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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 01:34 PM
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    08-24-2011, 01:34 PM Go to last post
  1. Hollar Dollar~scene 2

    Hi, I hope it's okay that I post something after being gone a while. Just wanted to contribute to making things normal around here, like all you old...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 09-26-2011 05:16 AM
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    10-06-2011, 02:50 PM Go to last post
  2. is me

    I’m limping through my downtown suburbia, where rat ****t is seedless dates and vegetarian dogs squirt concord parvo. There’s soft fruit out on...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 10-03-2011 12:54 PM
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    10-05-2011, 05:12 PM Go to last post
  3. The Vestal Virgins/The Vestal Temple

    (OBS: the title is somewhat undecided but I'm pretty sure it'll be called Vestalindernes Tempel in Danish) The story has originally been written in...

    Started by Rikke Jessen‎, 10-03-2011 12:37 PM
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    • Replies: 17
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    10-04-2011, 11:12 PM Go to last post
  4. Speaking of prologues

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    Started by J D‎, 10-03-2011 05:00 PM
    • Replies: 2
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    10-03-2011, 05:54 PM Go to last post
  5. Survival Manuals

    Here's chapter one of SNAGGLER'S PARADISE, a satirical look at life wrapped in a mystery. Anyone who would like to give me an opinion, for good or...

    Started by J D‎, 09-16-2011 06:04 PM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 21
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    10-03-2011, 01:48 PM Go to last post
  6. Chapter 1

    This is only the first of 24 chapters in my story. I am not going to post all of it on this thread because I hope to publish it and I do not want...

    Started by Andrew Eddy‎, 10-02-2011 03:54 PM
    • Replies: 7
    • Views: 370
    10-03-2011, 11:11 AM Go to last post
  7. Sniper

    I serenaded myself, some fucckin’ nursery rhyme. I am with childhood. This comfort zone brings me friends. Transfixed, like a boxer. The noises...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 10-01-2011 11:20 AM
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    • Replies: 15
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    10-02-2011, 11:33 PM Go to last post
  8. A kind of a love scene..

    I was looking over a scene from my satire, feeling frustrated and drinking a rum and coke, saw this "writing critique thread" so I figured I'd throw...

    Started by J D‎, 09-30-2011 05:06 PM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 25
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    10-02-2011, 06:05 PM Go to last post
  9. The date from hell... chapter excerpt from Snaggler's Paradise

    The post-pubescent duo stepped into the parking lot. Both young men giggled like giddy teenagers. In the distance, the darkened silhouettes of two...

    Started by J D‎, 10-02-2011 08:30 AM
    • Replies: 5
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    10-02-2011, 04:27 PM Go to last post
  10. Part one of The African Adventures of Alyssa Norris first chapter

    A thin girl of around twelve gazed at a framed picture of her aunt, causing tears to fill her blue eyes as sorrow welled up again. Her aunt leaned...

    Started by Sunayna Prasad‎, 09-24-2011 04:43 AM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 24
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    10-02-2011, 09:28 AM Go to last post
  11. New hear, looking for opinions, first couple of pages, fantasy novel.

    At the edge of the woods, less than half a league from the castle’s walls, apart from the rest of the forest, stood a single, leafless and ancient...

    Started by Kieron Dodds‎, 08-08-2011 06:02 PM
    5 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 5
    • Replies: 40
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    10-01-2011, 08:14 AM Go to last post
  12. Please be honest- am I deluded or not?

    Hello Everyone, This is an extract from something I am writing and I would really like to know what people think. Any comments gratefully...

    Started by Susan B‎, 09-21-2011 05:25 AM
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    • Replies: 12
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    09-29-2011, 12:26 AM Go to last post
  13. Desert Life

    (I know I've made horrific errors in the following, and I am looking for help, I'd rather not be forged and tempered in the fires of Hell though). ...

    Started by Walter Feller‎, 09-20-2011 05:09 PM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 10
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    09-29-2011, 12:00 AM Go to last post
  14. WIP (Sunstone Chronicles for now), Prologue

    Hi all, been a while since I posted. I'm trying to work up some creative energy to continue working on increasing my writing volume since my...

    Started by John Chritton‎, 09-16-2011 02:08 PM
    6 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 6
    • Replies: 56
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    09-28-2011, 11:17 AM Go to last post
  15. The Mechanik?

    I am itty-bitty, i.e. dirt under a finger nail: itty-bitty! In fact, gritty, gritty itty-bitty= dirt under the calcium hoof. Hoof! An itty bitty...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 09-26-2011 12:17 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    09-27-2011, 12:11 PM Go to last post
  16. Excerpt from Chapter 4

    DISCLAIMER: SEXUAL/VIOLENT CONTENT Hello everyone! I know, it's been a while since I've posted here! I'm still on the hunt for an agent after...

    Started by Kyle Anderson‎, 09-20-2011 05:54 PM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 13
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    09-21-2011, 06:42 AM Go to last post
  17. Fix Me (revision)

    Thank you all who've helped me so far. Your encouraging words are motivating! If you guys can read the revision, that would be sweet. Let me know...

    Started by Lisa Cronkhite‎, 09-17-2011 09:11 AM
    • Replies: 1
    • Views: 281
    09-20-2011, 06:56 AM Go to last post
  18. Major Mumba, I Presume?

    This is a second novel I'm working on. I have only two chapters completed; a continuation of Richard Blaine. Major Mumba, I Presume? Chapter...

    Started by Jodie Christian‎, 09-13-2011 12:00 PM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 10
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    09-17-2011, 07:33 AM Go to last post
  19. Candy Apples and Protein

    I've been working on some flash fiction once again to help with my writing. I would love to know what you guys think of this little ditty. ...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 09-01-2011 07:02 AM
    8 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 8
    • Replies: 72
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    09-16-2011, 06:56 PM Go to last post
  20. Fix Me (YA Thriller)

    Chapter One “Just take it,” Yolexa says as we stand behind some bleachers. “Come on Pen, I know you want to.” Yo’s thick brown hair waves like a...

    Started by Lisa Cronkhite‎, 09-14-2011 01:29 AM
    • Replies: 8
    • Views: 618
    09-16-2011, 03:57 PM Go to last post

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