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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 02:34 PM
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    08-24-2011, 02:34 PM Go to last post
  1. "A Quiet Man" first few pages...

    Alright, I thought I could stay away from writing for a bit turns out, I can't! So, here is a new project I'm working on and is not related to the...

    Started by Kyle Anderson‎, 12-05-2011 06:00 PM
    12 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 12
    • Replies: 119
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    12-14-2011, 10:14 PM Go to last post
  2. "Bards’ Bondage" By Chidi Anthony Opara

    Our bards Have been bound And bundled Into bunkhouses of book barons,

    Started by Zeblon Zeus‎, 07-25-2011 01:50 AM
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  3. "Bards’ Bondage" By Chidi Anthony Opara

    Our bards Have been bound And bundled Into bunkhouses of book barons, Their mouths bandaged. Their miens befuddled, Their bearings lost, Tis...

    Started by Zeblon Zeus‎, 07-25-2011 02:10 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 15
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    07-29-2011, 07:09 PM Go to last post
  4. "Elma's Garbage Can" hits four-star status on ShortnScaryStories.com!

    "Elma's Garbage Can" hits four-star status on ShortnScaryStories.com. Read and review at will. Also, my new novel, Black October, will be for...

    Started by Horrorone82‎, 05-06-2015 01:03 PM
    horror, novels, stories
    • Replies: 1
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    05-06-2015, 02:52 PM Go to last post
  5. "Elma's Garbage Can" rated three stars.

    Can't beat readers. "Elma's Garbage Can" rated three stars by readers with over a thousand views in three days. Read it now at...

    Started by Horrorone82‎, 04-29-2015 01:28 PM
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 2,056
    05-06-2015, 12:12 PM Go to last post
  6. "Hello World" Digital book is one of its kind.

    "Hello World" first printed in 2008 is a digital book with an interesting puzzle theme. It contains clues that lead to chapters of a real story which...

    Started by imported_Samantha Bezuidenhout‎, 03-15-2011 05:26 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 17
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    05-03-2011, 01:35 PM Go to last post
  7. "Sins Of Birth: Welcome" Prologue

    I'm thinking about scraping this entirely. I am finding that it is confusing readers and is not cohesive to the rest of the novel. Let me know your...

    Started by Kyle Anderson‎, 06-08-2011 10:51 AM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 2,841
    06-08-2011, 11:57 AM Go to last post
  8. 'The Turn of a Card' - part 1

    Your offer to critique is most appreciated, thank you in advance for your time and expertise. This chapter occurs 10,500 words into the story. ...

    Started by Isabella du Lac‎, 10-13-2015 07:35 PM
    crime, excerpt, feedback, murder, mystery
    • Replies: 6
    • Views: 3,102
    10-17-2015, 09:51 AM Go to last post
  9. 'The Turn of a Card' - part 2

    This is the rest of the Chapter from my previous post. Once again I thank you for your offer to critique. I am attempting my first novel and I am...

    Started by Isabella du Lac‎, 10-13-2015 07:39 PM
    author, crime, feedback, murder, mystery
    • Replies: 0
    • Views: 1,648
    10-13-2015, 07:39 PM Go to last post
  10. (Short Story) The Bride Carried Yellow Tulips - Part One

    Posting this in two to follow the rule of about 1000 words :) Mainly for your enjoyment, although serious critique is welcome, because we can...

    Started by Dublin Writer‎, 08-08-2014 10:21 AM
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    08-08-2014, 10:21 AM Go to last post
  11. (Short Story) The Bride Carried Yellow Tulips - Part Two

    **** The photograph on the shelf did not do Sheila justice, I decided. She looked exactly as I imagined Peggy had looked at her age. Long raven...

    Started by Dublin Writer‎, 08-08-2014 10:26 AM
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 2,120
    08-11-2014, 03:46 AM Go to last post
  12. Smile * ROOKIE MEMBER* Query Letter - THE PHOENIX CONSPIRACY

    Hello all! I'm a new member here. I've begun the process of finding a home for my novel. I have submitted a few queries with little action. However,...

    Started by joshlisec‎, 03-17-2012 12:29 PM
    3 Pages
    1 2 3
    • Replies: 22
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    03-21-2012, 04:17 PM Go to last post
  13. Wink ***Many Will Criticize***

    I know from first-hand experience that there are many people in this world who will be very critical of something they know little to nothing about....

    Started by Mr. Michael Live‎, 08-18-2015 11:43 AM
    7 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 7
    • Replies: 68
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    08-23-2015, 12:07 PM Go to last post
  14. *Constructive* Critiques wanted, please!

    Recently, several of my local high schools have been dealing with a rash of bullying related suicides, one of whom was a cheerleader on a team that I...

    Started by Raia‎, 08-19-2013 05:10 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 14
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    09-12-2013, 01:37 PM Go to last post
  15. 1,683 words Back in Khaki

    Back in Khaki “120 metres longer, 50 metres left.” I said. … BOOM! Kaboomfah!!! “Thanks man, we been shootin’ at that for a month.” He said.

    Started by Herman Munster‎, 11-18-2011 05:44 PM
    • Replies: 8
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    11-24-2011, 02:14 PM Go to last post
  16. 1st couple of paragraphs of 'Milecastle' - my ancient Roman Britain horror novel

    Hi folks, I'm brand new to the forum and brand new to actually writing...though I've been making up stories since childhood. I've started my 1st...

    Started by Jason Hunt‎, 07-22-2011 01:24 PM
    • Replies: 7
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    07-26-2011, 01:18 AM Go to last post
  17. 1st Page Che Che Poing

    Che Che Poing Chapter 1 Her family tree was a stump Morpra was said to be half wolverine and half billy-goat with a spit of witch. Her...

    Started by Tobias Garrett‎, 03-24-2012 12:41 AM
    • Replies: 5
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    03-25-2012, 11:57 AM Go to last post
  18. 1st paragraph of my new book.

    135th Berkley Lane, Adel Iowa, had sat virtually untouched for the last decade. Once a proud manor house it now sat lonely and abandoned. The...

    Started by AC_Corran‎, 02-25-2012 10:55 PM
    4 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 4
    • Replies: 38
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    02-29-2012, 10:01 PM Go to last post
  19. 2022 (sample)

    I don't mind if anyone wants to give me an English lesson but really I want to know if anyone finds this remotley interesting. CHAPTER TWELVE...

    Started by Julian Hulls‎, 01-31-2011 04:44 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 12
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    04-29-2011, 08:41 AM Go to last post
  20. 2022 prologue FOUL LANGUAGE WARNING

    Okay guys be honest. I know it's not for everyone but then, hey, what is? PROLOGUE Tomakomai, near Hokkaido, Japan 2010 ...

    Started by Julian Hulls‎, 01-29-2011 07:00 PM
    • Replies: 8
    • Views: 2,807
    04-29-2011, 08:48 AM Go to last post

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