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Discuss the craft of writing. Questions about how to string words, sentences and stories together? Ask them here, or post a sample to get an honest critique of your work. This is a public forum.

  1. scene one of my best work. (scene one of chapter one)

    Its called duo of destiny book one: The Black Sword. Genre: fantasy POV: first person What i am posting: Scene one of chapter one. Last time i...

    Started by alvin atwater‎, 05-19-2008 10:58 AM
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    05-21-2008, 05:08 AM Go to last post
  2. not going to name this thread, just a fantasy genre chapter 4 of some story

    CHAPTER FOUR___________________________ The next day, Lina and I, found ourselves standing in a red painted circle at the old train station. Kian...

    Started by alvin atwater‎, 04-18-2008 11:12 AM
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    04-21-2008, 10:08 AM Go to last post
  3. Duo of destiny chapter 1-story being continued from prologue

    CHAPTER ONE____________________________ It was a warm November and usually sunny each day. I was outside practicing my martial arts and about to...

    Started by alvin atwater‎, 02-21-2008 05:59 AM
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    02-22-2008, 05:35 PM Go to last post
  4. Prologue of duo of destiny final remake. I'm sticking to this one, not changing any more.

    This is the one i'm sticking with. No more changes ever. PROLOGUE-______________________________ "Run! Run!" I screamed at the top of my lungs....

    Started by alvin atwater‎, 02-18-2008 09:59 AM
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    02-19-2008, 05:54 AM Go to last post
  5. Formatted and number paragraphs duo of destiny chap two

    (CHAPTER 2: THE TOURNAMENT) Is this better? I even numbered the paragraphs (1)EIGHT YEARS LATER is where our story will really take place, when...

    Started by alvin atwater‎, 01-28-2008 10:46 AM
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    1 2 3 ... 4
    • Replies: 33
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    01-30-2008, 05:57 AM Go to last post
  6. Chapter 2 of duo of destiny is rusty... need suggestions to make it right

    Chapter 2 of duo of destiny is super rusty- in my opinion. Some people like it, but i know it's abit "you know" I was hoping if someone would give...

    Started by alvin atwater‎, 01-28-2008 09:46 AM
    • Replies: 6
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    01-28-2008, 10:47 AM Go to last post
  7. some of Remake of looking into the eyes of a killer(novel now)

    This will also answer the bouncer problem. please comment “LOOKING INTO THE EYES OF A KILLER” (remake) by Alvin Atwater CHAPTER ONE/UNO I...

    Started by alvin atwater‎, 01-25-2008 09:12 AM
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    • Replies: 11
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    01-28-2008, 09:35 AM Go to last post
  8. sample synopsis?

    I'm not sure if this is the best place to post this question, but I am wondering if anyone knows where I can find: a) guidelines for writing a...

    Started by Alyssa Robinson‎, 07-14-2002 02:54 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    07-20-2002, 07:06 AM Go to last post
  9. WHAT IS A WRITER?

    i would love for all you beautiful writers out there to give me your best shot at answering these questions.. What is a writer? Why do we write?...

    Started by Amador Aguila‎, 05-18-2002 03:14 PM
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    05-18-2002, 03:14 PM Go to last post
  10. Is it too soon?

    Don't mean to stir up the pot but: Is it too soon to suggest that the dreaded SoObnoxious.Yustas virus has been eradicated from this site? Will...

    Started by amalgamated steel‎, 09-04-2003 08:07 AM
    • Replies: 5
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    09-04-2003, 09:06 AM Go to last post
  11. Schmoostis: Kiss My Ass

    Hey Schmoostis, why are you such an obnoxious prick? You like to dish your crap out but then when others give it back to you, you cry like a...

    Started by amalgamated steel‎, 08-31-2003 03:31 PM
    • Replies: 1
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    08-31-2003, 06:25 PM Go to last post
  12. Positioning

    I am editing my novel and debating how I should handle the central theme. As I have it now, the incident that drives the story is it at the...

    Started by Amanda Brenner‎, 12-20-2009 02:02 AM
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    12-21-2009, 01:20 AM Go to last post
  13. Quick question, please.

    I am undecided about using all caps for shouted dialog in the following piece. It looks jarring, but it is a shouted command. Am I using this...

    Started by Amanda Brenner‎, 06-05-2008 07:21 AM
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    06-10-2008, 01:45 AM Go to last post
  14. What would you do?

    I submitted a manuscript to an agent who suggested a number of revisions. She said that if I chose to rework the piece she would be glad to look at...

    Started by Amanda Brenner‎, 12-06-2007 11:44 AM
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    12-12-2007, 12:00 PM Go to last post
  15. Advice, please.

    My story is set in Seattle, where I visited many years ago. I am operating with a city map and bus routes I got from the Internet. My question is...

    Started by Amanda Brenner‎, 07-19-2007 02:32 PM
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    07-31-2007, 02:02 PM Go to last post
  16. Part of Chapter One

    Okay...someone suggested I post some of my opening...*sigh*...so here it is... The entire chapter would have been to long...so I tried to cut it off...

    Started by Amanda Lentz‎, 10-14-2007 03:18 PM
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    10-16-2007, 07:27 AM Go to last post
  17. Criticism Please - Forgotten Way

    I normally write books, which I believe I should stick with, and you will also after you read this I'm sure. I tried my hand at poetry...tried being...

    Started by Amanda Lowen‎, 11-17-2006 03:54 PM
    • Replies: 8
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    11-21-2006, 10:45 AM Go to last post
  18. Philosophy - format?

    does anyone else write philosophy? I'm trying to figure out a good format for mine, I think I have one, though im skipping around even in the...

    Started by Amanda Lowen‎, 11-30-2005 02:20 PM
    2 Pages
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    • Replies: 10
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    12-05-2005, 07:12 PM Go to last post
  19. Would this premise "grab" you

    I'm so excited to have found this place :). I have an idea for a story. Does this seem overdone? Exciting? Bland? Intriging? It's a post-apocalypitic...

    Started by Amanda Nikese‎, 07-10-2009 04:39 PM
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    07-14-2009, 12:17 PM Go to last post
  20. Hi, and how's this?

    Hi! I'm new to this forum. I've been reading for a while, absorbing all the wonderful knowledge about writing and publishing, and just really...

    Started by Amanda Nikese‎, 07-08-2009 06:11 PM
    • Replies: 9
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    07-22-2009, 06:12 AM Go to last post

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