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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 02:34 PM
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    08-24-2011, 02:34 PM Go to last post
  1. "A Quiet Man" first few pages...

    Alright, I thought I could stay away from writing for a bit turns out, I can't! So, here is a new project I'm working on and is not related to the...

    Started by Kyle Anderson‎, 12-05-2011 06:00 PM
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    12-14-2011, 10:14 PM Go to last post
  2. My Bad Writing Winning Entries

    Kitty was interested in seeing my award winning bad writing entries. The much missed Gopher Gold held these hilarious contests. I have to say,...

    Started by leslee‎, 02-20-2011 06:39 PM
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    04-13-2011, 12:00 PM Go to last post
  3. White Chocolate Mocha - Opening Scene

    I know that the opening line, paragraph, scene must capture an agent's attention and I would love to know if this is interesting, boring, terrible. ...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 01-21-2011 11:22 AM
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    08-27-2011, 05:10 AM Go to last post
  4. Candy Apples and Protein

    I've been working on some flash fiction once again to help with my writing. I would love to know what you guys think of this little ditty. ...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 09-01-2011 08:02 AM
    8 Pages
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    • Replies: 72
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    09-16-2011, 07:56 PM Go to last post
  5. Mix-tape: Prologue and first chapter *sexual content (mild)*

    Prologue Ever thought your life needs a soundtrack? A mix-tape of well-chosen songs to accompany everyday non-events. Something classical while...

    Started by nevrborn‎, 07-01-2013 03:02 PM
    7 Pages
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    • Replies: 68
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    07-15-2013, 08:34 AM Go to last post
  6. Wink ***Many Will Criticize***

    I know from first-hand experience that there are many people in this world who will be very critical of something they know little to nothing about....

    Started by Mr. Michael Live‎, 08-18-2015 11:43 AM
    7 Pages
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    08-23-2015, 12:07 PM Go to last post
  7. Richard Blaine

    Richard Blaine gives essence to the question that has puzzled many for years – Who was Rick before he opened Rick’s Café? Even for the younger...

    Started by Jodie Christian‎, 09-11-2011 11:21 AM
    7 Pages
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    09-13-2011, 12:37 PM Go to last post
  8. Wanring: Sexual/violent material in this post. Dark Erotica. Part 2

    This is part two to the first post. It is the rest of the chapter. Like I said earlier I know it isn't perfect and needs to be edited. Let me know so...

    Started by Margaret Compeau‎, 01-29-2011 10:53 AM
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    02-02-2011, 09:43 AM Go to last post
  9. Fat Cat Syndrome - Critique

    This is my opening scene for a novel I've written about the Fat Cat preachers in churches. I was hoping for a critique on this, to see if it's...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 02-11-2011 07:02 PM
    7 Pages
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    02-16-2011, 05:48 AM Go to last post
  10. Flashback Scene~chapter 1

    This is the second scene in my first chapter, right after Gavin leaves. It's a flashback, and I've heard some bad things about doing this. Is this...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 10-08-2011 09:32 PM
    7 Pages
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    10-16-2011, 03:12 PM Go to last post
  11. WIP (Sunstone Chronicles for now), Prologue

    Hi all, been a while since I posted. I'm trying to work up some creative energy to continue working on increasing my writing volume since my...

    Started by John Chritton‎, 09-16-2011 03:08 PM
    6 Pages
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    09-28-2011, 12:17 PM Go to last post
  12. My name is Gonzo. Please critique, but go to hell if you pick me up on anything!

    Stayed in a red light hotel full of Russian beauties, got nightmare flashbacks. They made me into a hotel in my mind. I became, Russian...

    Started by martin shaw‎, 10-10-2011 02:14 PM
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    10-14-2011, 03:17 PM Go to last post
  13. thoughts on unconventional narrative style?

    Below is the first page of what I've been working on lately. Is the narrative style too unconventional? Close friends have remarked that it is...

    Started by relco‎, 03-19-2012 03:06 PM
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    03-22-2012, 11:35 AM Go to last post
  14. A flash fiction - Circle

    I don't usually do flash. I am more of a novel and short story gal! But this was for a contest and it didn't place. Might be because it is crap......

    Started by Debbi V‎, 12-29-2015 01:07 AM
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    01-10-2016, 08:05 PM Go to last post
  15. Why You Should Proofread

    http://news.yahoo.com/colonel-sanders-secret-manuscript-revealed-201211341.html Here's a good example of why we always encourage writers to read...

    Started by leslee‎, 11-10-2011 07:25 PM
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    11-16-2011, 11:37 AM Go to last post
  16. Comments on this story opening?

    The dental assistant smiled very nicely and tousled his hair and said, "William, I suppose by now you're just absolutely sick of having those horrid...

    Started by robin‎, 05-16-2015 05:31 PM
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    10-08-2015, 03:37 PM Go to last post
  17. White Chocolate Mocha - REVISED

    Hey, I'm back. I've worked on this all weekend and I want to know if this is better or have I made it worse. I've added some to it and hopefully...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 08-07-2011 06:26 PM
    6 Pages
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    08-21-2011, 05:18 AM Go to last post
  18. Plan B

    CHAPTER ONE. The new Starry Night, built in 2360 and located on Bryson III, resembled a hundred other bars, on ten different worlds, whose...

    Started by MUSKETTER 3‎, 03-19-2013 11:13 AM
    5 Pages
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    04-25-2013, 11:06 AM Go to last post
  19. Hollar Dollar - REVISED

    If you aren't sick of me yet, would you mind looking over the revised version? I've been adding in all the amazing suggestions I received and wanted...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 06-22-2011 07:27 PM
    5 Pages
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    • Replies: 48
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    06-30-2011, 09:15 PM Go to last post
  20. Flash fiction (150 words) - interested in any comments/criticisms

    Hello all, I'm very new to the forums and usually only write for myself. I have a simple stream of consciousness piece of flash fiction and I'm...

    Started by bee‎, 05-30-2015 09:10 AM
    5 Pages
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    • Replies: 48
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    06-05-2015, 06:11 AM Go to last post

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