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Forum: Writing Craft Threads

Discuss the craft of writing. Questions about how to string words, sentences and stories together? Ask them here, or post a sample to get an honest critique of your work. This is a public forum.

  1. Point Of View Question

    A few months ago I posted a question regarding tense, present or past, and received a lot of good feedback. Now I have a question on Point of View....

    Started by Kurt Feltenberger‎, 06-03-2008 09:55 PM
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    06-06-2008, 11:54 AM Go to last post
  2. Jigsaw

    Oh what the heck! From what I've read the lot of you give great advice, so I am wondering if you would be willing to critique my first chapter. I...

    Started by Traci McGowan‎, 06-03-2008 08:27 PM
    • Replies: 6
    • Views: 514
    06-05-2008, 02:25 PM Go to last post
  3. Short Story: Heart of A Hero

    Hi there, gang. I've been passing this story around to a few different groups and I thought since I still have a membership here I might as well use...

    Started by Rogue Mutt‎, 06-03-2008 05:02 PM
    • Replies: 9
    • Views: 630
    06-04-2008, 02:33 PM Go to last post
  4. Critque, please.

    I am wanting your opinions on something. As I get further into my book, I find that most of my writing is as it appears below...with lots and lots...

    Started by Gregory White‎, 06-02-2008 05:51 AM
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    • Replies: 12
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    06-03-2008, 05:26 AM Go to last post
  5. Mug Stains?

    You know those circular stains from mugs on coffee tables? Do they have a name or can I just call them mug-stains?

    Started by Heba Jahama‎, 05-30-2008 03:38 AM
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    • Replies: 13
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    06-02-2008, 07:56 PM Go to last post
  6. Query Letter - Waltzing in the Shadows

    For comments/critique WALTZING IN THE SHADOWS, an historical novel of 160,000 words is a tale of intrigue and romance that takes place during 1978...

    Started by Dale Day‎, 05-31-2008 07:56 AM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 495
    06-02-2008, 09:26 AM Go to last post
  7. Synopsis - Waltzing in the Shadows

    HELP! I wrote a Chapter Summary ten pages long at 10pt type and tried to pare it down, ending up with this at five pages - still too long. I am...

    Started by Dale Day‎, 05-31-2008 06:44 PM
    • Replies: 1
    • Views: 377
    06-01-2008, 01:21 PM Go to last post
  8. Recommendation needed

    Can someone recommend a book (novel or author) containing a dialogue style relevant to what I have written below? I hope this is not too confusing....

    Started by stevenlabri‎, 04-17-2008 07:50 PM
    • Replies: 8
    • Views: 521
    05-30-2008, 08:17 PM Go to last post
  9. Revised Chapter

    Hi All, I have been away for a few weeks trying to rewrite some chapters. I am now posting a revised portion of my first chapter for brutal...

    Started by di lynn‎, 05-30-2008 02:58 PM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 437
    05-30-2008, 05:09 PM Go to last post
  10. Rushing the ending...

    Hello, First off, let me thank you for taking the time to help me with this problem. I have written numerous stories over the past few years....

    Started by Brent Ragsdale‎, 05-27-2008 08:41 PM
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    05-30-2008, 01:00 PM Go to last post
  11. Rain First Paragraph

    Rain hated music. He had a reason for hating music, though self admittedly, it wasn't a very good one. He hated it because it made him a tool....

    Started by Miles Bell‎, 05-21-2008 04:59 PM
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 511
    05-30-2008, 07:51 AM Go to last post
  12. Please Critique this flash fiction

    IíM THE TERRORIST I sighed heavily as I watched the evening news that highlighted the newest bills that were passed into laws, effective...

    Started by Daniel Wilson‎, 05-24-2008 07:14 PM
    • Replies: 5
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    05-29-2008, 02:57 PM Go to last post
  13. Mr./Mrs. or First Name or what?

    I was looking for some opinions on how to address during narration the parents in the scene. In my story, the primary characters consist of...

    Started by Tim Underwood‎, 05-28-2008 05:54 PM
    • Replies: 6
    • Views: 607
    05-29-2008, 07:47 AM Go to last post
  14. point of view question

    I have written an enjoyable novel; at least I and the few who have read it think it is enjoyable. I wrote this novel in third person omniscient, with...

    Started by Joy Moore‎, 05-27-2008 05:19 PM
    • Replies: 7
    • Views: 1,257
    05-28-2008, 11:05 PM Go to last post
  15. Hidden Irony

    I am trying to embed secrets* into my novel. I write better under restrictions. I am a born p***taker. I can't help it. "It doesn't work that...

    Started by Michael Scott‎, 05-17-2008 07:13 PM
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    • Replies: 16
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    05-28-2008, 09:33 PM Go to last post
  16. RED PEN NEEDED

    ONE HUNDRED HOURS TO KIL A FEAD MAN (120,000 words) Unedited 1st chapter (partial) Chapter 1 August 1988 ...

    Started by Dan Andreescu‎, 05-22-2008 08:29 AM
    • Replies: 2
    • Views: 486
    05-27-2008, 12:06 PM Go to last post
  17. Looking to Start a Writers' Circle

    Hello! I'm not quite sure if this is allowed - so let me apologize beforehand to anyone who may have a complaint against this type of post - but here...

    Started by Jessica Lovejoy‎, 05-25-2008 04:28 PM
    • Replies: 4
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    05-27-2008, 11:16 AM Go to last post
  18. Help, please

    I'm editing my first draft, and there's a part where my female protagonist becomes best friends with another girl whom she previously thought was...

    Started by Heba Jahama‎, 05-24-2008 05:37 AM
    • Replies: 5
    • Views: 573
    05-26-2008, 06:26 AM Go to last post
  19. Feedback request

    I would like to receive a critique on this bit from my novel. Any comments, both good and bad, are welcome. Is the first part of the chapter too...

    Started by Julian Ruberte‎, 05-25-2008 12:08 AM
    • Replies: 3
    • Views: 541
    05-25-2008, 09:31 PM Go to last post
  20. Writing Widding Invitations website (need help)

    I\\\'m publishing new web site for wedding invitations and i have a small story i want to write as honme page about cards. its a love story with...

    Started by Ali Chalhoub‎, 05-24-2008 07:10 AM
    • Replies: 1
    • Views: 435
    05-25-2008, 08:57 AM Go to last post

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