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Discuss the craft of writing. Questions about how to string words, sentences and stories together? Ask them here, or post a sample to get an honest critique of your work. This is a public forum.

  1. If anyone has a second, I'd appreciate feedback...

    Hi there, This is the opening scene of my novel and I'm struggling with it. I would appreciate any constructive criticism if you have a minute to...

    Started by Allison Moreser‎, 03-17-2005 05:13 PM
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    03-18-2005, 01:35 PM Go to last post
  2. Quotation Marks

    Hi Everyone, My apologies if I am reposting a question that has been previously posed, but could anyone please tell me whether or not I require...

    Started by Allison Pereslegin‎, 08-17-2004 07:47 PM
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    08-27-2004, 06:11 AM Go to last post
  3. just looking for critique :) first post ever and I\'m a bit nervous!

    So, this is an excerpt from a story I\'m writing. It\'s only the first chapter. I\'m think it would be under young adult or eventually...

    Started by Ally Seibert‎, 10-13-2008 06:35 PM
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    10-15-2008, 06:33 AM Go to last post
  4. Tips and Tricks

    What are the really 'no one told me this, but I finally worked out that...' or 'Thank goodness someone finally told me that...' type tips and tricks?...

    Started by Alphabet‎, 02-09-2005 02:59 PM
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    02-11-2005, 04:49 PM Go to last post
  5. Quick grammar Q

    is it Find out what's happening or Find out whats happening ?

    Started by Alphabet‎, 12-20-2004 04:59 PM
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    12-23-2004, 04:29 PM Go to last post
  6. And Then She Left (Part 2)

    She looked at me with strange eyes, putting the stuff on the basin. I tried reading them but failed miserably.I was sure they were moist and it was...

    Started by Altaf Hussain‎, 12-15-2010 12:19 AM
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    12-27-2010, 11:46 AM Go to last post
  7. And Then She Left.... (Part 1)

    I am writing something after like a month . This might not look very good too but I have changed my style a bit. Please comment. Decisions ...

    Started by Altaf Hussain‎, 12-12-2010 09:39 AM
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    12-16-2010, 04:24 AM Go to last post
  8. The Story Of Love

    Some excruciating noise eventually woke me and before I could realize it was my cell phone ringing it was too late. I didn’t bother checking who was...

    Started by Altaf Hussain‎, 10-22-2010 03:31 AM
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    10-24-2010, 07:25 PM Go to last post
  9. Part 1 of "Luck By Chance" - Please Comment!

    I was walking in lawn full of lush green grass. The lawn was huge, grassy with beautiful mixture of flowers that introduced a unique mixture of...

    Started by Altaf Hussain‎, 10-17-2010 09:22 PM
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    10-20-2010, 02:55 PM Go to last post
  10. help with manual

    Hello, I have this project in hand where I have to write a manual for a school. They are going to provide me an index but I really don't have a...

    Started by Altaf Hussain‎, 10-17-2010 08:37 PM
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    10-19-2010, 09:19 AM Go to last post
  11. not going to name this thread, just a fantasy genre chapter 4 of some story

    CHAPTER FOUR___________________________ The next day, Lina and I, found ourselves standing in a red painted circle at the old train station. Kian...

    Started by alvin atwater‎, 04-18-2008 12:12 PM
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    04-21-2008, 11:08 AM Go to last post
  12. A new (also super improved) and different storyline of duo of destiny; genre:fantasy :according to most people, it's much better

    Duo of destiny book one: wind and water makers born CHAPTER ONE____________________________ I stood outside on a windy day just to let...

    Started by alvin atwater‎, 04-07-2008 12:03 PM
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    04-17-2008, 03:35 PM Go to last post
  13. Chapter two of Sleeping with Death bk1, critique as pleased

    I have also created an improved version of chapter one, i'll post it as a 'reply' if someone wants to view it. thanks, CHAPTER...

    Started by alvin atwater‎, 03-28-2008 10:40 AM
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    03-31-2008, 06:36 AM Go to last post
  14. REMAKE OF DUO OF DESTINY- please read

    OVer the past days i've known my writng to be alittle off the top but that's what an early writer do; so i took someone's advice from off another...

    Started by alvin atwater‎, 02-05-2008 10:11 AM
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    02-08-2008, 09:47 AM Go to last post
  15. Just a question.

    I've got something called Doorance Publishing Co through the mail and i just wanted someone's opinion on it, not that i'm going to be publishing...

    Started by alvin atwater‎, 01-30-2008 06:02 AM
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    01-30-2008, 07:53 AM Go to last post
  16. Formatted and number paragraphs duo of destiny chap two

    (CHAPTER 2: THE TOURNAMENT) Is this better? I even numbered the paragraphs (1)EIGHT YEARS LATER is where our story will really take place, when...

    Started by alvin atwater‎, 01-28-2008 10:46 AM
    4 Pages
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    01-30-2008, 05:57 AM Go to last post
  17. Chapter 2 of duo of destiny is rusty... need suggestions to make it right

    Chapter 2 of duo of destiny is super rusty- in my opinion. Some people like it, but i know it's abit "you know" I was hoping if someone would give...

    Started by alvin atwater‎, 01-28-2008 09:46 AM
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    01-28-2008, 10:47 AM Go to last post
  18. some of Remake of looking into the eyes of a killer(novel now)

    This will also answer the bouncer problem. please comment “LOOKING INTO THE EYES OF A KILLER” (remake) by Alvin Atwater CHAPTER ONE/UNO I...

    Started by alvin atwater‎, 01-25-2008 09:12 AM
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    01-28-2008, 09:35 AM Go to last post
  19. some of Duo of destiny

    This is just another title i've been working on. it's a fantasy. it may have a few typos in it, but dont mind it, feel free to comment here or at...

    Started by alvin atwater‎, 01-22-2008 06:10 AM
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    01-23-2008, 02:07 PM Go to last post
  20. some of "Looking into the eyes of a killer"

    LOOKING INTO THE EYES OF A KILLER (cursing censored) version By Alvin Atwater HAVE YOU EVER been in a situation that leaves you...

    Started by alvin atwater‎, 01-22-2008 06:06 AM
    • Replies: 9
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    01-25-2008, 11:11 AM Go to last post

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