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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 01:34 PM
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  1. Simon Says

    Started by martin shaw‎, 02-21-2011 02:31 PM
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  2. Rinah and the Czezans

    Hello again. I was working on my story, and I found that I like this scene, but I'm not entirely sure if I have the General's responses and such...

    Started by Allison McClish‎, 06-08-2011 07:10 PM
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  3. Her Whimsical Stick Figure Family

    Just for fun, I wrote this little ditty about those damn stick figures on the back of everyone's car. I do like them, but some I find annoying! LOL...

    Started by Amy Lou‎, 07-16-2011 06:02 PM
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  4. "Bards’ Bondage" By Chidi Anthony Opara

    Our bards Have been bound And bundled Into bunkhouses of book barons,

    Started by Zeblon Zeus‎, 07-25-2011 12:50 AM
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  5. Sinners & Saints, page 1

    Posting page 1 for a critique. whatever hits you, i appreciate any any all feedback. I dream of horrifying and beautiful things. My name is...

    Started by David Balzarini‎, 08-18-2011 10:12 PM
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  6. Newest Hook Part Two

    Go to bars with your friends every night. Make a career out of drinking and chasing girls. Get phone numbers. Go on first dates. Go out to dinner and...

    Started by greg winick‎, 08-22-2011 10:04 AM
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  7. Query woes

    I'd appreciate and need some help here here if anyone has some suggestions. I'm also curious... does anyone consider "Satire" a category, such as...

    Started by J D‎, 09-04-2011 07:30 PM
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  8. CG Stephen

    If there is a general call for a redo ... now I'll close this thread. Very forward thinking of you. Great way to promote discussions, visit new...

    Started by Herman Munster‎, 03-09-2012 01:02 AM
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  9. repost: ch1/pt2

    From on his knees with his chest to the stone, Dorren slid his right hand around the base. Listening for signs of the overseers approach, he slid his...

    Started by voodoogator‎, 07-19-2012 02:40 AM
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  10. A Note From the Admiral

    A Note From the Admiral I thought about my brother today as I might think of my people from time to time. This memory came for no special reason;...

    Started by alcarty‎, 02-08-2013 03:43 PM
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  11. Chapter 1: Dread (continued)

    Clunk. Clunk. Clunk. Her black boots echoed in the white, marble halls of the temple as she made her way swiftly down the corridor. To her left,...

    Started by krynnalexia‎, 03-01-2013 09:39 PM
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  12. Chapter 1: Dread (continued..)

    The slate stone of the cliff-side wall made the Sanctum appear more natural. The other three walls were marble like the rest of the temple. The...

    Started by krynnalexia‎, 03-01-2013 09:51 PM
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  13. Chapter 1: Dread (continued...)

    The air suddenly cooled as she hastened down the next hall. She knew her legs had taken her to the Sanctuary Garden. Her boot heels tapped loudly...

    Started by krynnalexia‎, 03-01-2013 10:04 PM
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  14. Chapter 1: Dread (continued....)

    She came to a halt at a massive marble door. It went all the way to the cathedral ceiling. It was adorned with a carving of the Dragon Goddess...

    Started by krynnalexia‎, 03-01-2013 10:08 PM
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  15. Chapter 1: Dread (continued.....)

    "We‘re in trouble, Meya. The earth is crying. I can feel its pain. Ikusa and Satual must be trying to rip through the enchantment that keeps them...

    Started by krynnalexia‎, 03-01-2013 10:16 PM
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  16. GOODBYE HUMBLE PENNY post 2 of 2

    Upper Calf Creek Falls Utah We entered the canyon of Upper Calf Creek Falls from the rim above. Below us the land was pink and shaped like two...

    Started by marikaguthrie‎, 06-15-2014 07:06 AM
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  17. (Short Story) The Bride Carried Yellow Tulips - Part One

    Posting this in two to follow the rule of about 1000 words :) Mainly for your enjoyment, although serious critique is welcome, because we can...

    Started by Dublin Writer‎, 08-08-2014 09:21 AM
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  18. Chrono Hustle

    Okay, so in addition to Simple Complications, I have another series, Chrono Hustle, which is a monthly short story series. I've been working on it...

    Started by Eric Barkman‎, 12-02-2014 09:03 AM
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  19. First Chapter of London Mine (1732 words)

    London Mine Chapter 1 Awkward shopping 'Mr. Panites Offendable Charities' is what the signboard looked to read, but upon closer inspection I...

    Started by Tobias Garrett‎, 04-09-2018 03:58 PM
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