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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 02:34 PM
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  1. Bane... part 2 (had word limit)

    Familiar roof, his idol posters. It was seven am. That was some impression of Quinn DíArion. Had his relatives been lying? Still, the dream could be...

    Started by ilkar‎, 07-12-2012 05:35 AM
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    07-13-2012, 04:29 AM Go to last post
  2. First public display...(I learned here an elipse = trailing off)

    I have spent three years reading about writing and thought it about time I plough through. (Damn the torpedoes) I am finding the process of sitting...

    Started by imported_Allott Bradshaw‎, 04-05-2011 06:52 PM
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    04-09-2011, 08:04 AM Go to last post
  3. Another go?

    What do you think of this one, then? Scent of Victory The lift at the local car park is forever breaking down so I don't know what possessed me...

    Started by imported_Bella Warren‎, 04-06-2011 03:45 PM
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    04-09-2011, 12:41 AM Go to last post
  4. New and nervous...critique, please??

    Hi. Could someone be kind enough to read this excerpt from a short story I am writing and tell me if it's got glaring problems? Thanks :-) ...

    Started by imported_Bella Warren‎, 03-31-2011 01:36 PM
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    04-06-2011, 03:28 PM Go to last post
  5. What Should We Crave For In Life?

    What Should We Really Crave For In Life? Is a rare-to-find classic that sheds light on not only the identification of man's figured out ways to...

    Started by imported_Chimezie Benedict‎, 03-12-2011 02:16 AM
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    • Replies: 10
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    03-12-2011, 11:20 AM Go to last post
  6. I SPY - a short chapter - feedback welcome B)

    This is a short chapter - part of my semi-autobiography, called I SPY WITH MY LITTLE EYE. Wecome feedback on content if you have the time and...

    Started by imported_Diane Theron‎, 04-23-2011 10:06 PM
    • Replies: 7
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    05-08-2011, 04:01 PM Go to last post
  7. I am who I say I am - please comment and destroy if you must B)

    I have decided to push my MS to the side and start a new one. This one is a novel and here is my basic plot. Before I invest the next couple of...

    Started by imported_Diane Theron‎, 04-18-2011 08:05 AM
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    • Replies: 15
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    04-23-2011, 04:57 PM Go to last post
  8. I spy with my little eye

    I am new to the site and have actually finished my ms.This is my first page. I would really be interested in feedback on the style of writing I am...

    Started by imported_Diane Theron‎, 04-10-2011 09:08 PM
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    04-12-2011, 11:30 PM Go to last post
  9. Novel excerpt (attempt number 2)

    OK, lets try this again. This is an introduction to one of my characters (Unrelated to my other post). Tom Cartel hated winter. He hated...

    Started by imported_Eric Trautmiller‎, 04-09-2011 09:45 PM
    • Replies: 8
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    04-11-2011, 02:16 PM Go to last post
  10. ;)First novel. Fantasy. Please critique.

    OK, so I have been writing this for a while, and before I continue, I want to make sure I don't sound like I wrote the whole thing drunk, or...

    Started by imported_Eric Trautmiller‎, 04-09-2011 04:33 PM
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    04-10-2011, 06:21 AM Go to last post
  11. The Interview

    I know, super creative title :) A piece that's been filtering inside my head while I'm working on my first novel. This is the opening scene. Any...

    Started by imported_Kelley King‎, 03-27-2011 02:10 PM
    • Replies: 3
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    04-17-2011, 05:18 PM Go to last post
  12. Something I'm Playing With

    It was an unbearably hot summer day in New York City when Alice Schiller died. The weather meant, of course, that the city rotted. All the trash in...

    Started by imported_Kelsea Burnside‎, 03-14-2011 07:58 AM
    • Replies: 6
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    03-15-2011, 02:53 AM Go to last post
  13. 422

    Any comments or suggestions would be really helpful. Thanks! Detective Gerald William Orlovsky eased his black 2000 Chrysler Cirrus LX into one...

    Started by imported_Kelsea Burnside‎, 03-07-2011 11:56 AM
    • Replies: 7
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    03-07-2011, 08:34 PM Go to last post
  14. Roots and Wings

    You weren't born with instructions, a manual or a guide We did what we thought best for you with love from deep inside We soothed your ills and...

    Started by imported_Marilyn Mauldin‎, 03-17-2011 03:12 PM
    • Replies: 1
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    03-17-2011, 05:51 PM Go to last post
  15. Girl Fighters Anonymous( 1st paragraph)

    This is the first paragraph of my novel Girl Fighters Anonymous( formerly known as Girl Fight. Btw, the book is going in a completely different...

    Started by imported_Mayesha Kpah‎, 03-14-2011 11:21 AM
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    03-30-2011, 05:30 AM Go to last post
  16. Girl Fight( idea)

    Hereís my idea for a novel Iím about to write soon( prob.). Tell me what you guys think about it. I was influenced by Fight Club, one the best...

    Started by imported_Mayesha Kpah‎, 03-10-2011 12:47 PM
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    03-14-2011, 07:06 AM Go to last post
  17. My very first book The Love Of God !!!!!!! I would Love feedback;)

    This love experience with God is nothing like the love that a person will ever experience in this world. Each page of the book teaches the reader in...

    Started by imported_Melody Scales‎, 04-03-2011 01:05 PM
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    04-06-2011, 11:04 PM Go to last post
  18. "Hello World" Digital book is one of its kind.

    "Hello World" first printed in 2008 is a digital book with an interesting puzzle theme. It contains clues that lead to chapters of a real story which...

    Started by imported_Samantha Bezuidenhout‎, 03-15-2011 05:26 AM
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    05-03-2011, 01:35 PM Go to last post
  19. The Hyper Real Hog Is Super Fine As You Can See

    Chapter 1. Placing Into Infinity With the aggregate fist of April opening out its Hindu digits, during a spell of unkind and fitful...

    Started by imported_Zog Kadare‎, 03-13-2011 06:28 PM
    • Replies: 6
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    03-14-2011, 12:14 AM Go to last post
  20. The Last Biped

    Are not dogs dumb? They mean nothing to the world, and they lend no hand in its shaping. No, not dumb, chiefly they are villainous; and in...

    Started by imported_Zog Kadare‎, 03-10-2011 05:25 PM
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    • Replies: 20
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    03-17-2011, 07:51 PM Go to last post

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