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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 01:34 PM
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  1. The Today's

    I’ve been dunkin donuts and drinkin beer for years in some street bar, cum cafe. It’s elusive to main stream and part of an artery lined with grisly...

    Started by belle ball‎, 11-25-2011 12:46 AM
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    11-26-2011, 01:08 AM Go to last post
  2. 1,683 words Back in Khaki

    Back in Khaki “120 metres longer, 50 metres left.” I said. … BOOM! Kaboomfah!!! “Thanks man, we been shootin’ at that for a month.” He said.

    Started by Herman Munster‎, 11-18-2011 04:44 PM
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    11-24-2011, 01:14 PM Go to last post
  3. Untitled

    I've tried to apply all the rules I've learned here to this new piece. It is chapter one, hopefully showing not telling, opening in the middle of...

    Started by Susan B‎, 10-25-2011 08:24 AM
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    • Replies: 24
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    11-24-2011, 03:24 AM Go to last post
  4. Part of first chapter draft - No title yet

    Please could you have a look and tell me if this is making any sense at all. I need some kind of inspiration to continue writing. Its just in the...

    Started by Bertha Mukodzani‎, 10-18-2011 11:59 PM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 23
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    11-18-2011, 04:09 PM Go to last post
  5. Why You Should Proofread

    http://news.yahoo.com/colonel-sanders-secret-manuscript-revealed-201211341.html Here's a good example of why we always encourage writers to read...

    Started by leslee‎, 11-10-2011 06:25 PM
    6 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 6
    • Replies: 53
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    11-16-2011, 10:37 AM Go to last post
  6. Post end of Chap. One?

    I've moved along, revising, since my last post in Writing Critique. I made little changes to Chap. One since then from your suggestions. The content...

    Started by Claire Young‎, 11-15-2011 07:05 PM
    • Replies: 4
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    11-15-2011, 08:34 PM Go to last post
  7. Second novel is underway!

    Since this novel is complete departure from the first and will have no autobiographical ties, it's going to be a challenge! I've literally just...

    Started by Kyle Anderson‎, 11-03-2011 07:04 AM
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    • Replies: 15
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    11-05-2011, 08:16 PM Go to last post
  8. Please critique. Short story beginning (adult horror).

    Hi Guys. It's been kind of slow in here lately, so I decided to share this. I've begun work on my second novel, which is a prequel of the one I...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 10-29-2011 11:30 PM
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    11-02-2011, 05:24 PM Go to last post
  9. AWOL - The Top 10

    Well, I came back to take a look but haven't been finding many new posts on this site. Did everyone go AWOL? Anyway, does anyone know if Maria...

    Started by J D‎, 10-27-2011 02:31 PM
    • Replies: 4
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    10-28-2011, 11:33 AM Go to last post
  10. Short Story...D.A.V.I.D.

    Here is part of a short piece I whipped up the other day. Thank you for your critiques on the story. ...

    Started by Micheal Woodruff‎, 10-19-2011 01:19 AM
    4 Pages
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    10-26-2011, 06:13 PM Go to last post
  11. Need feedback on exact wording for my title

    My book is a how-to for stand-up comedy that covers everything outside of joke writing. (The business, the rules, handling hecklers, etc.) I have a...

    Started by Rob Durham‎, 10-20-2011 12:27 PM
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    • Replies: 11
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    10-26-2011, 02:00 PM Go to last post
  12. Fear of the Known

    Here is a draft of what I am currently thinking of as a "prelude" (is that too weird?) to my novel. It is "out of character" with the rest of the...

    Started by Gaylen Moore‎, 10-19-2011 07:50 AM
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    10-25-2011, 08:45 AM Go to last post
  13. Queen Bee

    I would like a critique on this piece. It's another short, I'm still sharpening my skills. All opinions are welcome. Tell me what you like, what you...

    Started by Miranda Clementine‎, 10-18-2011 06:33 PM
    • Replies: 8
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    10-24-2011, 09:10 AM Go to last post
  14. Moved: Thoughts of an Internet Stalker

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 10-17-2011 03:42 AM
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    10-19-2011, 06:38 AM Go to last post
  15. Taff

    I've been trying to work this chapter out from my novel GLIMPSE... not sure how it plays out with a reader. Any and all opinions are welcome. I'd...

    Started by J D‎, 10-09-2011 04:48 PM
    4 Pages
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    10-18-2011, 05:05 PM Go to last post
  16. Opening for THE BECOMING--(a few curse words but nothing too shocking)-thanks!

    (Deep breath) Okay, here goes. This is the beginning of my YA paranormal called THE BECOMING or ANTICHRIST 16 or whatever I end up calling it. ...

    Started by Carrie Graves‎, 10-15-2011 04:02 PM
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    10-18-2011, 01:13 PM Go to last post
  17. Introductory quote

    The working title for my novel is "Fear of the Known." I'd like to have an introductory quotation from the main character (her name is Raven Wolf)....

    Started by Gaylen Moore‎, 10-18-2011 06:28 AM
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    10-18-2011, 12:08 PM Go to last post
  18. Sample of book by new member

    Chronicles of the forgotten By Dave Bagley Copyright 1999 Chapter One- A Stranger Arrives She appeared again in his dreams, this time...

    Started by Dave Bagley‎, 10-13-2011 07:53 PM
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    10-18-2011, 06:46 AM Go to last post
  19. Wha'ya' reckon?

    I enjoy doin' stuff like this. It's a bit of a piece called, Burning Bum. My life has been sown together by a Vampire tooth and a weak...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 10-15-2011 12:32 PM
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    1 2
    • Replies: 13
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    10-16-2011, 11:36 PM Go to last post
  20. Flashback Scene~chapter 1

    This is the second scene in my first chapter, right after Gavin leaves. It's a flashback, and I've heard some bad things about doing this. Is this...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 10-08-2011 08:32 PM
    7 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 7
    • Replies: 60
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    10-16-2011, 02:12 PM Go to last post

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