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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 02:34 PM
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  1. Queen Bee

    I would like a critique on this piece. It's another short, I'm still sharpening my skills. All opinions are welcome. Tell me what you like, what you...

    Started by Miranda Clementine‎, 10-18-2011 07:33 PM
    • Replies: 8
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    10-24-2011, 10:10 AM Go to last post
  2. Moved: Thoughts of an Internet Stalker

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 10-17-2011 04:42 AM
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    10-19-2011, 07:38 AM Go to last post
  3. Taff

    I've been trying to work this chapter out from my novel GLIMPSE... not sure how it plays out with a reader. Any and all opinions are welcome. I'd...

    Started by J D‎, 10-09-2011 05:48 PM
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    10-18-2011, 06:05 PM Go to last post
  4. Opening for THE BECOMING--(a few curse words but nothing too shocking)-thanks!

    (Deep breath) Okay, here goes. This is the beginning of my YA paranormal called THE BECOMING or ANTICHRIST 16 or whatever I end up calling it. ...

    Started by Carrie Graves‎, 10-15-2011 05:02 PM
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    10-18-2011, 02:13 PM Go to last post
  5. Introductory quote

    The working title for my novel is "Fear of the Known." I'd like to have an introductory quotation from the main character (her name is Raven Wolf)....

    Started by Gaylen Moore‎, 10-18-2011 07:28 AM
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    10-18-2011, 01:08 PM Go to last post
  6. Sample of book by new member

    Chronicles of the forgotten By Dave Bagley Copyright 1999 Chapter One- A Stranger Arrives She appeared again in his dreams, this time...

    Started by Dave Bagley‎, 10-13-2011 08:53 PM
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    10-18-2011, 07:46 AM Go to last post
  7. Wha'ya' reckon?

    I enjoy doin' stuff like this. It's a bit of a piece called, Burning Bum. My life has been sown together by a Vampire tooth and a weak...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 10-15-2011 01:32 PM
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    • Replies: 13
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    10-17-2011, 12:36 AM Go to last post
  8. Flashback Scene~chapter 1

    This is the second scene in my first chapter, right after Gavin leaves. It's a flashback, and I've heard some bad things about doing this. Is this...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 10-08-2011 09:32 PM
    7 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 7
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    10-16-2011, 03:12 PM Go to last post
  9. First page thoughts?

    Hi! I'm posting the first page of my story (the prologue) in response to a suggestion. Honest critique is welcome! He was almost blind;...

    Started by Delany Sierra Sierra‎, 10-15-2011 04:38 PM
    • Replies: 3
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    10-16-2011, 02:52 AM Go to last post
  10. Opinions, please, for my novel's beginning

    I haven't looked at this revised beginning in a while. I've been revising the whole novel and am now into 160, 170 pages. I changed the name from...

    Started by Claire Young‎, 10-09-2011 04:23 PM
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    10-15-2011, 05:43 PM Go to last post
  11. The Vestal Virgins - First draft for Chapter one

    So taking your advice into consideration, I sat down a few days ago and wrote the first draft for a chapter. After working on it a bit, this is what...

    Started by Rikke Jessen‎, 10-12-2011 11:08 AM
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    10-15-2011, 09:02 AM Go to last post
  12. The Things I Hear: The Jeremiah Tree

    I'd appreciate any comments/critique I can get on the following, an article for a local desert museum newsletter and blog: Wild and unkempt in...

    Started by Walter Feller‎, 10-13-2011 03:22 PM
    • Replies: 8
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    10-14-2011, 06:06 PM Go to last post
  13. My name is Gonzo. Please critique, but go to hell if you pick me up on anything!

    Stayed in a red light hotel full of Russian beauties, got nightmare flashbacks. They made me into a hotel in my mind. I became, Russian...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 10-10-2011 02:14 PM
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    10-14-2011, 03:17 PM Go to last post
  14. Part 3 of The African Adventures of Alyssa Norris Chapter 1

    The front door light of house number twelve lit up as Alyssa approached it. Finally, she thought. A break from suffering with Uncle Bruce. Now she’d...

    Started by Sunayna Prasad‎, 10-14-2011 09:29 AM
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    10-14-2011, 01:55 PM Go to last post
  15. In honor of our political institution and also Nibbles the cat (for Kitty)

    Chapter 3 The Politician Joe Asswormer, a would-be congressman running a hardnosed campaign throughout the state, was already in the...

    Started by J D‎, 10-01-2011 11:58 AM
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    10-13-2011, 06:13 PM Go to last post
  16. Part 2 of The African Adventures of Alyssa Norris 1st chapter

    As Alyssa continued to sit in disgust, she thought about Hailey and her loose lips. She couldn’t hold onto a secret that was nearly three years old....

    Started by Sunayna Prasad‎, 10-06-2011 05:14 PM
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    10-10-2011, 06:45 AM Go to last post
  17. I ain’t that lonely yet

    Had this a while. See what you think? I know there's a couple of bits, but I can't see the woods for the trees. It's just one of those tings' ...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 10-07-2011 02:47 AM
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    10-09-2011, 12:41 PM Go to last post
  18. a good man

    Hi all, this is part of chapter one of my novel, A GOOD MAN. Let me have it.... Wow, church is packed today, Ahlesha thinks to herself as...

    Started by Ty Waller‎, 10-07-2011 02:49 PM
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    10-08-2011, 06:12 PM Go to last post
  19. Opening pages to GLIMPSE... and a prologue no less

    I thought about rearranging this somehow to play out as chapter one rather than the prologue, but I'm not sure that would work. The other...

    Started by J D‎, 10-07-2011 06:40 PM
    • Replies: 2
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    10-07-2011, 07:19 PM Go to last post
  20. From my novel GLIMPSE - Partial Chapter 23 (Running with the Devil)

    Wild Bill plopped down on a wooden crate. “I was a soldier in the big war. That Dolph Hitler was a regular son-of-a-bitch.” He reached for his...

    Started by J D‎, 10-04-2011 05:19 PM
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    • Replies: 18
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    10-07-2011, 03:18 PM Go to last post

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