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Discuss the craft of writing. Questions about how to string words, sentences and stories together? Ask them here, or post a sample to get an honest critique of your work. This is a public forum.

  1. Christos, Nina & Leslee, Here is my first poem in here!!!!

    The Circle This life we live in now is full of fighting and many wars There isn't a lot of mending or openings of any doors.. We look inside...

    Started by M Bennett‎, 03-19-2006 05:53 AM
    • Replies: 2
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    03-19-2006, 07:11 PM Go to last post
  2. critique

    Could you please give some hints and tips on improving this passage? Thanks xxx I remember it well. I think about that night every time my...

    Started by Erin Everly‎, 03-14-2006 01:03 PM
    • Replies: 8
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    03-19-2006, 01:44 PM Go to last post
  3. What is wrong with this?

    Author John DeChancie earns part of his living by critiquing works by various aspiring and/or perspiring authors. One afternoon, at an open house at...

    Started by Joe Zeff‎, 02-27-2006 10:52 PM
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    • Replies: 32
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    03-19-2006, 01:26 AM Go to last post
  4. Thanks guys!

    Just wanted to offer up collective thanks to all who responded to my request for a critique. The constructive input offered was invaluable. All...

    Started by Tracy Johnson‎, 03-16-2006 12:18 PM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 419
    03-18-2006, 06:54 PM Go to last post
  5. Okay, here goes...

    Iím putting on my body armor and posting one of my poems. As I said before, I donít consider myself a poet, but needed to use a few in my novel. ...

    Started by Pat Parker‎, 03-10-2006 10:41 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 10
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    03-14-2006, 02:38 PM Go to last post
  6. Chapter by chapter or whole MS?

    Hi, Just curious....I'm mired in pages and pages of one MSWord file that contains my entire MS. It works great when I want to search something...

    Started by author author‎, 03-09-2006 11:53 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 17
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    03-14-2006, 03:36 AM Go to last post
  7. Prologue Critique

    Was hoping I could get some honest feedback on this prologue excerpt from my memoir. I'd be extremely grateful for any insights. May 05, 2004...

    Started by Tracy Johnson‎, 03-10-2006 03:59 PM
    • Replies: 9
    • Views: 686
    03-11-2006, 06:30 PM Go to last post
  8. Character opinion please?

    Hi, I'm coiming up for air. Sorry I've been absent. I've been trying to wrap up my novel. I'd like to request an opinion about my characters. The...

    Started by author author‎, 03-09-2006 11:42 AM
    • Replies: 9
    • Views: 767
    03-10-2006, 06:58 PM Go to last post
  9. Changing from 1st person to 3rd person

    Richard was beginning to settle in his cottage in the heart of the countryside in Essex. Although it was vastly different from living in London, the...

    Started by Robert Griffiths‎, 02-26-2006 10:10 AM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 621
    03-10-2006, 12:15 PM Go to last post
  10. Please to critique my pargraph

    Dear all friend: Please to critiqe my folowing paragraph. I have slave upon it and it is truly perfection. There are no known error inside it, to my...

    Started by Grimus from McChirples‎, 02-24-2006 10:54 PM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 10
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    03-10-2006, 12:12 PM Go to last post
  11. opinions please

    Opinions please ... There's a particular style of writing i'm using, and I'm wondering if it works? My short story starts off like this: "Very...

    Started by storm willis‎, 03-10-2006 05:03 AM
    • Replies: 1
    • Views: 453
    03-10-2006, 10:20 AM Go to last post
  12. Help, I've never done this before

    I'm writing a poem thing for a friend for her novel. The book has to do with a woman's journey through relatinships and family. (Women's lit...

    Started by Maggie May Schill‎, 03-08-2006 08:43 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 10
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    03-10-2006, 08:39 AM Go to last post
  13. Be as truthfull as you can

    The Book Anana Knight Day 1 Flight 147, flight 147 is departing for Las Vegas. Is heard over a loud speaker in Miami...

    Started by Will Allen‎, 03-05-2006 10:01 AM
    5 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 5
    • Replies: 43
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    03-09-2006, 05:06 PM Go to last post
  14. Avatar: 4

    Now I find I'm gun-shy about including any environmental description. I should probably take a break and read a Heinlein novel. But here goes, and...

    Started by Paul Cilwa‎, 01-05-2006 07:32 AM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 453
    03-09-2006, 07:20 AM Go to last post
  15. Haven't posted here lately

    Working on the book. Yes, the whole book, but today spent time tightening up the first paragraph. I would like to think that no one will be doing the...

    Started by Ann Casey‎, 02-19-2006 12:19 PM
    • Replies: 8
    • Views: 607
    03-08-2006, 08:33 AM Go to last post
  16. Style Check-Up

    Just a random scene. Does it flow okay? Is there hope for me? ___ "Sydney, not to change the subject, but I wanted to talk about...

    Started by Angel Kemory‎, 02-19-2006 09:04 PM
    • Replies: 9
    • Views: 670
    03-08-2006, 08:32 AM Go to last post
  17. Question about internal monologue

    I am starting a rewrite of my novel and something has occurred to me. In the previous versions I have quite a bit of internal monologue that I have...

    Started by Wurdy‎, 02-23-2006 08:44 PM
    • Replies: 7
    • Views: 766
    03-08-2006, 08:26 AM Go to last post
  18. How many pages?

    Is there a rule for chapterís length? I am going over some novels I have in here, and none of the chapters have the same amount of pages. My first...

    Started by Malena Venant‎, 03-02-2006 08:14 AM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 514
    03-08-2006, 08:25 AM Go to last post
  19. Express Romance and Sex

    With modern day romance and sex, I am trying to find the suitable words without being rude or insulting female readers, etc. Which are the best...

    Started by Robert Griffiths‎, 03-05-2006 01:42 AM
    • Replies: 4
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    03-08-2006, 08:18 AM Go to last post
  20. Critique Needed

    Just wanted some feedback on this newly written excerpt. It's from a memoir I'm working on. Just to forewarn you, it's not for the faint-hearted. ...

    Started by Tracy Johnson‎, 03-06-2006 07:31 PM
    • Replies: 6
    • Views: 690
    03-07-2006, 04:08 PM Go to last post

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