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Forum: Writing Craft Threads

Discuss the craft of writing. Questions about how to string words, sentences and stories together? Ask them here, or post a sample to get an honest critique of your work. This is a public forum.

  1. Missing member

    I kind of miss Chriss Redd. Come on now, don't you all sort of as well?

    Started by Book Worm‎, 02-05-2009 09:26 PM
    • Replies: 9
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    02-08-2009, 12:55 PM Go to last post
  2. For those interested in possible publishing

    Have an unpublished novel you know Amazon.com readers will love? Enter your manuscript in the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award for a chance to win a...

    Started by Henry Bemis‎, 02-04-2009 07:58 PM
    • Replies: 8
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    02-08-2009, 12:29 PM Go to last post
  3. Why yalls advice isn't applied

    Well, I was just wondering why you all would advice me to do this and do that, then I read a book by Nora Roberts, who has many books published, and...

    Started by Amber Autry‎, 02-04-2009 08:02 AM
    7 Pages
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    • Replies: 66
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    02-08-2009, 12:15 PM Go to last post
  4. My revised first paragraph, what work needs to be done?

    I have taken my first paragraph and tried to apply the rules I have been showed. Please tell me what I have missed. Jessica Yates woke with a...

    Started by Amber Autry‎, 02-03-2009 12:53 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 13
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    02-08-2009, 11:44 AM Go to last post
  5. Is this better?

    ďFind her! Kill her!Ē The voice in her head screamed. There were other voices intertwined with that one, but those words were the loudest and...

    Started by LaDae Cortez‎, 02-03-2009 12:13 PM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 423
    02-08-2009, 10:42 AM Go to last post
  6. A sentence that may need help

    The love in Jessís dadís eyes vanished, and her mom seemed to become estranged from the family. The sentence above is part of my book, but I...

    Started by Amber Autry‎, 02-03-2009 10:58 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 17
    • Views: 876
    02-08-2009, 10:39 AM Go to last post
  7. Please help with this sentence?

    I have been paring (or trying to) and I have this one sentence in particular that I seem to have broken absolutely every rule on. I canít think of...

    Started by LaDae Cortez‎, 02-03-2009 05:55 AM
    • Replies: 8
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    02-08-2009, 10:36 AM Go to last post
  8. first paragraph

    This is my opening paragraph. Something is not right with the last sentence and I canít figure out what it is. Any ideas? Kill. Danger. ...

    Started by LaDae Cortez‎, 02-02-2009 07:57 AM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 20
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    02-08-2009, 10:28 AM Go to last post
  9. Description -adequate? accurate?

    The following is a scene in my book. The reader already knows that the couple is on vacation. House hunting and relocation are the farthest things...

    Started by Book Worm‎, 01-31-2009 07:46 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 11
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    02-08-2009, 10:03 AM Go to last post
  10. Critique wanted: ruthless criticism is required

    Dear all, Could you pls review my short story? Or rather: slush&burn, any ruthless criticism is appreciated!!! If it\'s still worth living, I can...

    Started by andy andy‎, 01-28-2009 06:42 AM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 16
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    02-08-2009, 09:51 AM Go to last post
  11. My short story

    Be warned, it's 1200 words and the stories I have published are usually comedic. This was my attempt at a hemingway-esque crime story. Grammar is...

    Started by Gogol? You must mean Google.‎, 02-07-2009 06:42 PM
    • Replies: 2
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    02-07-2009, 07:20 PM Go to last post
  12. Intro rewrite

    This is a rewrite of the intro to a teen fantasy/romance that i'm attempting to write. Personally i think it's too cliche and simplistic, but my...

    Started by El Watkins‎, 12-20-2008 10:17 AM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 24
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    02-07-2009, 03:12 AM Go to last post
  13. Punctuation Problem

    I'm blanking. How do I punctuate a question that lists the options for an answer, as in: "Who are you trying to get rid of, him or me?" "Who are...

    Started by The Midnight Writer‎, 02-05-2009 06:07 PM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 15
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    02-06-2009, 04:56 PM Go to last post
  14. Free writing courses Online

    I decided to post this for anyone that may want to use this. I am going to look through and see which one may be best for me. ...

    Started by Amber Autry‎, 02-05-2009 06:29 PM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 445
    02-06-2009, 12:38 PM Go to last post
  15. Apologizing for being sore

    I want to apologize for becomeing sore about all of your help. I realized that you were just trying, no matter if it sounded kind of rude from some....

    Started by Amber Autry‎, 02-05-2009 08:37 AM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 22
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    02-06-2009, 08:50 AM Go to last post
  16. need advice again .. please

    First and formost, My first draft. Blah blah blah. LOL You all know how I start these posts. My question is if something is going on and others...

    Started by Judy Spelbring‎, 02-04-2009 03:35 PM
    5 Pages
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    • Replies: 41
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    02-05-2009, 12:52 PM Go to last post
  17. Feb. Fiction Challenge

    Sharpen your pencils ... here's another fiction challenge. In 200 words or less describe how this came about: <img src =...

    Started by Mya Bell‎, 02-04-2009 09:36 AM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 21
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    02-05-2009, 11:57 AM Go to last post
  18. Revised Revised Opening

    I've just gone through another sweep with this opening and as you know the first five pages are the money pages, so I'd like to get it as clean as...

    Started by Rogue Mutt‎, 02-03-2009 03:54 PM
    3 Pages
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    • Replies: 24
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    02-05-2009, 10:30 AM Go to last post
  19. Metaphors and analogies

    The difference between metaphor and analogy is is causing me a problem. I don't know if my ignorance is forgivable, but I'd like to learn the answer...

    Started by Jo Mazz‎, 02-01-2009 09:54 AM
    • Replies: 9
    • Views: 495
    02-05-2009, 04:21 AM Go to last post
  20. Need advice for a scene

    Below is a scene from my novel where a son who has faced a lot of recent tragedy and a physical fight with his brother is talking in a dark basement...

    Started by Christopher Davis‎, 02-04-2009 10:08 AM
    • Replies: 1
    • Views: 303
    02-04-2009, 07:33 PM Go to last post

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