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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 01:34 PM
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    08-24-2011, 01:34 PM Go to last post
  1. First two paragraphs

    Hi everyone. I am brand new to the forum here. I have been working on a novel about a teenager who is a fan of vampire stories/history/television,...

    Started by Henry Castle‎, 07-18-2011 07:42 AM
    • Replies: 8
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    07-19-2011, 10:25 AM Go to last post
  2. Fix Me (revision)

    Thank you all who've helped me so far. Your encouraging words are motivating! If you guys can read the revision, that would be sweet. Let me know...

    Started by Lisa Cronkhite‎, 09-17-2011 09:11 AM
    • Replies: 1
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    09-20-2011, 06:56 AM Go to last post
  3. Fix Me (YA Thriller)

    Chapter One “Just take it,” Yolexa says as we stand behind some bleachers. “Come on Pen, I know you want to.” Yo’s thick brown hair waves like a...

    Started by Lisa Cronkhite‎, 09-14-2011 01:29 AM
    • Replies: 8
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    09-16-2011, 03:57 PM Go to last post
  4. Flash fiction (150 words) - interested in any comments/criticisms

    Hello all, I'm very new to the forums and usually only write for myself. I have a simple stream of consciousness piece of flash fiction and I'm...

    Started by bee‎, 05-30-2015 08:10 AM
    5 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 5
    • Replies: 48
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    06-05-2015, 05:11 AM Go to last post
  5. Cool Flash Fiction Fest 2013

    If you're a writer of flash fiction or just want to give it a try, there's a contest for you. I was part of the original Flash Fiction Fest last...

    Started by Rogue Mutt‎, 06-22-2013 07:12 AM
    • Replies: 1
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    06-28-2013, 03:32 AM Go to last post
  6. Flashback Scene~chapter 1

    This is the second scene in my first chapter, right after Gavin leaves. It's a flashback, and I've heard some bad things about doing this. Is this...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 10-08-2011 08:32 PM
    7 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 7
    • Replies: 60
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    10-16-2011, 02:12 PM Go to last post
  7. Fog & Ice Critique // Short Story

    Hi there. I'm a 26 year old Norwegian male who have just finished my business stuides. While writing my dissertation this summer i decided to take...

    Started by hghwriting‎, 10-02-2016 04:00 AM
    • Replies: 6
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    10-10-2016, 06:29 AM Go to last post
  8. For Martin - cuz he asked so nicely.

    It’s quite commonly known that all bridges are magical because they lead from one place to another place. What is less commonly known however, is...

    Started by Frank Baron‎, 02-20-2011 08:59 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 16
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    02-23-2011, 08:06 AM Go to last post
  9. for your critiquing pleasure

    I have read and heard it said that the beginning of a story is what hooks the reader. Thus it must be good. Even though I have read some works with...

    Started by Jennifer Hord‎, 06-17-2012 12:36 PM
    • Replies: 7
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    06-18-2012, 05:52 AM Go to last post
  10. Forbidden Taboos of Men and Women (Adult Content)

    I'm submitting my work for critique. Thanks to those that do. Here are the first 3 parts: Leather and Lace (by Maxine Dominique) (Part...

    Started by maxine dominique‎, 07-31-2012 07:42 PM
    4 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 4
    • Replies: 31
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    08-16-2013, 06:45 AM Go to last post
  11. Frankenstein: The True Story

    Here is a little snippet from my new book. Any feedback would be much appreciated. ‘…the priest had railed against Victor in his sermons and...

    Started by paullord7@hotmail.com‎, 04-13-2015 07:48 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    05-02-2015, 09:08 PM Go to last post
  12. Fresh Meat

    Something from the middle of my book-- pretty representative. Thanks for any observations. August 30, 2007 About 6 months ago it dawned on me...

    Started by SusanH‎, 07-31-2012 03:06 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    08-01-2012, 04:51 AM Go to last post
  13. From my novel GLIMPSE - Partial Chapter 23 (Running with the Devil)

    Wild Bill plopped down on a wooden crate. “I was a soldier in the big war. That Dolph Hitler was a regular son-of-a-bitch.” He reached for his...

    Started by J D‎, 10-04-2011 04:19 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 18
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    10-07-2011, 02:18 PM Go to last post
  14. Ghost

    Hello everyone, been a long time since I posted anything. This is project I am coming back to. As always tell me your feelings. It is in the Fantasy...

    Started by Cubist Zero‎, 05-22-2011 09:43 PM
    fantasy, writing
    • Replies: 9
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    05-23-2011, 03:17 PM Go to last post
  15. Girl Fight( idea)

    Here’s my idea for a novel I’m about to write soon( prob.). Tell me what you guys think about it. I was influenced by Fight Club, one the best...

    Started by imported_Mayesha Kpah‎, 03-10-2011 12:47 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 14
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    03-14-2011, 06:06 AM Go to last post
  16. Girl Fighters Anonymous( 1st paragraph)

    This is the first paragraph of my novel Girl Fighters Anonymous( formerly known as Girl Fight. Btw, the book is going in a completely different...

    Started by imported_Mayesha Kpah‎, 03-14-2011 10:21 AM
    3 Pages
    1 2 3
    • Replies: 26
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    03-30-2011, 04:30 AM Go to last post
  17. Cool Girl Power - Chapter 1

    This is the start of what's probably a novella I'm working on for my own amusement. It combines the premises of two novels I wrote and answers the...

    Started by Rogue Mutt‎, 07-15-2013 06:40 AM
    oberon sucks dick, story, superhero
    • Replies: 2
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    07-15-2013, 06:12 PM Go to last post
  18. Gliders............... re-jiggered

    Gliders ‘That was a bomb, Sir, but in case you didn’t know, it’s blown a great big gaping wound in your head. Hello! Hello, hello. HA! Ha,...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 01-24-2011 04:03 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    01-26-2011, 12:48 AM Go to last post
  19. Go ahead, I can take it..

    I've been reading, and see lots and lots of people who come in here to post writing samples for critique, and then get all upset when they get a...

    Started by NS fw‎, 08-17-2011 12:38 PM
    4 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 4
    • Replies: 39
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    08-19-2011, 05:48 PM Go to last post
  20. GOODBYE HUMBLE PENNY post 2 of 2

    Upper Calf Creek Falls Utah We entered the canyon of Upper Calf Creek Falls from the rim above. Below us the land was pink and shaped like two...

    Started by marikaguthrie‎, 06-15-2014 07:06 AM
    • Replies: 0
    • Views: 3,403
    06-15-2014, 07:06 AM Go to last post

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