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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 01:34 PM
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  1. Early mornings work, before I go to work. What a bummer: a Sunday morning nightmare

    Those mad times aint gone; the barmy March hare has been dieting all year, getting ready for the title fight. ‘In the red corner! The-...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 02-06-2011 02:32 AM
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    02-07-2011, 09:40 AM Go to last post
  2. Ready to pluck away at a WN newby?

    This is roughly 650 words from my 1st chap. Is it slow? Is it crap? Feel free to rip it to shreds. I gots rhino skin! (I hope) Chapter 1 It was...

    Started by Shaun .‎, 01-28-2011 08:41 PM
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    01-30-2011, 03:01 PM Go to last post
  3. Opening Scene - White Chocolate Mocha

    This is the new opening chapter to my first novel. I've posted this many times before with different openings. After the advice I received here, I...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 08-04-2011 01:16 PM
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    08-08-2011, 09:49 PM Go to last post
  4. What I've been working on.

    Sticking to the 1000 word rule I only have enough room to post the prelude to the first chapter, in which character wakes up. I had the...

    Started by Megan McCook‎, 08-30-2011 11:20 AM
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    09-11-2011, 01:17 PM Go to last post
  5. Excerpt from Chapter 4

    DISCLAIMER: SEXUAL/VIOLENT CONTENT Hello everyone! I know, it's been a while since I've posted here! I'm still on the hunt for an agent after...

    Started by Kyle Anderson‎, 09-20-2011 05:54 PM
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    09-21-2011, 06:42 AM Go to last post
  6. Wha'ya' reckon?

    I enjoy doin' stuff like this. It's a bit of a piece called, Burning Bum. My life has been sown together by a Vampire tooth and a weak...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 10-15-2011 12:32 PM
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    10-16-2011, 11:36 PM Go to last post
  7. Back cover reincarnation

    I'm thinking of making this the back cover of my third book in my series. I'm looking for opinions on the 'hook'. Is it enough to not only to read...

    Started by MUSKETTER 3‎, 03-18-2012 07:16 PM
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    03-26-2012, 09:53 AM Go to last post
  8. Page one, PANDORA'S BOX

    Thanks in advance to all who care to comment. PANDORA’S BOX, excerpt. Chapter One. In just a few years, the venture will begin. The...

    Started by n.p.doeleman‎, 03-14-2012 09:06 PM
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    03-16-2012, 11:00 AM Go to last post
  9. first few pages of Eternall Yours a Gothic vampire novel set in 1927 Paris

    Partially concealed within the flickering gloom produced by a single candle sat a beautiful pale young woman on a bed of black satin. She stopped...

    Started by mockingbird‎, 12-02-2012 07:57 AM
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    gothic romance., vampire
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    12-08-2012, 06:50 PM Go to last post
  10. Rise of the South Prologue

    Syrian-Turkish Border; April 17 With the Americans on the brink of a civil war, Yarden Hassan and Jibril Mohammad arrive in Damascus to meet...

    Started by Mark Raines‎, 02-25-2013 08:03 PM
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    02-27-2013, 11:49 PM Go to last post
  11. Pagan- Chapter 1

    I think I hinted at the plot. Not sure if I need more character descriptions. Pagan Chapter 1 Uslef Uslef lay on his back on a clear cool...

    Started by Tobias Garrett‎, 08-06-2013 08:21 AM
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    08-16-2013, 07:47 PM Go to last post
  12. Lightbulb Another Chance: New Beginning

    I rewrote the beginning to make it maybe less info-dumpy. What do you think?:confused: # I know there’s something big going on when Wally asks...

    Started by Rogue Mutt‎, 05-06-2015 04:12 PM
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    05-09-2015, 06:26 AM Go to last post
  13. Another Scene for Critique

    Somehow, I just can't help coming back here when I'm dissatisfied with a piece of writing and my own mind is on the fritz. Your feedback is always...

    Started by Oisin Ni Bhaoill‎, 03-03-2011 08:35 AM
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    05-05-2011, 07:45 AM Go to last post
  14. Opening Scene, does it captivate? or irritate? Violence warning...

    Hi everyone, hope you all are well. I have been hacking away at my opening scene, removing unneeded adjectives, sentences and whatnot. Throwing in...

    Started by Miranda Clementine‎, 02-17-2011 09:33 PM
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    02-19-2011, 10:13 PM Go to last post
  15. 2022 (sample)

    I don't mind if anyone wants to give me an English lesson but really I want to know if anyone finds this remotley interesting. CHAPTER TWELVE...

    Started by Julian Hulls‎, 01-31-2011 04:44 PM
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    04-29-2011, 07:41 AM Go to last post
  16. Beginning or middle?

    This is the beginning two sections of a chapter I am working on in my novel. I am not sure if I should add to the beginning, and make this the...

    Started by Margaret Compeau‎, 01-27-2011 06:01 PM
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    01-28-2011, 09:20 AM Go to last post
  17. Look what I found!

    When I was in 9th grade, my World Geography teacher told my class to write a song about any European country and (2 days later) sing it to the class....

    Started by Shaun .‎, 05-05-2011 07:41 AM
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    05-06-2011, 01:47 PM Go to last post
  18. Please be honest- am I deluded or not?

    Hello Everyone, This is an extract from something I am writing and I would really like to know what people think. Any comments gratefully...

    Started by Susan B‎, 09-21-2011 05:25 AM
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    09-29-2011, 12:26 AM Go to last post
  19. Simple Complications

    So, I have this series, Simple Complications, which I'm releasing on my Tumblr account, which. I'm kind of releasing it like a webcomic, with short...

    Started by Eric Barkman‎, 12-01-2014 10:16 AM
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    12-26-2014, 07:43 AM Go to last post
  20. opening paragraphs

    I would appreciate any criticism. Isaac, although in shirtsleeves, was unmindful of the transition from crisp autumn chill to fusty warmth as he...

    Started by n.p.doeleman‎, 03-31-2015 09:23 AM
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    04-10-2015, 08:02 AM Go to last post

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