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Discuss the craft of writing. Questions about how to string words, sentences and stories together? Ask them here, or post a sample to get an honest critique of your work. This is a public forum.

  1. Critique please!

    The name of my book is "Return to Superior" This is a short Prologue and the first chapter. Prologue An hour before sunrise, she gave in. ...

    Started by Howard Schwartz‎, 01-12-2011 08:22 PM
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    01-14-2011, 12:29 PM Go to last post
  2. Critique Please!

    Tropical rain forest. Borneo. Night time. I look up. The darkest night I think Iíve ever experienced. And I donít mean dark as in horror Ė I mean...

    Started by N D‎, 11-07-2008 05:06 AM
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    11-11-2008, 12:09 PM Go to last post
  3. Critique please! Short excerpt

    This is the beginning of a longer short story. Critique would be much appreciated. --- Howard Flynn The man who called himself Howard Flynn...

    Started by Flap Jack‎, 11-16-2010 07:48 PM
    • Replies: 7
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    11-20-2010, 05:15 PM Go to last post
  4. Critique please, anyone?

    Hi, guys, I\'ve been lurking around for a while. It took me some time to pluck the courage to post this excerpt, it\'s a bit off beat, so it may...

    Started by Tina Belica‎, 10-20-2006 10:30 AM
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    • Replies: 28
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    10-22-2006, 08:46 AM Go to last post
  5. Critique please, harsh as you like!

    I'm not sure about this one. This was going to be (part of) chapter 1 of a novel I was working on, mostly about friends drifting apart, but i'm...

    Started by Sagan Smith‎, 03-28-2008 09:45 AM
    • Replies: 8
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    04-03-2008, 08:11 AM Go to last post
  6. Critique please.

    I know that I have posted a lot lately. This is the only place I can truly have things seen with new eyes.This is the opening done in third person. I...

    Started by Cubist Zero‎, 01-20-2010 10:14 AM
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    • Replies: 12
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    01-24-2010, 11:38 AM Go to last post
  7. critique please.

    Reeling reverence in a braidth of mind solderin' hundreds of minute wee thoughts around my ears, in effervescent light like lucifiere valkeyrie...

    Started by Russell Sneddon‎, 08-23-2005 06:05 AM
    • Replies: 1
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    08-27-2005, 07:11 PM Go to last post
  8. Critique please. Take one.

    I know these are starting to sound alike, but this is the last mystery for which I am trying to form a coherent query. Does this work? Thanks. ...

    Started by L. J. Kottke‎, 03-26-2007 09:37 AM
    • Replies: 6
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    04-02-2007, 02:29 PM Go to last post
  9. Critique please..

    Here is a partial of the opening of my book.. I hope it's not too long, and if this gets good feedback/criticism/whatever you want to call it I'll...

    Started by Josh Maher‎, 01-18-2011 12:10 AM
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    01-26-2011, 11:01 AM Go to last post
  10. Critique please/ new to the boards!

    Hey! I've been looking for a place like this for a while and finally found it. There are so many writers here it's almost amazing (I come from a very...

    Started by Victoria Taylor‎, 07-15-2007 02:04 PM
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    • Replies: 15
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    07-17-2007, 04:13 PM Go to last post
  11. Critique please: Fantasy/Detective novel

    Hi all, This is the proloque of a fantasy/detective novel I've been working on while my previous work is on the desks of a few agents (A big...

    Started by S. D.‎, 03-23-2006 03:18 PM
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    • Replies: 13
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    03-27-2006, 07:12 AM Go to last post
  12. Critique please?

    I am reworking E.M. Forster's HOWARD'S END (now in the public domain) and setting it in 2006 New York. Any critique is appreciated as I am still...

    Started by Gregory White‎, 08-22-2008 06:48 AM
    • Replies: 7
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    08-22-2008, 01:04 PM Go to last post
  13. Critique please?

    I am finishing up the second book of a trilogy. My publisher has emphasized that each book should be able to stand alone as a separate story, but I'm...

    Started by Rich L.‎, 03-17-2007 06:50 PM
    • Replies: 6
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    03-20-2007, 06:46 PM Go to last post
  14. critique pls

    What I want to know is if the conversation flows in this piece. Is there anything else wrong with it as well? Thank you. It's YA. ...

    Started by Usman Ijaz‎, 02-24-2005 10:38 AM
    • Replies: 1
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    02-24-2005, 11:16 AM Go to last post
  15. Critique Plz - NOTE 1400 odd words

    Firstly, at just over 1400 words I apologize in advance for the length but I've just re-done the entire 1st chapter of my 1st MS while I'm waiting on...

    Started by Raven Nights‎, 01-23-2010 10:00 AM
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    • Replies: 10
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    01-26-2010, 03:15 AM Go to last post
  16. Critique Prologue Please

    I decided to write a prologue it enabled me to remove almost 1,000 words of back story from the first chapter. Besides a critique. If you don't know...

    Started by Tina Brockett‎, 03-26-2010 07:21 AM
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    • Replies: 28
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    04-09-2010, 07:25 PM Go to last post
  17. Critique Request

    Just another page from my supernatural soap opera in progress :-) ALl comments are welcome! Quiana changed into her nightgown and...

    Started by Jason Guevara‎, 11-25-2005 05:21 PM
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    • Replies: 15
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    11-27-2005, 11:48 AM Go to last post
  18. Critique request

    Ok, I'll give it a try. Floowing are the first approx. 200 words of a 50 page work. If you are really bored and would like to comment, or if you...

    Started by Robert Richards‎, 11-13-2004 07:51 PM
    • Replies: 6
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    11-15-2004, 06:49 AM Go to last post
  19. Critique Request

    I'm a beginning writer who is wondering if anyone else would enjoy what he writes. To respect Hamish's request that items posted be less than 1000...

    Started by Hugh Morris‎, 08-14-2003 07:56 AM
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 401
    08-16-2003, 05:27 PM Go to last post
  20. Critique Request

    I'm a beginning writer who wonders if what he has written is worthwhile in any way. It's about 2000 words long. Hamish does't want sections that...

    Started by Hugh Morris‎, 08-14-2003 07:43 AM
    • Replies: 1
    • Views: 400
    08-14-2003, 07:58 AM Go to last post

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