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Discuss the craft of writing. Questions about how to string words, sentences and stories together? Ask them here, or post a sample to get an honest critique of your work. This is a public forum.

  1. 6235 words for comments.

    Hi folks, I could do without ironic one liners that say nothing, comments good or bad would be greatly appreciated. Learning from Russ; would...

    Started by akas deodenal‎, 12-06-2002 11:27 PM
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    12-07-2002, 10:30 AM Go to last post
  2. You Have To Be Nuts To Be Here

    A few days ago some toad made reference to my obvious insanity. At first, I was righteously pissed, but upon reflection had to admit the poor fellow...

    Started by Jack Klaw‎, 12-06-2002 02:54 PM
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    12-07-2002, 04:33 AM Go to last post
  3. Openings

    Ok here is the gig.......... I hate openings? Don't try to talk me out of it either................ This whole damn piece is ready, but the opening...

    Started by Yvonne Oots‎, 12-06-2002 10:48 AM
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    12-07-2002, 02:41 AM Go to last post
  4. Air???????????

    Here is a question for a friday night freeze in...... Why is there Air? Yvonne

    Started by Yvonne Oots‎, 12-06-2002 03:45 PM
    • Replies: 6
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    12-07-2002, 12:28 AM Go to last post
  5. <SIGH> That musical sentence again

    The Grand Master Bertram Beddoes and Mrs. Dorothy Beddoes are to be ceremoniously applauded to top table. The rhythmic clapping begins at tempo...

    Started by Picture Book‎, 12-05-2002 02:46 PM
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    12-06-2002, 06:43 PM Go to last post
  6. Please help me.....

    With this difficult paragraph.....I'd really appreciate the help! Thunderous chat in the vast Dining Hall tones down to mumbles, to...

    Started by Picture Book‎, 12-04-2002 04:09 PM
    4 Pages
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    • Replies: 30
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    12-06-2002, 12:20 PM Go to last post
  7. OK, I think this is the right one.

    Everything he’s ever loved has vanished – “Where’s David Copperfield when I need him?” That night Angus Lipken paces frantically around his...

    Started by Joseph Koppe‎, 12-06-2002 09:03 AM
    • Replies: 3
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    12-06-2002, 11:41 AM Go to last post
  8. Please comment on the Synopsis

    Hi Folks, Will this synopsis help snag an agent. Appreciate your comments. SYNOPSIS: ‘ GOOD BOYS BECOME WHALES’ BY AKAS SEMBLANCE...

    Started by akas deodenal‎, 12-04-2002 07:45 PM
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    12-06-2002, 10:34 AM Go to last post
  9. I hope I am improving...

    I have been mixing pieces of chapters trying to fit something together that was, inviting to the reader. I reqorked the first chapter and this is a...

    Started by Joseph Koppe‎, 12-06-2002 07:57 AM
    • Replies: 4
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    12-06-2002, 09:41 AM Go to last post
  10. Excerpt/Please critique

    (I've had some trouble with this whole scene.) ..and Christopher, could you please check the musical terms? Thank you! :o) ...

    Started by Picture Book‎, 12-05-2002 01:51 PM
    • Replies: 8
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    12-06-2002, 09:32 AM Go to last post
  11. Editing Book

    Someone recommended a book about self-editing...Bob K? I can't find the thread for the title. Can anyone remember who recommended it and what it...

    Started by Picture Book‎, 12-04-2002 02:37 PM
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    12-05-2002, 08:59 PM Go to last post
  12. Big Hello to Sis!!!

    Sis, It was so nice to see that all your hard work has paid off for you. One thing about writing a book about your life, you have to go through...

    Started by Charles "Boog" Hayes‎, 12-05-2002 07:33 PM
    • Replies: 1
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    12-05-2002, 08:52 PM Go to last post
  13. Swapping Critiques

    I have about 25 pages at 1.5 line spacing (11,300 words) of a fictional book written entitled Obscured by Clouds and I'd like to do some offline...

    Started by Russ Still‎, 12-04-2002 02:23 PM
    • Replies: 8
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    12-05-2002, 06:57 PM Go to last post
  14. Gary and your snow!

    Since you live in falls church, I have an idea. My mother lives just outside winchester, va. They have 8" of snow and still counting... Would you...

    Started by Yvonne Oots‎, 12-05-2002 12:12 PM
    • Replies: 6
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    12-05-2002, 06:15 PM Go to last post
  15. Chapter 4 -- 1470 words

    I made this smaller. Does it work? I hope so. Sent it out today (along with the first 11 chapters. Thanks for anything you have to say about it....

    Started by Bob Kellogg‎, 12-04-2002 01:26 PM
    • Replies: 3
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    12-05-2002, 11:18 AM Go to last post
  16. Worshipful Masters

    ....is the Worshipful Master who is in the 'chair' referred to as 'The Grand Master?' (Masonic) Does anyone know the prayer/grace said before...

    Started by Picture Book‎, 12-04-2002 04:40 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    12-05-2002, 09:29 AM Go to last post
  17. Short Story Critique

    I'd like some feedback on this short story. I need to know if you read it all the way through. Thanks in advance, I know this requires some of...

    Started by Matt H‎, 12-04-2002 09:25 AM
    • Replies: 9
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    12-05-2002, 07:00 AM Go to last post
  18. something for the season

    I've read alot of Christmas cheer on the sites recently. I've been working on some stories about my world. I'd like to share this with you. ...

    Started by Glen T. Brock‎, 12-04-2002 07:50 PM
    • Replies: 1
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    12-05-2002, 12:05 AM Go to last post
  19. Quotes to think about

    The nobler sort of man emphasizes the good qualities in others, and does not accentuate the bad. The inferior does the reverse. --Confucius Do...

    Started by Kaz‎, 12-01-2002 08:33 AM
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    12-04-2002, 09:25 PM Go to last post
  20. Granny knickers

    Thought you might want to know more... Author: Donald Lowery (---.accesscom.net) Date: 12-04-02 09:51 There are a lot of meanings that have...

    Started by Donald Lowery‎, 12-04-2002 07:52 AM
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    12-04-2002, 07:03 PM Go to last post

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