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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 02:34 PM
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  1. Chapter 1: Dread (continued....)

    She came to a halt at a massive marble door. It went all the way to the cathedral ceiling. It was adorned with a carving of the Dragon Goddess...

    Started by krynnalexia‎, 03-01-2013 10:08 PM
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  2. Chapter 1: Dread (continued...)

    The air suddenly cooled as she hastened down the next hall. She knew her legs had taken her to the Sanctuary Garden. Her boot heels tapped loudly...

    Started by krynnalexia‎, 03-01-2013 10:04 PM
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  3. Chapter 1: Dread (continued..)

    The slate stone of the cliff-side wall made the Sanctum appear more natural. The other three walls were marble like the rest of the temple. The...

    Started by krynnalexia‎, 03-01-2013 09:51 PM
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  4. Chapter 1: Dread (continued)

    Clunk. Clunk. Clunk. Her black boots echoed in the white, marble halls of the temple as she made her way swiftly down the corridor. To her left,...

    Started by krynnalexia‎, 03-01-2013 09:39 PM
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  5. Is this better?

    Brian layed back in a uncomfortable cheap bench, stareing out the window of a public lounge. He saw a array of magnificent stars and interstellar...

    Started by jesus234‎, 02-28-2013 08:24 AM
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  6. Tell me what you think.

    This is a small part of the book i'm writeing tell me what you think. Aside from the grammar mistakes. Joyfully stareing at a line of stars...

    Started by jesus234‎, 02-28-2013 06:28 AM
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  7. Memoir

    I took the abuse till I couldn’t take it anymore and at the age of thirteen I decided to run away. Poor choice as it was I picked of all months...

    Started by kimbarkave‎, 02-28-2013 07:23 AM
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  8. Rise of the South Prologue

    Syrian-Turkish Border; April 17 With the Americans on the brink of a civil war, Yarden Hassan and Jibril Mohammad arrive in Damascus to meet...

    Started by Mark Raines‎, 02-25-2013 08:03 PM
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    02-27-2013, 11:49 PM Go to last post
  9. Synopsis critique for literary suspense manuscript

    Colin Wyle is a brilliant, troubled person from a shattered family by death, divorce and fame. Life begins anew for Colin when he meets Christel,...

    Started by David Balzarini‎, 02-17-2013 07:14 PM
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  10. Portion of First Chapter of YA Novel

    Hey thanks if you've already commented on something I've posted. Chapter 1 “Do you swear upon this holy bible that the information you filled...

    Started by samuel‎, 02-15-2013 11:03 AM
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  11. Descriptions?

    The start of a short story. Have at it! :) --- It was either the fixer-upper or couple’s counseling. We moved in on the first of May. Nature...

    Started by Anonymous1‎, 02-15-2013 07:46 PM
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  12. Prelude

    This is the prelude to my novel aimed mostly at the older end of the YA market. It is also intended to be an exposé much like Pat Conroy's The Water...

    Started by samuel‎, 02-14-2013 02:34 PM
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  13. No title yet Short Story Sci-Fi/ Horror (Adult Language & Graphic)

    She burst into the mess hall with her rifle drawn. There was no one in sight. The empty tables and chairs laid scattered about the crimson blotched...

    Started by Brena0817‎, 02-10-2013 09:37 AM
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  14. Merry Christmas!

    After today, I'll be on vacation for the next week or two, and typically, I have nothing or little to do with any computers on my vacation. Most...

    Started by John Oberon‎, 12-21-2012 05:39 AM
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  15. A Note From the Admiral

    A Note From the Admiral I thought about my brother today as I might think of my people from time to time. This memory came for no special reason;...

    Started by alcarty‎, 02-08-2013 03:43 PM
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  16. Simulated Murder: The Series

    A brief diversion before we begin the next chapter. Those of you following along have hopefully seen enough to get a feel for the story and the key...

    Started by Gilfindel‎, 02-06-2013 04:36 PM
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  17. Just curious if this is a decent start. Horror/ Sci-fi Short story

    Short Story opening. Wondering if I am off to a good start, I know its very short. I just need to know if I'm on the right track. Thanks a lot for...

    Started by Brena0817‎, 02-05-2013 06:41 AM
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    02-05-2013, 07:20 AM Go to last post
  18. The complex:

    This is a scene I am working on right now. I haven't posted in a while. Hope it's not too bad. ...

    Started by Author Pendragin‎, 01-17-2013 08:53 PM
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    01-21-2013, 09:21 PM Go to last post
  19. Simulated Murder: Chapter Four

    I've moderated Jen's over-active imagination from the tail end of the last chapter. In chapter 4, History and Background Information, we'll get a...

    Started by Gilfindel‎, 12-05-2012 05:07 PM
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    1 2 3 ... 4
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  20. Beginning of...well, I don't have a title yet!

    Hi all. I was hoping to get some feedback to the opening of a novel I've been working on. Here is it-- *** If you can’t forget, you have to...

    Started by Ed28‎, 12-10-2012 09:33 AM
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    12-12-2012, 11:26 AM Go to last post

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