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Discuss the craft of writing. Questions about how to string words, sentences and stories together? Ask them here, or post a sample to get an honest critique of your work. This is a public forum.

  1. Your opinion please…

    Hi, I would appreciate your comments on the fragment I’ve posted below. It is from the last chapter and the characters appeared earlier in the novel....

    Started by George Kozi‎, 08-13-2006 05:22 AM
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  2. your opinion please...

    Hi.I would appreciate some comments on the following fragment. Does it flow alright? Does it have clarity of thought? Is the voice clear enough? ...

    Started by George Kozi‎, 05-21-2006 03:14 AM
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  3. Your opinion please

    Hi everyone. I would appreciate your comments about the fragment I’ve posted below. It is from the middle of what I hope will one day be my debut...

    Started by George Kozi‎, 09-12-2007 03:45 PM
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    09-21-2007, 05:00 PM Go to last post
  4. your opinion on a metaphor

    I need your responses to this metaphor. It comes at a key point in my novel, and I really want it to be a great one. I feel too close to the work,...

    Started by Ian B‎, 07-07-2005 09:02 PM
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    07-08-2005, 04:37 PM Go to last post
  5. Your opinion is respectfully requested

    Hello out there! I would like some feedback on this piece, as it may be the beginning of my first book. Any help is greatly appreciated. Thanks...

    Started by Naomi Blass-Schutz‎, 05-30-2006 11:07 AM
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    06-02-2006, 10:55 AM Go to last post
  6. your novel endings - happy or sad?

    which endings do you write more of? happy or sad? Gregory

    Started by Gregory White‎, 09-20-2007 06:30 AM
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    09-22-2007, 03:55 PM Go to last post
  7. Your kind feedback on hook

    Thanks for all the comments to my previous post, which has been burried. I have some explanations and more questions, if you would be so kind. The...

    Started by inksli 4‎, 09-10-2007 07:51 AM
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  8. Your indulgence please. New beginning

    I have been working a little on it, and it probably still needs tweaking, but I wonder if I have made some progress. If you were an agent, would...

    Started by Debbi Voisey‎, 11-11-2008 10:49 AM
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  9. Your indulgence please - warning - sex scene!

    Help! I am trying to write a sex scene that doesn't read like a story from Penthouse or whatever. I don't want to write porn, but I want it to be...

    Started by Debbi Voisey‎, 12-21-2006 09:27 AM
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    12-29-2006, 05:59 PM Go to last post
  10. Your imput would be greatly appreciated.

    Hello everyone. I'm very new here, and I'm very excited to be at WritersNet. I have two short stories I'm getting ready to submit to a publisher, and...

    Started by Shannen Hanson‎, 02-07-2008 07:49 PM
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  11. Your impressions of this flash fiction piece

    Learning to Make Gravy Shelly gets nervous when her husband drinks. Not that he’s a...

    Started by Denise .‎, 09-09-2005 06:03 PM
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  12. your help please

    can anyone tell me how to add a name and the title of a book, as a header, to all the pages in a manuscript? thanks:-)

    Started by r k‎, 05-22-2006 12:43 PM
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    05-25-2006, 12:19 AM Go to last post
  13. Your help is requested

    Mark's best friend since grade school was shot while hunting and is now paralyzed from the waist down. I decided to give Steve Peterson a call. ...

    Started by Howard Schwartz‎, 09-16-2009 08:10 PM
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  14. Your first lines

    I'm borrowing a page from Maggie Dana (see thread below), but rather than revealing favorite first lines, I thought we could share *our* first lines....

    Started by Jonathan‎, 06-22-2003 06:50 PM
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  15. Your Feedback Is Important For Me!

    Hello! I would like to post my new writing here, hopefully you will let me know your feedback, thank you! Here is my writing:-] ...

    Started by Shaikha Alshomli‎, 12-07-2008 03:13 AM
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    12-08-2008, 06:43 PM Go to last post
  16. Your favorite tag?

    Of all the tags, of all the, he said, she said ends we have seen, and knowing the trend now is to leave the tags off as often as possible, I could...

    Started by Steven Labri‎, 01-13-2008 10:44 AM
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  17. Your Critique is needed!

    I have recently written a short story. I would like to have a sincere critique and suggestions of the members. I here post an excerpt. A dream of a...

    Started by Shahbaz Ali‎, 09-15-2009 12:15 PM
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  18. Your comments, please. Rip away!

    CHAPTER ONE: THE PRISONER IN THE OUBLIETTE "Your execution has been postponed." The man on the straw palette did not move. Had...

    Started by Naomi B.‎, 06-07-2007 12:05 PM
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  19. Your comments, my story

    I've been thinking very carefully about all the feedback you've given me. You're right, Raven, it is to detached. And now I understand why. Sure,...

    Started by Deanna Shoemaker Cabrera‎, 01-06-2010 08:23 AM
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    01-10-2010, 04:53 AM Go to last post
  20. Your choice?

    I'm curious as to how you would handle this situaion. Several years ago, I was a reviewer for THE ARMCHAIR DETECTIVE. It was a lot of fun and a...

    Started by Eva S.‎, 08-17-2002 10:47 AM
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    08-19-2002, 05:28 PM Go to last post

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