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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 02:34 PM
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  1. Post Please Critique a Poem for My Poetry Book

    "Body Bag" Bloodstained, a tattered veil Upon the battered face Of the Fallen One A wretched sleeve engulfs her carcass

    Started by MichaelHunt2012‎, 05-21-2012 11:34 PM
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    05-23-2012, 05:09 AM Go to last post
  2. a 1000(ish) word excerpt from a new writers 1st effort...

    Hi! This is my first foray into the writing arena, and i sure would appreciate any comments or suggestions. Thanx for reading my work (if u do read...

    Started by voodoogator‎, 05-13-2012 01:03 AM
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    05-22-2012, 05:58 PM Go to last post
  3. Poll Poll: A Strange Man- Introduction/ Rough Draft

    Looking forward to any advice and thoughts, Thank you. Chapter 1 The world fears Andrew Collins, and Andrew Collins fears the world. He has no...

    Started by Max Cooper‎, 05-09-2012 10:34 AM
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    05-10-2012, 02:44 PM Go to last post
  4. Back Cover Blurb!

    They asked for 300 word synopsis for the back cover plus an author bio. 1] I am boring, 2] I use a pseudonym, even worse 3] I want them in the...

    Started by Herman Munster‎, 04-14-2012 02:53 AM
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    josh, operations, ops, spec, special
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    05-10-2012, 08:53 AM Go to last post
  5. Mystery/Thriller Blurb for feedback

    Hi All, I've revisited the blurb, or jacket copy, for my WIP after reading a bunch of blurbs at the bookstore. I've modeled the stuff below on...

    Started by paul.abbassi‎, 04-13-2012 12:16 PM
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    05-09-2012, 04:51 AM Go to last post
  6. THE PHOENIX CONSPIRACY - Synopsis

    Hello, friends! It's taken about a week to write the synopsis to my novel, THE PHOENIX CONSPIRACY. But it's a tad (okay, a few tads) too long. Most...

    Started by joshlisec‎, 04-24-2012 07:55 AM
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    synopsis
    • Replies: 24
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    05-01-2012, 07:48 AM Go to last post
  7. Writing an interesting opening

    I've started reading Sol Steins On Writing as advised by several people on this forum. So I've been trying to take his advise on making the opening...

    Started by Will Prendergast‎, 04-24-2012 02:32 AM
    • Replies: 6
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    04-29-2012, 02:47 PM Go to last post
  8. The Declaration of Unity--Chapter One: 1,200-words, spec-fic/contemporary fantasy

    "R" rated tone and a few expletives. Seeking any and all feedback anyone's willing to offer. Thanks in advance. THE DECLARATION OF UNITY ...

    Started by Adam Bentley‎, 04-10-2012 12:58 AM
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    • Replies: 33
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    04-18-2012, 04:34 PM Go to last post
  9. Multicultural Genre

    Hello All! Just a quick question on genres: Im pondering adding 'Multicultural' to my genre because my MC is mixed (Filipino/British) and the...

    Started by Lyle Ven‎, 03-22-2012 12:09 PM
    • Replies: 6
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    04-03-2012, 07:53 PM Go to last post
  10. Exerpt - Help! I've lost perspective!

    Hi Everybody, This is the begining of the second chapter of a novel that takes place in Philadelphia in the spring of 1825. I've read (and...

    Started by Julie Harris‎, 03-31-2012 03:13 PM
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    04-03-2012, 10:40 AM Go to last post
  11. Prologue - Mystery/Thriller Novel

    Would love some direct critique and thoughts. Thanks in advance....

    Started by paul.abbassi‎, 03-29-2012 11:44 AM
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    • Replies: 26
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    03-31-2012, 11:24 AM Go to last post
  12. Draft First Chapter of Mystery/Thriller Novel - for critique

    Hi, I would love some unflinching feedback on the draft first chapter of my in-progress Mystery/Thriller novel, below: ...

    Started by paul.abbassi‎, 03-23-2012 02:22 AM
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    03-26-2012, 10:59 PM Go to last post
  13. Back cover reincarnation

    I'm thinking of making this the back cover of my third book in my series. I'm looking for opinions on the 'hook'. Is it enough to not only to read...

    Started by MUSKETTER 3‎, 03-18-2012 08:16 PM
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    03-26-2012, 10:53 AM Go to last post
  14. 1st Page Che Che Poing

    Che Che Poing Chapter 1 Her family tree was a stump Morpra was said to be half wolverine and half billy-goat with a spit of witch. Her...

    Started by Tobias Garrett‎, 03-24-2012 12:41 AM
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    03-25-2012, 11:57 AM Go to last post
  15. Page one revised. PANDORA'S BOX

    Hi again. I took some time to digest the advice I was given on my last writing sample and worked up the courage to give it a second shot. Here’s...

    Started by n.p.doeleman‎, 03-22-2012 01:25 PM
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    03-23-2012, 08:01 AM Go to last post
  16. thoughts on unconventional narrative style?

    Below is the first page of what I've been working on lately. Is the narrative style too unconventional? Close friends have remarked that it is...

    Started by relco‎, 03-19-2012 03:06 PM
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    03-22-2012, 11:35 AM Go to last post
  17. Reincarnation revised

    Thanks to all for your input. Try this instead. Matt McCord is no stranger to Death. It could be said they are on a first name basis. ...

    Started by MUSKETTER 3‎, 03-21-2012 08:09 PM
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    03-21-2012, 10:15 PM Go to last post
  18. Smile * ROOKIE MEMBER* Query Letter - THE PHOENIX CONSPIRACY

    Hello all! I'm a new member here. I've begun the process of finding a home for my novel. I have submitted a few queries with little action. However,...

    Started by joshlisec‎, 03-17-2012 12:29 PM
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    03-21-2012, 04:17 PM Go to last post
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    how do I delete this thread?

    Started by relco‎, 03-19-2012 03:05 PM
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    03-19-2012, 03:36 PM Go to last post
  20. Descriptive Paragraph (Critique)

    Hello All! Just wanted to get some critique on a descriptive paragraph in my MS, wondering if its too adjective-heavy. For contex, the MC finds...

    Started by Lyle Ven‎, 03-16-2012 05:52 AM
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    03-19-2012, 07:46 AM Go to last post

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