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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 02:34 PM
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  1. Flashback Scene~chapter 1

    This is the second scene in my first chapter, right after Gavin leaves. It's a flashback, and I've heard some bad things about doing this. Is this...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 10-08-2011 09:32 PM
    7 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 7
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    10-16-2011, 03:12 PM Go to last post
  2. First page thoughts?

    Hi! I'm posting the first page of my story (the prologue) in response to a suggestion. Honest critique is welcome! He was almost blind;...

    Started by Delany Sierra Sierra‎, 10-15-2011 04:38 PM
    • Replies: 3
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    10-16-2011, 02:52 AM Go to last post
  3. Opinions, please, for my novel's beginning

    I haven't looked at this revised beginning in a while. I've been revising the whole novel and am now into 160, 170 pages. I changed the name from...

    Started by Claire Young‎, 10-09-2011 04:23 PM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 20
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    10-15-2011, 05:43 PM Go to last post
  4. The Vestal Virgins - First draft for Chapter one

    So taking your advice into consideration, I sat down a few days ago and wrote the first draft for a chapter. After working on it a bit, this is what...

    Started by Rikke Jessen‎, 10-12-2011 11:08 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 14
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    10-15-2011, 09:02 AM Go to last post
  5. The Things I Hear: The Jeremiah Tree

    I'd appreciate any comments/critique I can get on the following, an article for a local desert museum newsletter and blog: Wild and unkempt in...

    Started by Walter Feller‎, 10-13-2011 03:22 PM
    • Replies: 8
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    10-14-2011, 06:06 PM Go to last post
  6. My name is Gonzo. Please critique, but go to hell if you pick me up on anything!

    Stayed in a red light hotel full of Russian beauties, got nightmare flashbacks. They made me into a hotel in my mind. I became, Russian...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 10-10-2011 02:14 PM
    6 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 6
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    10-14-2011, 03:17 PM Go to last post
  7. Part 3 of The African Adventures of Alyssa Norris Chapter 1

    The front door light of house number twelve lit up as Alyssa approached it. Finally, she thought. A break from suffering with Uncle Bruce. Now she’d...

    Started by Sunayna Prasad‎, 10-14-2011 09:29 AM
    • Replies: 6
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    10-14-2011, 01:55 PM Go to last post
  8. In honor of our political institution and also Nibbles the cat (for Kitty)

    Chapter 3 The Politician Joe Asswormer, a would-be congressman running a hardnosed campaign throughout the state, was already in the...

    Started by J D‎, 10-01-2011 11:58 AM
    • Replies: 4
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    10-13-2011, 06:13 PM Go to last post
  9. Part 2 of The African Adventures of Alyssa Norris 1st chapter

    As Alyssa continued to sit in disgust, she thought about Hailey and her loose lips. She couldn’t hold onto a secret that was nearly three years old....

    Started by Sunayna Prasad‎, 10-06-2011 05:14 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 16
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    10-10-2011, 06:45 AM Go to last post
  10. I ain’t that lonely yet

    Had this a while. See what you think? I know there's a couple of bits, but I can't see the woods for the trees. It's just one of those tings' ...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 10-07-2011 02:47 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 12
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    10-09-2011, 12:41 PM Go to last post
  11. a good man

    Hi all, this is part of chapter one of my novel, A GOOD MAN. Let me have it.... Wow, church is packed today, Ahlesha thinks to herself as...

    Started by Ty Waller‎, 10-07-2011 02:49 PM
    • Replies: 9
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    10-08-2011, 06:12 PM Go to last post
  12. Opening pages to GLIMPSE... and a prologue no less

    I thought about rearranging this somehow to play out as chapter one rather than the prologue, but I'm not sure that would work. The other...

    Started by J D‎, 10-07-2011 06:40 PM
    • Replies: 2
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    10-07-2011, 07:19 PM Go to last post
  13. From my novel GLIMPSE - Partial Chapter 23 (Running with the Devil)

    Wild Bill plopped down on a wooden crate. “I was a soldier in the big war. That Dolph Hitler was a regular son-of-a-bitch.” He reached for his...

    Started by J D‎, 10-04-2011 05:19 PM
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    10-07-2011, 03:18 PM Go to last post
  14. The Laughing Lunatic

    This is a small part of chapter one. Please critique whatever you need to!:D The Laughing Maniac Yes, it was his laugh, his sick, twisted laugh...

    Started by Chimere Mba‎, 09-03-2011 06:26 AM
    • Replies: 2
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    10-06-2011, 09:20 PM Go to last post
  15. Hollar Dollar~scene 2

    Hi, I hope it's okay that I post something after being gone a while. Just wanted to contribute to making things normal around here, like all you old...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 09-26-2011 06:16 AM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 27
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    10-06-2011, 03:50 PM Go to last post
  16. is me

    I’m limping through my downtown suburbia, where rat ****t is seedless dates and vegetarian dogs squirt concord parvo. There’s soft fruit out on...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 10-03-2011 01:54 PM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 21
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    10-05-2011, 06:12 PM Go to last post
  17. The Vestal Virgins/The Vestal Temple

    (OBS: the title is somewhat undecided but I'm pretty sure it'll be called Vestalindernes Tempel in Danish) The story has originally been written in...

    Started by Rikke Jessen‎, 10-03-2011 01:37 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 17
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    10-05-2011, 12:12 AM Go to last post
  18. Speaking of prologues

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    Started by J D‎, 10-03-2011 06:00 PM
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    10-03-2011, 06:54 PM Go to last post
  19. Survival Manuals

    Here's chapter one of SNAGGLER'S PARADISE, a satirical look at life wrapped in a mystery. Anyone who would like to give me an opinion, for good or...

    Started by J D‎, 09-16-2011 07:04 PM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 21
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    10-03-2011, 02:48 PM Go to last post
  20. Chapter 1

    This is only the first of 24 chapters in my story. I am not going to post all of it on this thread because I hope to publish it and I do not want...

    Started by Andrew Eddy‎, 10-02-2011 04:54 PM
    • Replies: 7
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    10-03-2011, 12:11 PM Go to last post

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