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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 01:34 PM
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  1. Part 3 of The African Adventures of Alyssa Norris Chapter 1

    The front door light of house number twelve lit up as Alyssa approached it. Finally, she thought. A break from suffering with Uncle Bruce. Now she’d...

    Started by Sunayna Prasad‎, 10-14-2011 08:29 AM
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    10-14-2011, 12:55 PM Go to last post
  2. In honor of our political institution and also Nibbles the cat (for Kitty)

    Chapter 3 The Politician Joe Asswormer, a would-be congressman running a hardnosed campaign throughout the state, was already in the...

    Started by J D‎, 10-01-2011 10:58 AM
    • Replies: 4
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    10-13-2011, 05:13 PM Go to last post
  3. Part 2 of The African Adventures of Alyssa Norris 1st chapter

    As Alyssa continued to sit in disgust, she thought about Hailey and her loose lips. She couldn’t hold onto a secret that was nearly three years old....

    Started by Sunayna Prasad‎, 10-06-2011 04:14 PM
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    10-10-2011, 05:45 AM Go to last post
  4. I ain’t that lonely yet

    Had this a while. See what you think? I know there's a couple of bits, but I can't see the woods for the trees. It's just one of those tings' ...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 10-07-2011 01:47 AM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 12
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    10-09-2011, 11:41 AM Go to last post
  5. a good man

    Hi all, this is part of chapter one of my novel, A GOOD MAN. Let me have it.... Wow, church is packed today, Ahlesha thinks to herself as...

    Started by Ty Waller‎, 10-07-2011 01:49 PM
    • Replies: 9
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    10-08-2011, 05:12 PM Go to last post
  6. Opening pages to GLIMPSE... and a prologue no less

    I thought about rearranging this somehow to play out as chapter one rather than the prologue, but I'm not sure that would work. The other...

    Started by J D‎, 10-07-2011 05:40 PM
    • Replies: 2
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    10-07-2011, 06:19 PM Go to last post
  7. From my novel GLIMPSE - Partial Chapter 23 (Running with the Devil)

    Wild Bill plopped down on a wooden crate. “I was a soldier in the big war. That Dolph Hitler was a regular son-of-a-bitch.” He reached for his...

    Started by J D‎, 10-04-2011 04:19 PM
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    1 2
    • Replies: 18
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    10-07-2011, 02:18 PM Go to last post
  8. The Laughing Lunatic

    This is a small part of chapter one. Please critique whatever you need to!:D The Laughing Maniac Yes, it was his laugh, his sick, twisted laugh...

    Started by Chimere Mba‎, 09-03-2011 05:26 AM
    • Replies: 2
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    10-06-2011, 08:20 PM Go to last post
  9. Hollar Dollar~scene 2

    Hi, I hope it's okay that I post something after being gone a while. Just wanted to contribute to making things normal around here, like all you old...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 09-26-2011 05:16 AM
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    • Replies: 27
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    10-06-2011, 02:50 PM Go to last post
  10. is me

    I’m limping through my downtown suburbia, where rat ****t is seedless dates and vegetarian dogs squirt concord parvo. There’s soft fruit out on...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 10-03-2011 12:54 PM
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    10-05-2011, 05:12 PM Go to last post
  11. The Vestal Virgins/The Vestal Temple

    (OBS: the title is somewhat undecided but I'm pretty sure it'll be called Vestalindernes Tempel in Danish) The story has originally been written in...

    Started by Rikke Jessen‎, 10-03-2011 12:37 PM
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    10-04-2011, 11:12 PM Go to last post
  12. Speaking of prologues

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    Started by J D‎, 10-03-2011 05:00 PM
    • Replies: 2
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    10-03-2011, 05:54 PM Go to last post
  13. Survival Manuals

    Here's chapter one of SNAGGLER'S PARADISE, a satirical look at life wrapped in a mystery. Anyone who would like to give me an opinion, for good or...

    Started by J D‎, 09-16-2011 06:04 PM
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    • Replies: 21
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    10-03-2011, 01:48 PM Go to last post
  14. Chapter 1

    This is only the first of 24 chapters in my story. I am not going to post all of it on this thread because I hope to publish it and I do not want...

    Started by Andrew Eddy‎, 10-02-2011 03:54 PM
    • Replies: 7
    • Views: 406
    10-03-2011, 11:11 AM Go to last post
  15. Sniper

    I serenaded myself, some fucckin’ nursery rhyme. I am with childhood. This comfort zone brings me friends. Transfixed, like a boxer. The noises...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 10-01-2011 11:20 AM
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    • Replies: 15
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    10-02-2011, 11:33 PM Go to last post
  16. A kind of a love scene..

    I was looking over a scene from my satire, feeling frustrated and drinking a rum and coke, saw this "writing critique thread" so I figured I'd throw...

    Started by J D‎, 09-30-2011 05:06 PM
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    • Replies: 25
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    10-02-2011, 06:05 PM Go to last post
  17. The date from hell... chapter excerpt from Snaggler's Paradise

    The post-pubescent duo stepped into the parking lot. Both young men giggled like giddy teenagers. In the distance, the darkened silhouettes of two...

    Started by J D‎, 10-02-2011 08:30 AM
    • Replies: 5
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    10-02-2011, 04:27 PM Go to last post
  18. Part one of The African Adventures of Alyssa Norris first chapter

    A thin girl of around twelve gazed at a framed picture of her aunt, causing tears to fill her blue eyes as sorrow welled up again. Her aunt leaned...

    Started by Sunayna Prasad‎, 09-24-2011 04:43 AM
    3 Pages
    1 2 3
    • Replies: 24
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    10-02-2011, 09:28 AM Go to last post
  19. New hear, looking for opinions, first couple of pages, fantasy novel.

    At the edge of the woods, less than half a league from the castle’s walls, apart from the rest of the forest, stood a single, leafless and ancient...

    Started by Kieron Dodds‎, 08-08-2011 06:02 PM
    5 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 5
    • Replies: 40
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    10-01-2011, 08:14 AM Go to last post
  20. Please be honest- am I deluded or not?

    Hello Everyone, This is an extract from something I am writing and I would really like to know what people think. Any comments gratefully...

    Started by Susan B‎, 09-21-2011 05:25 AM
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    1 2
    • Replies: 12
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    09-29-2011, 12:26 AM Go to last post

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