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Discuss the craft of writing. Questions about how to string words, sentences and stories together? Ask them here, or post a sample to get an honest critique of your work. This is a public forum.

  1. Duo of destiny chapter one- the stary continued

    Chapter 1 Please feel free to comment. The story continued...... Seven years have passed since the day Jake and Lina first met at the park....

    Started by alvin atwater‎, 02-14-2008 11:35 AM
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    02-18-2008, 11:00 AM Go to last post
  2. To underline or not to underline?

    Hi - a little help would be appreciated. A fashion company is a vital part of my novel. Do I underline the name of the company? For instance, "When I...

    Started by Si D‎, 02-15-2008 07:57 PM
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    02-17-2008, 08:11 PM Go to last post
  3. Please review for readability and tension

    This is page one. Please review for flow and tension. Emelineís belly rolled. Black stubble crawled below Angus Hardgraveís eye patch, across...

    Started by Clayton Lindemuth‎, 02-09-2008 08:19 AM
    4 Pages
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    • Replies: 33
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    02-17-2008, 07:23 PM Go to last post
  4. Crit Me Please

    Ok guys I need some help here. I've read this several times and I need some opinions. Is the diolouge good. To much description. Let me know what you...

    Started by Grandmaster Batzier‎, 02-15-2008 09:48 PM
    • Replies: 7
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    02-17-2008, 01:57 PM Go to last post
  5. Could you please give me a critique?

    This is the first 1,100 words of a YA novel. I posted another version of this around Christmas and I didnít realize how much work that it needed. I...

    Started by Kate B.‎, 02-12-2008 02:18 PM
    4 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 4
    • Replies: 35
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    02-16-2008, 07:08 PM Go to last post
  6. Opinions please.

    This is the second chapter of a sequel novel. It should stand alone. Any comments would be much appreciated; I promise. :) Chapter Two August...

    Started by Carmel C‎, 02-13-2008 06:37 AM
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    • Replies: 10
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    02-16-2008, 11:46 AM Go to last post
  7. Love!

    HI! sorry that i posted this a day late but hey! I don't think anybody minds!:) Love! Love is something you earn and don't get overnight....

    Started by Donatellia Austin‎, 02-15-2008 07:51 PM
    • Replies: 0
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    02-15-2008, 07:51 PM Go to last post
  8. feedback opinon please

    I was wondering how you treat feedback given to you. I have asked someone to help edit the structure of my story. I did get some awesome feedback. ...

    Started by martha shmokler‎, 02-14-2008 06:54 AM
    • Replies: 6
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    02-15-2008, 05:17 PM Go to last post
  9. Does It Set the Mood?

    Okay...I'm planning on putting this at the beginning of my first chapter to, in a way, introduce the storyteller. I thought of it from reading The...

    Started by N M‎, 02-13-2008 04:33 PM
    • Replies: 4
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    02-14-2008, 09:28 AM Go to last post
  10. What would be better?

    Me again! Would it be better for first person or third person in childrens fanasty and/or young adult? Why would it be better? Really what to...

    Started by Donatellia Austin‎, 02-12-2008 04:13 PM
    • Replies: 3
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    02-13-2008, 09:41 AM Go to last post
  11. Is this appropiate?

    I had a very long chapter as prologue to my story. After having posted here I learned it was mainly considered purple, overwinded and loooong. LOL....

    Started by Julian Ruberte‎, 02-12-2008 06:59 AM
    • Replies: 2
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    02-12-2008, 01:35 PM Go to last post
  12. Opening paragraphs (revised)

    I am having trouble showing instead of telling while using the first-person narrative point of view. I have revised my opening paragraphs from my...

    Started by di lynn‎, 02-11-2008 09:42 AM
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    02-12-2008, 12:14 PM Go to last post
  13. Short paragraph critique please

    This is an excerpt from a short story. The back-story is, high school where a shy boy meets girl, and falls in love with her the first time he meets...

    Started by Steven Labri‎, 02-06-2008 11:36 AM
    8 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 8
    • Replies: 71
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    02-12-2008, 08:59 AM Go to last post
  14. The only thing that matters is craft

    The feathers fly from time to time because we create out of the centre of our beings, if it's going well, and then we are critted... We must...

    Started by the cat came back‎, 02-09-2008 08:57 PM
    • Replies: 9
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    02-12-2008, 07:39 AM Go to last post
  15. Looking for comments on opening paragraphs

    A new opening for my novel, Life in the Tabloids. I know it is rough and the genre may not be your cup of tea, but please let me know if you think...

    Started by di lynn‎, 02-08-2008 08:38 AM
    4 Pages
    1 2 3 ... 4
    • Replies: 31
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    02-11-2008, 07:26 PM Go to last post
  16. Yet another new hook for query #4

    Here is my latest hook idea for my query. Does anyone have any positive comments on this latest hook? If no, I would at least really like to hear...

    Started by J. E.‎, 02-05-2008 03:48 PM
    • Replies: 8
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    02-11-2008, 02:59 PM Go to last post
  17. Yes, I have thick skin - help!

    This is the beginning of a novel I am working on. The novel deals with a series of serial killings. Please let me know how I can improve it and...

    Started by Schemer T‎, 02-05-2008 03:55 AM
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    02-11-2008, 12:39 PM Go to last post
  18. Can you fix my hook?

    Recently I posted the hook: If Elissa canít even fit in at school, how will she make it as a Royal Musician in another world? Would it help if...

    Started by J. E.‎, 02-05-2008 04:50 PM
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    02-11-2008, 12:05 PM Go to last post
  19. Would you keep reading?

    Here is a first page from my novel...I am a new writer and interested in hearing your thoughts. Nothing can hurt my feelings. Please be honest....

    Started by Eleanor Bose‎, 02-05-2008 05:19 PM
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    02-11-2008, 11:59 AM Go to last post
  20. What do you think of this?

    This is the beginning of my novel about the Queen. Maybe it will never be published (see my thread about "Famous Heroine" around Christmastime), but...

    Started by Lizzy D‎, 02-08-2008 09:01 AM
    2 Pages
    1 2
    • Replies: 12
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    02-11-2008, 09:51 AM Go to last post

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