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VICTORY AFTER ABUSE, at 45,000 words, is the memoir of a little girl who knew too much. I knew what it was like to reek of filth, wearing the same...

Hey everybody! Thanks for all the help. How about now? Big Bertha Evans 106 McCloud Street Berryville, AR 72616...

I've read many comments on my query and also some 'professional' suggestions on where to put the title, word count, and genre. I've found people...

VICTORY AFTER ABUSE, at 45,000 words, is the memoir of a little girl who knew too much. I knew what it was like to reek of cigarettes and filth,...

This needs work, methinks. I'm on panikillers for my hip, and so this effort's prolly not my finest, but it's a start that I'll have later. The hook,...

VICTORY AFTER ABUSE, at 45,000 words, is the memoir of a little girl who knew too much. I knew what it was like to reek of cigarettes and filth,...

I've received lots of helpful suggestions here and on some other sites. I still feel like the query still needs something but can't find a way to...

Attn. VICTORY AFTER ABUSE, at 45,000 words, is the memoir of a little girl who knew too much. I knew what it was like to reek of cigarettes and...

I'm still having a little trouble with my second paragraph, it doesn't feel like it has enough 'punch'. Any suggestions will be most welcome. Also,...

Ok guys, I took your advice from the earlier post and made some changes, adding more detail to the synapse. I'm still not sure about the hook but I...

I have three agents looking at partials and a 4th just asked to see 3 chapters but she \"requires\" exclusivity. Can I send it and note that others...

I went to the sites suggested to me on this thread and learned lots! It's nice to hear some positive. I have put alot of work into this...why do...

Based on comments on my earlier post, I've cut down my query while, hopefully, leaving the most important pieces intact. Please let me know what you...

I can't decide between two hook lines so I added them both for your review. It's only a slight difference. When two couples plan a weekend...

Dear Ms. : In THE LAST SECRET, my 88,000-word thriller, mercenary Kerry Johnson has a new mission: to protect a group of archeologists at a dig...

Okay, so this isn't exactly a life-or-death question. I got a holiday card from my new agent today. I'm waiting on rewrites so we haven't done any...

Hello, My book was just accepted for representation by Writers Literary Agency. My questions are; 1.Has anyone heard of them, are they legit? 2....