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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 02:34 PM
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  1. Picture book: STOP! Don't Read That! The Story of the Three Repulsive Pigs

    I'd love all the honest feedback you can all give me, especially specifics!!! (I'm not sure how to fix up some of the formatting in this post, so...

    Started by ErikaW‎, 01-15-2014 03:41 PM
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    02-25-2014, 09:36 AM Go to last post
  2. Prologue (horror novel). Please critique.

    Hello Everyone. I'm new here and this is my first post. I'm doing revisions on a novel I've completed, and since the first few pages are so...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 03-13-2011 10:20 PM
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    03-30-2011, 05:21 PM Go to last post
  3. a 1000(ish) word excerpt from a new writers 1st effort...

    Hi! This is my first foray into the writing arena, and i sure would appreciate any comments or suggestions. Thanx for reading my work (if u do read...

    Started by voodoogator‎, 05-13-2012 01:03 AM
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    05-22-2012, 05:58 PM Go to last post
  4. First few pages for critique :)

    Thanks in advance for your time and effort :) I took the critique, I received on the query forum, seriously enough to look up a professional editor...

    Started by Zoe Saadia‎, 02-03-2011 01:38 PM
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    02-07-2011, 11:21 PM Go to last post
  5. A scene (YA fantasy)

    Okay, so this scene involves an instance in which one character enters the other's mind, but I keep messing it up. I must have rewritten this seven...

    Started by Delany Sierra Sierra‎, 02-10-2011 02:20 PM
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    02-10-2011, 06:17 PM Go to last post
  6. Escaping the Water's Edge - critique invited

    I've been getting a lot of helpful suggestions on my query letter, so I'm going to post some portions of my book on this forum for critique. I'm open...

    Started by Cheryl Morton‎, 06-05-2011 11:08 PM
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    06-07-2011, 06:07 PM Go to last post
  7. Personal Memoir

    This is only a portion of what I have written please feel free to let it rip. Thank you in advance. One day as I was walking around,...

    Started by Esther Ouellette‎, 08-18-2011 09:10 AM
    • Replies: 1
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    08-18-2011, 08:26 PM Go to last post
  8. My Chapter One for your opinions

    I know this is a lot, but if you do read it, I welcome opinions. Thanks! The last of the chap that I didn't post before now is separated by...

    Started by Claire Young‎, 11-27-2011 05:37 PM
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    11-29-2011, 10:54 AM Go to last post
  9. Critique of the opening scene in a horror novel

    I look forward to both positive and negative input. Thanks!! Bethlehem Boarding School, burrowed in the valley...

    Started by Henry Castle‎, 08-10-2011 12:24 PM
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    08-14-2011, 07:35 PM Go to last post
  10. The Hands of Horror (Segement)

    Ok guys i know i am not that good a writer, but i am trying to improve a lot from time to time.... i have written a horror short fiction and here is...

    Started by Shrinidhi Kcoundinya‎, 03-23-2011 03:49 AM
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  11. ST. JOHNS pages 1-5

    I would appreciate any comments. Locals have critiqued it but you know how that can be. 1 “Damn, I must be getting cynical.” Justin Thomas...

    Started by Craig‎, 03-01-2013 03:09 PM
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    03-04-2013, 04:30 AM Go to last post
  12. Can I have your critique on this opening scene, please?:)

    I've posted this excerpt about two months ago, but since then the whole MS went trough so much technical rewriting (following the critique I've...

    Started by Zoe Saadia‎, 04-17-2011 02:07 AM
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  13. A brief excerpt

    I’m taking a break from my sci-fi adventure which isn’t going as well as I hoped. Here’s a brief excerpt from a story I ‘m working on now and I would...

    Started by MUSKETTER 3‎, 06-19-2015 07:41 AM
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    06-22-2015, 04:12 AM Go to last post
  14. First few pages of Chapter 1

    So, the manuscript is about 80% written, and I just started editing from the beginning. I will post the first few pages of the first chapter, and I...

    Started by Kyle Anderson‎, 06-13-2011 09:49 AM
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    06-17-2011, 06:31 AM Go to last post
  15. Part of the First Chapter...With Paragraph Breaks!

    Hopefully my last one will be taken down by the moderators since it's pretty much impossible to read...sorry for the repeat! Anyway, this is the...

    Started by Oisin Ni Bhaoill‎, 01-26-2011 09:51 AM
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    01-27-2011, 07:33 PM Go to last post
  16. Rise of the South Prologue

    Syrian-Turkish Border; April 17 With the Americans on the brink of a civil war, Yarden Hassan and Jibril Mohammad arrive in Damascus to meet...

    Started by Mark Raines‎, 02-25-2013 08:03 PM
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    02-27-2013, 11:49 PM Go to last post
  17. Destiny Calling Prologue *1000 words aprox.*

    This is the prologue for 'Destiny Calling' and it's a supernatural type love story, aimed at young adults although I'd like it to appeal to a wider...

    Started by Leanne Wherrett‎, 06-26-2011 12:47 PM
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    07-09-2011, 03:17 PM Go to last post
  18. Hunted

    Hunted Chapter 1 ...

    Started by Tobias Garrett‎, 01-19-2016 02:37 AM
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    01-19-2016, 02:33 PM Go to last post
  19. Sniper

    I serenaded myself, some fucckin’ nursery rhyme. I am with childhood. This comfort zone brings me friends. Transfixed, like a boxer. The noises...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 10-01-2011 12:20 PM
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    10-03-2011, 12:33 AM Go to last post
  20. Worth continuing?

    I'm messing around with starting a comedy fantasy. What do people think? Worth continuing? This is, of course, simply first draft.

    Started by msknight‎, 10-07-2015 03:07 AM
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    12-29-2015, 12:34 PM Go to last post

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