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  1. Exclamation Sticky Thread Sticky: What to expect when submitting work for critique: *Read Before You Post*

    Please limit posts to 1000 words or less. If your post contains graphic sexual content, violence or obscenity, please make a note in the subject...

    Started by Victoria‎, 08-24-2011 01:34 PM
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  1. Query

    For some reason I cannot log into the query critique group so I am posting here. Any an all feedback is appreciated! Dear Dream Agent: In...

    Started by r k‎, 04-09-2019 04:42 PM
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  2. First Chapter of London Mine (1732 words)

    London Mine Chapter 1 Awkward shopping 'Mr. Panites Offendable Charities' is what the signboard looked to read, but upon closer inspection I...

    Started by Tobias Garrett‎, 04-09-2018 03:58 PM
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  3. Properties of the Force (a SW FF Blurb, Prologue & Chap1)

    (BLURB) (OC!) As the Clone Wars rage, one clone-troopers fate reflects the struggle that threatens to tear the galaxy apart. For CT-3033 has a...

    Started by voodoogator‎, 06-16-2016 01:30 PM
    • Replies: 6
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    03-12-2017, 02:50 PM Go to last post
  4. Desert 1st Chapter wc-982

    Desert Chapter 1 Sweat If it wasn't for being tied to his saddle, Marion would have fallen off Phoebe hours ago. The day he started the...

    Started by Tobias Garrett‎, 01-13-2017 06:13 PM
    • Replies: 3
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    03-01-2017, 10:56 AM Go to last post
  5. New Story

    Dealing with third graders is annoying, but the parents can be just as annoying—if not more so. Jacqueline Marqaud is definitely one of the more...

    Started by Ivjohnson‎, 10-31-2016 06:40 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 11
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    11-12-2016, 06:11 PM Go to last post
  6. Fog & Ice Critique // Short Story

    Hi there. I'm a 26 year old Norwegian male who have just finished my business stuides. While writing my dissertation this summer i decided to take...

    Started by hghwriting‎, 10-02-2016 04:00 AM
    • Replies: 6
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    10-10-2016, 06:29 AM Go to last post
  7. Lochailort no more - comments please

    Bogs, rain, ticks and pain – welcome to the first instalment of reflections from the 2016 TGO Challenge coast-to-coast crossing of Scotland that are...

    Started by lurcherlad‎, 10-07-2016 03:37 AM
    • Replies: 3
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    10-09-2016, 12:19 PM Go to last post
  8. Cool THE SIEGE OF EREMUS (YA Fantasy)

    Hey guys! I was wondering if you could take a look at the intro of my manuscript here and critique it. IT WILL BE SPLIT INTO TWO POSTS. THE NEXT...

    Started by RVS‎, 09-27-2016 05:36 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    fantasy, youth adult
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  9. Urban Fantasy in mythological times.

    This is a mid-story scene, so requires a brief setup: Meretis, a lawyer, sued the goddess Eunomia and won the case. Eunomia, embarrassed and...

    Started by leedix‎, 09-10-2016 02:20 AM
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    1 2
    • Replies: 15
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    09-10-2016, 01:19 PM Go to last post
  10. First post short

    Thought of this last night before falling asleep and wrote it this evening. Too lame? A Western Lex knew he would die today. To the west, he...

    Started by leedix‎, 09-01-2016 07:13 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 14
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    09-08-2016, 10:56 AM Go to last post
  11. Prologue (first part)

    Hi everyone. This is a prologue to a horror novel (some profanity). Tear it apart. I had to split it into two parts (2000 words total), but it's...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 08-31-2016 02:39 PM
    4 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 4
    • Replies: 35
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    09-06-2016, 10:50 AM Go to last post
  12. Prologue (second Part)

    They lived three miles from town at the end of a seldom-used gravel road and their nearest neighbor was a half-mile away. She wondered, if something...

    Started by The Tinman‎, 08-31-2016 02:32 PM
    • Replies: 8
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    09-02-2016, 03:48 AM Go to last post
  13. Dark Tidings

    Here are the first six hundred words from Dark Tidings. I'm hoping to get feedback which will help me improve its appeal. The book has been published...

    Started by Ken Magee‎, 08-27-2016 10:44 PM
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    1 2
    • Replies: 13
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    08-30-2016, 07:35 PM Go to last post
  14. New Project Critique Request

    Here's the first 500 words or so of something new I started working on. Would like your thoughts. Cal Bachter was the best fighter they’d...

    Started by ArcadiaE‎, 08-16-2016 01:44 AM
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 10,777
    08-16-2016, 12:16 PM Go to last post
  15. First critique request

    A little background - this story takes place in a fictional Star Wars universe that overlaps with a lot of other sci-fi universes. (Buck Rogers,...

    Started by Ledopmi‎, 07-08-2016 06:59 PM
    3 Pages
    1 2 3
    • Replies: 27
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    07-31-2016, 11:08 AM Go to last post
  16. Short story for fun

    This is just something I wrote to try to get my creative juices flowing again. It definitely isn't perfect, but let me know what you think. Thanks in...

    Started by Nancy Lakes‎, 07-27-2016 07:09 AM
    • Replies: 7
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    07-27-2016, 12:11 PM Go to last post
  17. Critique for my YA novel

    Background info: Main character, Kaylie's, parents were both brutally killed and as a result she turned to drugs and alcohol until one night she was...

    Started by ArcadiaE‎, 07-07-2016 10:12 AM
    • Replies: 6
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    07-09-2016, 08:26 AM Go to last post
  18. edited for writing critque

    Kisses can be scandalous. The priest was so delicate, so sweet-hearted, so tender, and yet so masculine. His hair was mussed up and a little damp...

    Started by regina‎, 06-24-2016 11:47 PM
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    06-25-2016, 07:05 PM Go to last post
  19. critique fiction novel please

    Set over four weeks in the brutal winter of 1954, Father Briar and the Angel Marceline is an historical romance unlike any other. When a...

    Started by regina‎, 06-23-2016 10:30 PM
    • Replies: 9
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    06-24-2016, 11:34 PM Go to last post
  20. Excerpt I: A Place for Dying

    Feliz Piez, a nom de plume, sat on a balcony overlooking the Caribbean Sea. He used an alias not only in his writings, which were many and varied...

    Started by Feliz Piez‎, 06-21-2016 01:57 AM
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    • Replies: 10
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    06-23-2016, 05:55 AM Go to last post

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