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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 01:34 PM
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    08-24-2011, 01:34 PM Go to last post
  1. Part of the First Chapter...With Paragraph Breaks!

    Hopefully my last one will be taken down by the moderators since it's pretty much impossible to read...sorry for the repeat! Anyway, this is the...

    Started by Oisin Ni Bhaoill‎, 01-26-2011 09:51 AM
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    01-27-2011, 07:33 PM Go to last post
  2. Critique of the opening scene in a horror novel

    I look forward to both positive and negative input. Thanks!! Bethlehem Boarding School, burrowed in the valley...

    Started by Henry Castle‎, 08-10-2011 11:24 AM
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    • Replies: 14
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    08-14-2011, 06:35 PM Go to last post
  3. Aliens, Inc. feedback request

    Aliens, Incorporated is a YASF novel about first contact. Im thinking about using this as a prologue, or perhaps a first chapter. Any help would be...

    Started by n.p.doeleman‎, 04-04-2014 01:06 PM
    • Replies: 8
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    04-07-2014, 10:43 AM Go to last post
  4. When Death Knocks (working title) A Short Story

    First off, WARNING: violence, sex and foul language ahead. Also thanks for looking!! I would love to receive some opinions/critiques on this piece....

    Started by Miranda Clementine‎, 07-12-2011 09:28 PM
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    • Replies: 26
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    07-27-2011, 04:41 PM Go to last post
  5. Rise of the South Prologue

    Syrian-Turkish Border; April 17 With the Americans on the brink of a civil war, Yarden Hassan and Jibril Mohammad arrive in Damascus to meet...

    Started by Mark Raines‎, 02-25-2013 08:03 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 13
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    02-27-2013, 11:49 PM Go to last post
  6. First few pages for critique :)

    Thanks in advance for your time and effort :) I took the critique, I received on the query forum, seriously enough to look up a professional editor...

    Started by Zoe Saadia‎, 02-03-2011 01:38 PM
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    • Replies: 11
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    02-07-2011, 11:21 PM Go to last post
  7. First few pages of Chapter 1

    So, the manuscript is about 80% written, and I just started editing from the beginning. I will post the first few pages of the first chapter, and I...

    Started by Kyle Anderson‎, 06-13-2011 08:49 AM
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    06-17-2011, 05:31 AM Go to last post
  8. a 1000(ish) word excerpt from a new writers 1st effort...

    Hi! This is my first foray into the writing arena, and i sure would appreciate any comments or suggestions. Thanx for reading my work (if u do read...

    Started by voodoogator‎, 05-13-2012 12:03 AM
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    05-22-2012, 04:58 PM Go to last post
  9. My Chapter One for your opinions

    I know this is a lot, but if you do read it, I welcome opinions. Thanks! The last of the chap that I didn't post before now is separated by...

    Started by Claire Young‎, 11-27-2011 05:37 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    11-29-2011, 10:54 AM Go to last post
  10. Personal Memoir

    This is only a portion of what I have written please feel free to let it rip. Thank you in advance. One day as I was walking around,...

    Started by Esther Ouellette‎, 08-18-2011 08:10 AM
    • Replies: 1
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    08-18-2011, 07:26 PM Go to last post
  11. Can I have your critique on this opening scene, please?:)

    I've posted this excerpt about two months ago, but since then the whole MS went trough so much technical rewriting (following the critique I've...

    Started by Zoe Saadia‎, 04-17-2011 01:07 AM
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    04-23-2011, 10:37 PM Go to last post
  12. Hunted

    Hunted Chapter 1 ...

    Started by Tobias Garrett‎, 01-19-2016 02:37 AM
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    01-19-2016, 02:33 PM Go to last post
  13. I spy with my little eye

    I am new to the site and have actually finished my ms.This is my first page. I would really be interested in feedback on the style of writing I am...

    Started by imported_Diane Theron‎, 04-10-2011 08:08 PM
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    • Replies: 15
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    04-12-2011, 10:30 PM Go to last post
  14. ST. JOHNS pages 1-5

    I would appreciate any comments. Locals have critiqued it but you know how that can be. 1 Damn, I must be getting cynical. Justin Thomas...

    Started by Craig‎, 03-01-2013 03:09 PM
    • Replies: 3
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    03-04-2013, 04:30 AM Go to last post
  15. I am who I say I am - please comment and destroy if you must B)

    I have decided to push my MS to the side and start a new one. This one is a novel and here is my basic plot. Before I invest the next couple of...

    Started by imported_Diane Theron‎, 04-18-2011 07:05 AM
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    • Replies: 15
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    04-23-2011, 03:57 PM Go to last post
  16. Beginning of The Dark Syndicate

    As we all know agents ask for sample pages. I normally add more, but considering there's a 1000 or less limit, I am limiting to the first bit... I...

    Started by Kessar‎, 01-26-2015 01:06 AM
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    01-27-2015, 07:55 AM Go to last post
  17. Bit of dialogue

    Whee! I'm first. The following passage is from a story set in a typical fantasy setting - vaguely Medieval European, but not Earth, so no need to...

    Started by John Hawkwood‎, 01-07-2011 12:10 PM
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    01-14-2011, 06:44 PM Go to last post
  18. Sexual content - is this realistic?

    In my novel a young woman and a young man who knew each other as kids and then have gotten together again one summer are flirting -- seemingly. ...

    Started by DebbieBumstead‎, 03-16-2013 03:15 PM
    • Replies: 6
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    03-18-2013, 07:23 PM Go to last post
  19. A snippet of a short story I am currently messing with. All comments are welcome.

    The beginning of a short story. Would love some feedback for anyone who likes reading a bit of fantasy. Thanks Beldam The withered crone let the...

    Started by Susan‎, 06-12-2015 04:30 AM
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    06-20-2015, 02:08 AM Go to last post
  20. A brief excerpt

    Im taking a break from my sci-fi adventure which isnt going as well as I hoped. Heres a brief excerpt from a story I m working on now and I would...

    Started by MUSKETTER 3‎, 06-19-2015 06:41 AM
    • Replies: 6
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    06-22-2015, 03:12 AM Go to last post

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