Discuss the craft of writing. Questions about how to string words, sentences and stories together? Ask them here, or post a sample to get an honest critique of your work. This is a public forum.
I thought I'd put this in a new topic so everyone doesn't have to burn out their scrolling finger. Alrighty, Bea and everyone else...how's this?...
Hi, I got a comment recently on the opening of my novel that I haven't received until now. The person said that it was too expository, while I...
My first novel is a fantasy... I've read way more than enough fantasy to understand what "fantasy readers want", being one myself. I'm compelled to...
In fiction writing, can someone define FLOW?
How is this for a synopsis? It tells the story, with some detail, but is kept short and sweet. After a short, but arduous war, Alexian and his...
It holds me. It has stolen my soul. Am I the best? No. Will I ever be? No. But no matter. I love to write, to read, it's my love. I have...
That is, so the reader is in the strongest illusion possible that the words are not words, but he/she is experiencing it (not merely that the scene...
Thanks to everyone that looked at my first page. Based on feedback, here is the rewrite. Is this a stronger opening than the one I posted in the...
Alrighty, comrades...here's the first chapter of my book The Tyro. It's kinda like Captains Courageous on the farm, lol. Spoiled rotten kid meets...
I'm not going to say anything about the character, just give his dialogue. So please critique just on the dialogue alone. "Let’s say...
I have in front of me my finished 1st draft of my novel. I am extremely satisfied that the 'story concept' is a winner. But, what issues regarding...
Do any of you have any views as to maintaining facts in fiction? I mean when writing I feel uneasy about making something up about an area or a...
I'm currently experimenting with a different way of writing in my current project. Usually, I write from start to finish, never deviating from the...
Since coming here, I've been trying to ascertain how to begin a new thread rather than tagging my own queries on to some one else's post. I just...
I was wondering if anyone had the time to read the opening 30 pages of my WIP, and tell me their thoughts, especialy regarding the flow, the...
I've read: http://www.lindahopelee.com/tip8.html Please see the examples (they're very brief) of objective and subjective writing. I've...
I do all of my writing using Word. I've taken a bit of a break from my novel and am finishing up a short story for posting on a web site. Now,...
I know it needs some more editing but here goes... know I need more editing. But here goes... As the thief made the last turn on the...
Hi, Would appreciate your input. In my latest novel I have many people thinking out loud. What is the correct usage to indicate thought? Is it, as...
That’s what John Grisham’s states on his website:- ___________________________ “…It's all fiction, folks. I know very little about spies,...
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