 09-03-2011 06:26 AM
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    10-06-2011, 09:20 PM Go to last post
  3. From my novel GLIMPSE - Partial Chapter 23 (Running with the Devil)

    Wild Bill plopped down on a wooden crate. “I was a soldier in the big war. That Dolph Hitler was a regular son-of-a-bitch.” He reached for his...

    Started by J D‎, 10-04-2011 05:19 PM
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    10-07-2011, 03:18 PM Go to last post
  4. a 1000(ish) word excerpt from a new writers 1st effort...

    Hi! This is my first foray into the writing arena, and i sure would appreciate any comments or suggestions. Thanx for reading my work (if u do read...

    Started by voodoogator‎, 05-13-2012 01:03 AM
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    • Replies: 10
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    05-22-2012, 05:58 PM Go to last post
  5. Can I have your critique on this opening scene, please?:)

    I've posted this excerpt about two months ago, but since then the whole MS went trough so much technical rewriting (following the critique I've...

    Started by Zoe Saadia‎, 04-17-2011 02:07 AM
    4 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 4
    • Replies: 35
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    04-23-2011, 11:37 PM Go to last post
  6. Excerpt:

    A Whole New Can Of Worms (An extraordinary journal) Part 1. PART ONE (No music or FX cues appear in this draft.) 1. VIBRATIONAL SHIFT A...

    Started by Storytellafella‎, 09-06-2015 04:46 PM
    • Replies: 9
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    09-09-2015, 07:32 PM Go to last post
  7. Dropout

    (This is supposed to be a narrative essay for a class, and I'm debating some stylistic/word/everything choices I've made. It's due in two days, but...

    Started by crystalenka‎, 07-09-2013 03:35 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 10
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    07-15-2013, 10:25 AM Go to last post
  8. Prologue (horror novel). Please critique.

    Hello Everyone. I'm new here and this is my first post. I'm doing revisions on a novel I've completed, and since the first few pages are so...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 03-13-2011 10:20 PM
    4 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 4
    • Replies: 39
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    03-30-2011, 05:21 PM Go to last post
  9. In Vaine

    I noticed not a lot has been posted for a few days. This is supposed to be a dream scene. Have at it. Savannah walked into the misty room....

    Started by Margaret Compeau‎, 02-28-2011 10:42 PM
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    • Replies: 29
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    03-11-2011, 07:16 AM Go to last post
  10. The Socratic Trucker

    Prelude: The engine brakes roared as the eighteen-wheeled machine fought against the relentless pull of gravity, doggedly claiming its 72,000...

    Started by Roger Farinha‎, 08-27-2011 11:00 AM
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    • Replies: 25
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    08-31-2011, 04:53 AM Go to last post
  11. Does this work?

    I check what people are writing on Facebook often. I have a lot of friends on there. I actually figured out why Facebook has such amazing...

    Started by greg winick‎, 08-17-2011 06:38 PM
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    • Replies: 18
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    08-22-2011, 07:00 PM Go to last post
  12. Destiny Calling Prologue *1000 words aprox.*

    This is the prologue for 'Destiny Calling' and it's a supernatural type love story, aimed at young adults although I'd like it to appeal to a wider...

    Started by Leanne Wherrett‎, 06-26-2011 12:47 PM
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    • Replies: 23
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    07-09-2011, 03:17 PM Go to last post
  13. First few pages of Chapter 1

    So, the manuscript is about 80% written, and I just started editing from the beginning. I will post the first few pages of the first chapter, and I...

    Started by Kyle Anderson‎, 06-13-2011 09:49 AM
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    • Replies: 28
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    06-17-2011, 06:31 AM Go to last post
  14. Sniper

    I serenaded myself, some fucckin’ nursery rhyme. I am with childhood. This comfort zone brings me friends. Transfixed, like a boxer. The noises...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 10-01-2011 12:20 PM
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    • Replies: 15
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    10-03-2011, 12:33 AM Go to last post
  15. ST. JOHNS pages 1-5

    I would appreciate any comments. Locals have critiqued it but you know how that can be. 1 “Damn, I must be getting cynical.” Justin Thomas...

    Started by Craig‎, 03-01-2013 03:09 PM
    • Replies: 3
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    03-04-2013, 04:30 AM Go to last post
  16. Second novel is underway!

    Since this novel is complete departure from the first and will have no autobiographical ties, it's going to be a challenge! I've literally just...

    Started by Kyle Anderson‎, 11-03-2011 08:04 AM
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    1 2
    • Replies: 15
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    11-05-2011, 09:16 PM Go to last post
  17. I spy with my little eye

    I am new to the site and have actually finished my ms.This is my first page. I would really be interested in feedback on the style of writing I am...

    Started by imported_Diane Theron‎, 04-10-2011 09:08 PM
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    • Replies: 15
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    04-12-2011, 11:30 PM Go to last post
  18. Exclamation I know what's going on here...!

    It's obvious that all or most of you think I'm only a "flash-in-the-pan" or "here today, gone tomorrow" but that thought is not correct. I say...

    Started by Mr. Michael Live‎, 08-16-2015 06:54 PM
    3 Pages
    1 2 3
    biased, community, cover to cover, female friend, own copy
    • Replies: 23
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    08-18-2015, 08:31 AM Go to last post
  19. Exert from Amethyst

    This is an exert from my fantasy/science fiction novel in progress, currently going by the name Amethyst. A set of new characters are introduced...

    Started by Allison McClish‎, 03-03-2012 07:19 PM
    • Replies: 9
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    03-11-2012, 12:29 PM Go to last post
  20. first few pages of Eternall Yours a Gothic vampire novel set in 1927 Paris

    Partially concealed within the flickering gloom produced by a single candle sat a beautiful pale young woman on a bed of black satin. She stopped...

    Started by mockingbird‎, 12-02-2012 07:57 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    gothic romance., vampire
    • Replies: 13
    • Views: 3,602
    12-08-2012, 06:50 PM Go to last post

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