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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 01:34 PM
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  1. First scene - comments?

    2 Posts because length -_- Leon groaned as his eyes drifted open, the scorching pain in the back of them telling him that they didn’t take kindly to...

    Started by CryingCicada‎, 03-08-2012 10:19 PM
    4 Pages
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    03-13-2012, 12:15 PM Go to last post
  2. Exert from Amethyst

    This is an exert from my fantasy/science fiction novel in progress, currently going by the name Amethyst. A set of new characters are introduced...

    Started by Allison McClish‎, 03-03-2012 06:19 PM
    • Replies: 9
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    03-11-2012, 11:29 AM Go to last post
  3. Italics

    I am writing a short story where the main characters speak mentally, have private thoughts and occassionally communicate those private thoughts with...

    Started by K D Curry‎, 03-07-2012 05:11 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 10
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    03-09-2012, 07:25 AM Go to last post
  4. Cover mockup.

    Anyone willing to take a look at my cover mockup? It's a bit scandalous, and I'm reluctant to just post it. I will send it in a private message to...

    Started by greg winick‎, 03-07-2012 09:24 AM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 24
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    03-09-2012, 03:41 AM Go to last post
  5. CG Stephen

    If there is a general call for a redo ... now I'll close this thread. Very forward thinking of you. Great way to promote discussions, visit new...

    Started by Herman Munster‎, 03-09-2012 12:02 AM
    • Replies: 0
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    03-09-2012, 12:02 AM Go to last post
  6. First Page

    Hello all. Below is the first 700+ words of my middle grade/fantasy for critique. This is my thrid posting after a year of editing. Thanks in advance...

    Started by Lyle Ven‎, 02-28-2012 01:14 PM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 20
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    03-03-2012, 04:25 PM Go to last post
  7. Mystic Charm First Page

    This is the first 2 pages of my book, this is also the first time I am showing it to anybody who is not related to me. :D enjoy. ...

    Started by sara‎, 03-02-2012 10:12 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 18
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    03-03-2012, 01:27 PM Go to last post
  8. Prolouge: (Berkley Lane: A Tale of Horrors

    A shadow darted around the corner, closely followed by its owner. Seething with resentment, the proud figure slid from room to room, prowling like...

    Started by AC_Corran‎, 03-02-2012 09:17 AM
    • Replies: 3
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    03-02-2012, 11:31 AM Go to last post
  9. 1st paragraph of my new book.

    135th Berkley Lane, Adel Iowa, had sat virtually untouched for the last decade. Once a proud manor house it now sat lonely and abandoned. The...

    Started by AC_Corran‎, 02-25-2012 09:55 PM
    4 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 4
    • Replies: 38
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    02-29-2012, 09:01 PM Go to last post
  10. First Chapter of Berkley Lane: A Tale of Horrors.

    Chapter One: They say it was an asylum, they say a murder took place, but in 1942, it was home to the Mathers. Mr. Mathers was a man in his...

    Started by AC_Corran‎, 02-23-2012 04:07 PM
    • Replies: 7
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    02-26-2012, 03:16 AM Go to last post
  11. Band-aids ~ Hollar Dollar Chapter 2

    This is the opening scene to my second chapter. I would like to know if the characters are somewhat interesting and if the voice is consistent. Any...

    Started by Amylou‎, 02-23-2012 09:35 AM
    3 Pages
    1 2 3
    • Replies: 27
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    02-25-2012, 09:27 PM Go to last post
  12. Wink What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read B4 You Post*

    What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post* Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. Then again, too little is a...

    Started by Herman Munster‎, 02-23-2012 07:04 PM
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    02-24-2012, 06:38 AM Go to last post
  13. The Killing Past - first two pages or so

    Hi all, Some of you have probably seen my various efforts to put together a query on this work. Now I'm curious as to how people react to the...

    Started by John Hawkwood‎, 01-01-2012 07:12 AM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 20
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    02-21-2012, 10:51 PM Go to last post
  14. The River Heals

    I'm looking for thoughts and critique on this short story. It is in 2 parts, as it is too long to post all at once.Thanks Shorty Dawkins ...

    Started by Shorty Dawkins‎, 02-21-2012 06:07 PM
    • Replies: 3
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    02-21-2012, 09:41 PM Go to last post
  15. Looking for a little advice

    I am working on the "show vs. tell" aspect of my writing and was hoping I could get a little feedback on these two potential openings for my latest...

    Started by Tray Towles‎, 12-27-2011 05:21 PM
    • Replies: 8
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    02-21-2012, 06:58 AM Go to last post
  16. Need Feedback from fellow Writers on novel - Bloody Politics

    “Our life begins and ends at zero. Rest are mere details that fill the empty spaces.” thus went the opening lines of my informal talk-session. On...

    Started by Sameer Bhagat‎, 02-18-2012 10:27 PM
    bloody politics - a novel
    • Replies: 6
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    02-21-2012, 06:29 AM Go to last post
  17. Testing an Intro. Sable Sea 67 words

    What I'm going for here is a slow quiet start to short story I'm working on. I know this is short and probably not a lot to work with. The dialog...

    Started by Aspring Writer MKII‎, 02-01-2012 08:43 PM
    3 Pages
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    02-20-2012, 09:30 AM Go to last post
  18. Thump!

    Thump... Over indistinct chatter. Thump... Over shackles pummeling his knees. Thump...

    Started by Author Pendragin‎, 01-28-2012 11:35 PM
    4 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 4
    • Replies: 38
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    02-01-2012, 10:12 AM Go to last post
  19. Beginning of Amethyst

    So I finished writing my book, but I wanted to put the beginning up here. It is the part I've had the most issues with getting right, I think, so...

    Started by Allison McClish‎, 01-28-2012 09:32 PM
    allison, alumbia, amethyst, chemay, mcclish
    • Replies: 5
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    01-29-2012, 12:44 PM Go to last post
  20. Another excerpt--Your critiques are really helping me.

    Susan Wenke worked for Dreamgirls-To-Go. At home, she had a six and a four year old to feed. *Her boys stayed at home with her mom, while she went...

    Started by greg winick‎, 12-30-2011 03:31 PM
    • Replies: 3
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    01-01-2012, 02:37 AM Go to last post

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